Masthead 
On my magazine I have included a masthead that allows the reader to know 
what my magazine is called; comparing it to the Kerrang magazine I can also 
see that I have placed it in the centre of the page, which will allow the masthead 
to be in direct eye line of the reader. However I had to change the colour of my 
masthead slightly as the reader would not have been able to see the black 
writing that I had used for the “Rock!!” The colour I used to replace the black 
was white and by doing this made the masthead stand out even more as well 
as this the colour does not look out of place with the rest of the text. 
Cover Image 
On my mock-up of my magazine I have included a picture of one of the 
band members from the Flying Oysters playing and instruments and who 
will appear on my double page. However I could of improved my cover 
image by taking a photo with the band or a specific member of the band 
looking directly at the camera. On the plus side at least my image take up 
most of the space on the cover page like the Kerrang magazine as the 
band take up most of the cover page. On my magazine I have used a 
background whereas this issue of Kerrang magazine has not as I think that 
the cover image would look odd with a background behind it. It will be likely 
that I will use this background on my final product but if my cover image 
looks out of place with the background behind then in will not use it and use 
a solid fill instead. 
Features 
On my rough cut I have included what features are going to 
include in this issue of my magazine as well as the main story 
for my double page spread. I have kept the font the same as 
the one I had used for the masthead to make the magazine 
look consistent throughout and I have also kept the same 
colours as well. When I place my cover image on the page I will 
have to make sure that the colour of the text is still visible, as I 
will be placing the text over the cover photo. On the Kerrang 
magazine they have included what features and other stories 
will be included in the issue. The way they have set it out is 
different to how I have set my features out as they have used 
picture go with their feature which, I have not. Despite this I will 
look into trying to add pictures with my features to make my 
magazine look more professional and to achieve a higher mark. 
Puff 
I have used a puff on my cover page, as it is a good way to 
promote things that will be included in my magazine as it is mainly 
used as a promotional tool for magazine as a way to draw reader 
into what they could win. In my magazine I offer the reader the 
chance to win tickets to the Kerrang tour 2015. In the Kerrang 
magazine they have used a couple of puffs to advertise the some 
content that features in the magazine, whereas I have only used 
one but I could add another one in if I have some extra space. The 
puff s that the Kerrang magazine have used offer the reader to win 
tickets to the Kerrang awards and that there is a pull out cover 
included in this magazine. 
Strapline 
Usually straplines go on the top or the bottom of the 
magazine. On my magazine I have put my strapline on the 
bottom as I had more space in comparison to the Kerrang 
cover page where they have used one at the top and one 
at the bottom. The strapline can be used as a way for me to 
add more information about what other features the 
magazine will include. By looking at the Kerrang 
magazine, which I am comparing, my magazine to I noticed 
that the strapline has a background behind it as a way to 
separate the text form the picture. The background that I 
used was white to link it to the colour of my masthead and I 
used the same front that I have used throughout my cover 
page. By adding this to my magazine it makes my 
magazine look more professional. 
Cover line 
The cover line for my magazine will be placed directly over the 
image, but in a considerate way were the reader will still be able to 
see the image, but they will be able to tell that this will be the cover 
line that goes with the cover image. On the Kerrang cover page 
they have included a cover line that the band themselves are 
holding themselves. I have also though about the size for my font 
for the cover line as I have made it slightly bigger than the rest of 
headings for the feature but not too big that it takes up most of the 
page and looks out of proportion with the rest of the page and text. 
The purpose for me to use a cover line on the cover page is to give 
the reader an in site as to what the double page spread article as it 
will try and drag them into reading the double page spread. 
Layout 
I have though carefully about the layout of my cover page, as I know the conventional 
features that need to be included on the cover page as well as throughout the rest of my 
magazine. When creating my mock up of my cover page for my magazine I followed 
similar layouts of a published magazine such as Kerrang to guide me into achieving the 
best layout for my cover page. When I have been comparing my own magazine to a 
professional high standard Kerrang magazine it looks like I have got the layout correct and 
I have included everything that needed to include on a cover page. 
Barcode and Dateline 
The barcode and the dateline are the essential features that need to be included on a cover page of a magazine 
as the barcode is were the cashier will scan it and it also show ‘s the price of the magazine so that the reader will 
know how much the magazine will cost. The dateline also needs to be included as it will allow the reader to know 
when the magazine was published and that everything featured in the magazine is recent. I have positioned my 
barcode and dateline at the bottom of the page so it is out of the way of the main text, so has the Kerrang 
magazine as they have placed it at the bottom of the cover page as well.

Magazine Cover Page Rough Cut Comparison

  • 1.
    Masthead On mymagazine I have included a masthead that allows the reader to know what my magazine is called; comparing it to the Kerrang magazine I can also see that I have placed it in the centre of the page, which will allow the masthead to be in direct eye line of the reader. However I had to change the colour of my masthead slightly as the reader would not have been able to see the black writing that I had used for the “Rock!!” The colour I used to replace the black was white and by doing this made the masthead stand out even more as well as this the colour does not look out of place with the rest of the text. Cover Image On my mock-up of my magazine I have included a picture of one of the band members from the Flying Oysters playing and instruments and who will appear on my double page. However I could of improved my cover image by taking a photo with the band or a specific member of the band looking directly at the camera. On the plus side at least my image take up most of the space on the cover page like the Kerrang magazine as the band take up most of the cover page. On my magazine I have used a background whereas this issue of Kerrang magazine has not as I think that the cover image would look odd with a background behind it. It will be likely that I will use this background on my final product but if my cover image looks out of place with the background behind then in will not use it and use a solid fill instead. Features On my rough cut I have included what features are going to include in this issue of my magazine as well as the main story for my double page spread. I have kept the font the same as the one I had used for the masthead to make the magazine look consistent throughout and I have also kept the same colours as well. When I place my cover image on the page I will have to make sure that the colour of the text is still visible, as I will be placing the text over the cover photo. On the Kerrang magazine they have included what features and other stories will be included in the issue. The way they have set it out is different to how I have set my features out as they have used picture go with their feature which, I have not. Despite this I will look into trying to add pictures with my features to make my magazine look more professional and to achieve a higher mark. Puff I have used a puff on my cover page, as it is a good way to promote things that will be included in my magazine as it is mainly used as a promotional tool for magazine as a way to draw reader into what they could win. In my magazine I offer the reader the chance to win tickets to the Kerrang tour 2015. In the Kerrang magazine they have used a couple of puffs to advertise the some content that features in the magazine, whereas I have only used one but I could add another one in if I have some extra space. The puff s that the Kerrang magazine have used offer the reader to win tickets to the Kerrang awards and that there is a pull out cover included in this magazine. Strapline Usually straplines go on the top or the bottom of the magazine. On my magazine I have put my strapline on the bottom as I had more space in comparison to the Kerrang cover page where they have used one at the top and one at the bottom. The strapline can be used as a way for me to add more information about what other features the magazine will include. By looking at the Kerrang magazine, which I am comparing, my magazine to I noticed that the strapline has a background behind it as a way to separate the text form the picture. The background that I used was white to link it to the colour of my masthead and I used the same front that I have used throughout my cover page. By adding this to my magazine it makes my magazine look more professional. Cover line The cover line for my magazine will be placed directly over the image, but in a considerate way were the reader will still be able to see the image, but they will be able to tell that this will be the cover line that goes with the cover image. On the Kerrang cover page they have included a cover line that the band themselves are holding themselves. I have also though about the size for my font for the cover line as I have made it slightly bigger than the rest of headings for the feature but not too big that it takes up most of the page and looks out of proportion with the rest of the page and text. The purpose for me to use a cover line on the cover page is to give the reader an in site as to what the double page spread article as it will try and drag them into reading the double page spread. Layout I have though carefully about the layout of my cover page, as I know the conventional features that need to be included on the cover page as well as throughout the rest of my magazine. When creating my mock up of my cover page for my magazine I followed similar layouts of a published magazine such as Kerrang to guide me into achieving the best layout for my cover page. When I have been comparing my own magazine to a professional high standard Kerrang magazine it looks like I have got the layout correct and I have included everything that needed to include on a cover page. Barcode and Dateline The barcode and the dateline are the essential features that need to be included on a cover page of a magazine as the barcode is were the cashier will scan it and it also show ‘s the price of the magazine so that the reader will know how much the magazine will cost. The dateline also needs to be included as it will allow the reader to know when the magazine was published and that everything featured in the magazine is recent. I have positioned my barcode and dateline at the bottom of the page so it is out of the way of the main text, so has the Kerrang magazine as they have placed it at the bottom of the cover page as well.