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AS Coursework – Film Openings
Name: KARKERA Evie
Two Minute Film Opening: The Bright Side
There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
Footage:
There is great controlled use of the camera throughout with great variety of shots
and attention to framing. Great attention to mise-en-scene particularly
location/costume/performance.
Editing:
Cuts and transitions are excellent throughout clearly establishing narrative. Good
titles to show the conventions of the industry. Pace of opening scene is particularly
effective.
Sound:
The use of music builds tension well throughout the piece. Dialogue can be heard
clearly throughout.
Overall:
An excellent film opening that fits the genre well. Narrative is clear with good use of
genre conventions.
Total 50/60 Level: 4

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production feedback sheet

  • 1. AS Coursework – Film Openings Name: KARKERA Evie Two Minute Film Opening: The Bright Side There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of many of the technical skills. Footage: There is great controlled use of the camera throughout with great variety of shots and attention to framing. Great attention to mise-en-scene particularly location/costume/performance. Editing: Cuts and transitions are excellent throughout clearly establishing narrative. Good titles to show the conventions of the industry. Pace of opening scene is particularly effective. Sound: The use of music builds tension well throughout the piece. Dialogue can be heard clearly throughout. Overall: An excellent film opening that fits the genre well. Narrative is clear with good use of genre conventions. Total 50/60 Level: 4