This document contains a 2 minute film opening assessment and feedback. The assessment finds that the student demonstrated proficiency in technical skills like producing appropriate material, using titles and sound appropriately, and shooting varied shots that attend to framing and mise-en-scene. The feedback notes specifically that the titles and cinematography were nice, and the mise-en-scene props and costumes were great, while suggesting the dialogue sound and volume of voiceover could be improved.

1. AS Coursework – Film Openings
Name: Pinder, Joe
Two Minute Film Opening:
There is evidence of proficieny in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
• Producing material appropriate for the target audience and task;
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions;
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set;
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the
camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-
scene;
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and
appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.
Film comments:
Nice titles.Goodcinematography.GreatMES - propsand costumes.Soundof dialogue couldbe
better.VOcouldbe louder. Cleargenre codes.
Total 47/60 Level: 3