Media Writing
MC2010
Steve Buttry
Sept. 6, 2016
Today’s quiz
In which of these sentences is punctuated incorrectly?
A. “Do we have a quiz today?” Steve Buttry asked.
B. “We have a quiz today”, Steve Buttry said.
C. “No quiz today!” Steve Buttry shouted.
D. “We have a quiz today,” Steve Buttry said.
Email your answer to brouzan94@gmail.com. with
“MC2010 quiz” as the subject line.
Geaux Academic Workshop
• Wednesday (tomorrow), 5:30-7:30 p.m.
• Holliday Forum
• Pizza
• Help with study habits, time management
• Extra credit: bump one writing exercise up a + or -
Exclamation points
Exclamation points are valid pieces of punctuation. Use
them when you exclaim. Exclamations in media writing are
rare.
Partial quotes
• Partial quotes are better than long, meandering
quotes.
• Quote a single word only if the word itself is
important to attribute to the speaker
Characteristics of a news story
• It tell you something that has happened recently
• What has happened is interesting or important
• Neutral voice
• Informative, not argumentative or persuasive
• Filled with facts
Who? What? When? Where?
Why? How?
Interesting quotes, facts
More info, background
Details
Etc.
Inverted pyramid
• Most important, interesting news goes at top of story,
followed by other facts of diminishing importance
• Developed in Civil War; if telegraph lines went down,
most important information had been transmitted
• In linotype and cold type age, last paragraphs of
stories could be cut easily if story didn’t fit hole
• Gives scanning reader news quickly
Problems with inverted pyramid?
• Inhibits storytelling
• Invites reader to stop reading at any time
Why pyramid style is important
• Important for press releases (editor/news director
doesn’t give you very long to capture attention)
• Helpful in digital age (reader scans quickly, moves on)
• Helpful in mobile (have to get to the point on small
screen)
• Helpful in email newsletter (reader judges in first few
seconds)
Thursday’s guest, Mandy Jenkins

Media writing class slides sept 6

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    Today’s quiz In whichof these sentences is punctuated incorrectly? A. “Do we have a quiz today?” Steve Buttry asked. B. “We have a quiz today”, Steve Buttry said. C. “No quiz today!” Steve Buttry shouted. D. “We have a quiz today,” Steve Buttry said. Email your answer to brouzan94@gmail.com. with “MC2010 quiz” as the subject line.
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    Geaux Academic Workshop •Wednesday (tomorrow), 5:30-7:30 p.m. • Holliday Forum • Pizza • Help with study habits, time management • Extra credit: bump one writing exercise up a + or -
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    Exclamation points Exclamation pointsare valid pieces of punctuation. Use them when you exclaim. Exclamations in media writing are rare.
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    Partial quotes • Partialquotes are better than long, meandering quotes. • Quote a single word only if the word itself is important to attribute to the speaker
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    Characteristics of anews story • It tell you something that has happened recently • What has happened is interesting or important • Neutral voice • Informative, not argumentative or persuasive • Filled with facts
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    Who? What? When?Where? Why? How? Interesting quotes, facts More info, background Details Etc.
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    Inverted pyramid • Mostimportant, interesting news goes at top of story, followed by other facts of diminishing importance • Developed in Civil War; if telegraph lines went down, most important information had been transmitted • In linotype and cold type age, last paragraphs of stories could be cut easily if story didn’t fit hole • Gives scanning reader news quickly
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    Problems with invertedpyramid? • Inhibits storytelling • Invites reader to stop reading at any time
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    Why pyramid styleis important • Important for press releases (editor/news director doesn’t give you very long to capture attention) • Helpful in digital age (reader scans quickly, moves on) • Helpful in mobile (have to get to the point on small screen) • Helpful in email newsletter (reader judges in first few seconds)
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