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Essay Structure
Introduction
Body Paragraph #1
Body Paragraph #2
Conclusion
The Introduction
Tell the reader what you are going to tell them
The Body Paragraph:
Tell them
The Conclusion:
Tell the reader what you told them
Question Prompt:
• In some countries, most people prefer to rent their
houses rather than buy their houses.
• What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting
a home?
What are the advantages and disadvantages
of renting home?
• Advantage of renting a house
You can move house whenever you want.
• Disadvantage of renting:
Waste of money because you’re not paying off the house
The 3 steps Introduction Structure:
• 1. Write a broad background statement
• 2. Rewrite the question prompt in your own words
• 3. Write your thesis statement
In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
Background Statement:
For some people, the dream of owning a home
is not possible or is unfavorable
Introduction Sentence 2:
•Rewrite the question prompt in your own
words
Rewritten Prompt
In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than
buy their houses.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
• In some countries, many people decide that renting their home is
preferable to buying it
“Thesis” Statement
•This essay will discuss why renting can allow for
more flexible lifestyle, but it can eventually be
financially disadvantageous.
The 4 Step Body Paragraph Structure:
• 1. a topic sentence
• 2. A sentence where you give a reason or example
• 3. A sentence where you give another reason or example
• A sentence where you summarize your idea
Body Paragraph 1:
• The main benefit of renting a house, rather than buying one , is
because you can move at any time . If you change
The example paragraph shown below comes
from an essay discussing capital punishment.
• The main arguments in favour of restoring the death penalty are those of deterrence and
retribution; the theory is that people will be dissuaded from violent crime if they know
they will face the ultimate punishment and that people should face the same treatment
that they gave out to others. Statistics show that when the death penalty was
temporarily withdrawn in Britain between 1965 and 1969 the murder rate increased by
125% (Clark, 2005). However, we need to consider the possibility that other reasons
might have lead to this rise. Amnesty International (1996) claims that it is impossible to
prove that capital punishment is a greater deterrent than being given a life sentence in
prison and that “evidence….gives no support to the evidence hypothesis theory.” It
seems at best that the deterrence theory is yet to be proven. The concept of ‘retribution’
is an interesting one: there is a basic appeal in the simple phrase ‘the punishment should
fit the crime’. Calder (2003) neatly summarizes this argument when he says that killers
give up their rights when they kill and that if punishments are too lenient then it shows
that we undervalue the right to live. There are other points too in support of the death
penalty, one of these being cost. It is obviously far cheaper to execute prisoners promptly
rather than feed and house them for years on end.
Let’s take the paragraph apart and look it carefully:
• Part 1: The main arguments in favour of restoring the death penalty are those of deterrence and retribution; the theory is that
people will be dissuaded from violent crime if they know they will face the ultimate punishment and that people should face the
same treatment that they gave out to others.
• The paragraph starts with a topic sentence. This gives us a strong argument and tells us what the paragraph is about. We know the
paragraph is about arguments in favour of the death penalty, and in particular, the ideas of deterrence and retribution.
• Part 2: Statistics show that when the death penalty was temporarily withdrawn in Britain between 1965 and 1969 the murder rate
increased by 125% (Clark, 2005).
• Here an outside source is used to support the ideas in the topic sentence.
• Part 3: However, we need to consider the possibility that other reasons might have lead to this rise. Amnesty International (1996)
claims that it is impossible to prove that capital punishment is a greater deterrent than being given a life sentence in prison and
that “evidence….gives no support to the evidence hypothesis theory.” It seems at best that the deterrence theory is yet to be
proven.
To sum up our thoughts about paragraph
development the important things are:
• A topic sentence
• 2. Evidence from an outside source supporting the ideas in the topic
sentence.
• 3. Discussion of the above when these ideas are analysed, evaluated
or discussed.
• So what is a paragraph?
• In an academic text a paragraph is when you put forward an idea,
you support it with evidence, and you come to a conclusion!
Paraphrasing and avoiding plagiarism
• Paraphrasing! One of the most important things in Academic English is to be able
to refer to other people’s writing without copying. In fact, it is one of the essential
skills at university.
• Plagiarism is one of the hardest things for students to understand and to avoid
doing. Unfortunately, many overseas students do not get enough help, and this is
one reason why it happens. Plagiarism is not something that you can be warned
against once, and then forgotten about. You have to learn about it as a topic.
Even lecturers and tutors argue amongst themselves sometimes about what is
acceptable and unacceptable from students. Sometimes students deliberately
plagiarize knowing what they are doing, sometimes they plagiarise accidentally
because they don’t know what is acceptable in western academic culture.
Unfortunately, in either case, the penalties at university are likely to be very
severe, with the very least punishment being scoring a ‘zero’ in that piece of work
without an option to resubmit it.
Reporting verbs
You don’t win any medals in academic writing for being creative! If you read through academic texts you see the same phrases again
and again. For paraphrasing these might be:
• As Smith (2007) points out, November is the worst month of the year in the UK.
• According to Smith (2007), November is the worst month of the year in the UK.
• Smith (2007) claims that November is the worst month of the year in the UK.
• As far as Smith (2007) is concerned, November is the worst month of the year in the UK.
• In fact, depending on your level of English those four patterns might be enough! Students often get into problems because they
have seen so many of these phrases that they start mixing them up and come up with things like:
• According to Smith (2007) states that November is the worst month of the year in the UK.
Linking words
• Here’s an example of a short text with linking words used well:
“An essay comparing and contrasting University education in the USA and Australia”
The Western style of education has gained popularity over the last decade. Many foreign students come to countries like Australia
and the USA to study at university and improve their employment prospects. In this essay I will briefly compare and contrast these
two countries in terms of their appeal to foreign students.
There are many similarities between the two countries. Firstly, they both have a very multicultural population so it is possible to enjoy
food from your own country when homesickness arises. Also, as they are both large countries it is possible to find an institution in an
area with a climate that suits you. Another similarity is that their tertiary institutions have a reputation of quality and excellence in
academia.
On the other hand, there are some appreciable differences. The main one is that education in the USA is much more expensive than
in Australia. However, many students think that it is worth paying the extra money as some American universities have a world-wide
reputation. Furthermore, as the USA has a much larger population there are a wider range of institutions to choose from and
naturally, a wider range of courses.
To sum up, America offers more choice and a more acknowledged reputation, but at a higher cost. Australia offers similar quality but
is cheaper if you can find the course that you want.”
• Good, isn’t it? One of the reasons it is good is the linking words it uses: Firstly, Also, Another similarity is that, On the other
hand, Furthermore…
Nominalisation
• Nominalization makes a text sound more academic. Here's an example sentence without nominalisation:
House prices have been rising steadily in the UK and this has caused difficulties for young people trying to get
onto the housing ladder.
This example sentence has the same meaning but with a nominalization at the beginning:
The steady increase in UK house prices has caused difficulties for young people trying to get onto the housing
ladder.
• Nominalization means changing a VERB into a NOUN phrase:
House prices have been rising steadily in the UK.....
The steady rise in UK house prices .......
This means that you build a long NOUN phrase at the start of the sentence. Here are some more examples:
*Interest rates have been low and this has fuelled the housing market.
Low interest rates have fuelled the housing market.
*The government has introduced a help-to-buy scheme which has also been blamed for causing price rises.
The introduction of the government's help-to-buy scheme has also been blamed for causing price rises.
When you use nominalisation your writing has better academic style. You can fit a lot more information into
your sentences - it is an efficient way of writing!
Writing a literature review: subject and verb
agreement
• ubject verb agreement is an easy thing to check for. Here are some typical student mistakes:
• Smith (2007) point out that the real cost of motoring has fallen lover the last decade.
• and
• Harley et al (1995) argues that the cost of public transport has risen faster than the cost of travelling by car.
• Of course the correct forms are:
• Smith (2007) pointS out that the real cost of motoring has fallen lover the last decade.
• and
• Harley et al (1995) argue that the cost of public transport has risen faster than the cost of travelling by car.
• When you were first learning English all those years ago didn’t you learn things like:
• Mr Brown gets up at seven thirty and travels to work by car. ?

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  • 2. Essay Structure Introduction Body Paragraph #1 Body Paragraph #2 Conclusion
  • 3. The Introduction Tell the reader what you are going to tell them The Body Paragraph: Tell them The Conclusion: Tell the reader what you told them
  • 4. Question Prompt: • In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses. • What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
  • 5. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting home? • Advantage of renting a house You can move house whenever you want. • Disadvantage of renting: Waste of money because you’re not paying off the house
  • 6. The 3 steps Introduction Structure: • 1. Write a broad background statement • 2. Rewrite the question prompt in your own words • 3. Write your thesis statement
  • 7. In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? Background Statement: For some people, the dream of owning a home is not possible or is unfavorable
  • 8. Introduction Sentence 2: •Rewrite the question prompt in your own words
  • 9. Rewritten Prompt In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? • In some countries, many people decide that renting their home is preferable to buying it
  • 10. “Thesis” Statement •This essay will discuss why renting can allow for more flexible lifestyle, but it can eventually be financially disadvantageous.
  • 11. The 4 Step Body Paragraph Structure: • 1. a topic sentence • 2. A sentence where you give a reason or example • 3. A sentence where you give another reason or example • A sentence where you summarize your idea
  • 12. Body Paragraph 1: • The main benefit of renting a house, rather than buying one , is because you can move at any time . If you change
  • 13. The example paragraph shown below comes from an essay discussing capital punishment. • The main arguments in favour of restoring the death penalty are those of deterrence and retribution; the theory is that people will be dissuaded from violent crime if they know they will face the ultimate punishment and that people should face the same treatment that they gave out to others. Statistics show that when the death penalty was temporarily withdrawn in Britain between 1965 and 1969 the murder rate increased by 125% (Clark, 2005). However, we need to consider the possibility that other reasons might have lead to this rise. Amnesty International (1996) claims that it is impossible to prove that capital punishment is a greater deterrent than being given a life sentence in prison and that “evidence….gives no support to the evidence hypothesis theory.” It seems at best that the deterrence theory is yet to be proven. The concept of ‘retribution’ is an interesting one: there is a basic appeal in the simple phrase ‘the punishment should fit the crime’. Calder (2003) neatly summarizes this argument when he says that killers give up their rights when they kill and that if punishments are too lenient then it shows that we undervalue the right to live. There are other points too in support of the death penalty, one of these being cost. It is obviously far cheaper to execute prisoners promptly rather than feed and house them for years on end.
  • 14. Let’s take the paragraph apart and look it carefully: • Part 1: The main arguments in favour of restoring the death penalty are those of deterrence and retribution; the theory is that people will be dissuaded from violent crime if they know they will face the ultimate punishment and that people should face the same treatment that they gave out to others. • The paragraph starts with a topic sentence. This gives us a strong argument and tells us what the paragraph is about. We know the paragraph is about arguments in favour of the death penalty, and in particular, the ideas of deterrence and retribution. • Part 2: Statistics show that when the death penalty was temporarily withdrawn in Britain between 1965 and 1969 the murder rate increased by 125% (Clark, 2005). • Here an outside source is used to support the ideas in the topic sentence. • Part 3: However, we need to consider the possibility that other reasons might have lead to this rise. Amnesty International (1996) claims that it is impossible to prove that capital punishment is a greater deterrent than being given a life sentence in prison and that “evidence….gives no support to the evidence hypothesis theory.” It seems at best that the deterrence theory is yet to be proven.
  • 15. To sum up our thoughts about paragraph development the important things are: • A topic sentence • 2. Evidence from an outside source supporting the ideas in the topic sentence. • 3. Discussion of the above when these ideas are analysed, evaluated or discussed.
  • 16. • So what is a paragraph? • In an academic text a paragraph is when you put forward an idea, you support it with evidence, and you come to a conclusion!
  • 17. Paraphrasing and avoiding plagiarism • Paraphrasing! One of the most important things in Academic English is to be able to refer to other people’s writing without copying. In fact, it is one of the essential skills at university. • Plagiarism is one of the hardest things for students to understand and to avoid doing. Unfortunately, many overseas students do not get enough help, and this is one reason why it happens. Plagiarism is not something that you can be warned against once, and then forgotten about. You have to learn about it as a topic. Even lecturers and tutors argue amongst themselves sometimes about what is acceptable and unacceptable from students. Sometimes students deliberately plagiarize knowing what they are doing, sometimes they plagiarise accidentally because they don’t know what is acceptable in western academic culture. Unfortunately, in either case, the penalties at university are likely to be very severe, with the very least punishment being scoring a ‘zero’ in that piece of work without an option to resubmit it.
  • 18. Reporting verbs You don’t win any medals in academic writing for being creative! If you read through academic texts you see the same phrases again and again. For paraphrasing these might be: • As Smith (2007) points out, November is the worst month of the year in the UK. • According to Smith (2007), November is the worst month of the year in the UK. • Smith (2007) claims that November is the worst month of the year in the UK. • As far as Smith (2007) is concerned, November is the worst month of the year in the UK. • In fact, depending on your level of English those four patterns might be enough! Students often get into problems because they have seen so many of these phrases that they start mixing them up and come up with things like: • According to Smith (2007) states that November is the worst month of the year in the UK.
  • 19. Linking words • Here’s an example of a short text with linking words used well: “An essay comparing and contrasting University education in the USA and Australia” The Western style of education has gained popularity over the last decade. Many foreign students come to countries like Australia and the USA to study at university and improve their employment prospects. In this essay I will briefly compare and contrast these two countries in terms of their appeal to foreign students. There are many similarities between the two countries. Firstly, they both have a very multicultural population so it is possible to enjoy food from your own country when homesickness arises. Also, as they are both large countries it is possible to find an institution in an area with a climate that suits you. Another similarity is that their tertiary institutions have a reputation of quality and excellence in academia. On the other hand, there are some appreciable differences. The main one is that education in the USA is much more expensive than in Australia. However, many students think that it is worth paying the extra money as some American universities have a world-wide reputation. Furthermore, as the USA has a much larger population there are a wider range of institutions to choose from and naturally, a wider range of courses. To sum up, America offers more choice and a more acknowledged reputation, but at a higher cost. Australia offers similar quality but is cheaper if you can find the course that you want.” • Good, isn’t it? One of the reasons it is good is the linking words it uses: Firstly, Also, Another similarity is that, On the other hand, Furthermore…
  • 20. Nominalisation • Nominalization makes a text sound more academic. Here's an example sentence without nominalisation: House prices have been rising steadily in the UK and this has caused difficulties for young people trying to get onto the housing ladder. This example sentence has the same meaning but with a nominalization at the beginning: The steady increase in UK house prices has caused difficulties for young people trying to get onto the housing ladder. • Nominalization means changing a VERB into a NOUN phrase: House prices have been rising steadily in the UK..... The steady rise in UK house prices .......
  • 21. This means that you build a long NOUN phrase at the start of the sentence. Here are some more examples: *Interest rates have been low and this has fuelled the housing market. Low interest rates have fuelled the housing market. *The government has introduced a help-to-buy scheme which has also been blamed for causing price rises. The introduction of the government's help-to-buy scheme has also been blamed for causing price rises. When you use nominalisation your writing has better academic style. You can fit a lot more information into your sentences - it is an efficient way of writing!
  • 22. Writing a literature review: subject and verb agreement • ubject verb agreement is an easy thing to check for. Here are some typical student mistakes: • Smith (2007) point out that the real cost of motoring has fallen lover the last decade. • and • Harley et al (1995) argues that the cost of public transport has risen faster than the cost of travelling by car. • Of course the correct forms are: • Smith (2007) pointS out that the real cost of motoring has fallen lover the last decade. • and • Harley et al (1995) argue that the cost of public transport has risen faster than the cost of travelling by car. • When you were first learning English all those years ago didn’t you learn things like: • Mr Brown gets up at seven thirty and travels to work by car. ?