The document discusses feedback on the design of an album cover and magazine advertisement. It notes that the placement of the artist name created empty space and imbalance. It also found the font color difficult to read against the image background and the wrong font choice for the genre. The typography size was too small to be readable. The goal was to have continuity between the album cover and magazine advertisement designs using the same main image.

1. We found the placement of the artist name
to be awkward and brought aesthetic
unbalanced to the cover since it sat in the
top right whilst the rest of the text sat at the
bottom centralised, leaving a lot of empty
space on the left.
The position of Psychic Psylla instantly
brought attention to itself since it is placed in
the busiest part of the poster. We did not
want this because we wanted the main focus
to be the our new album and not the artist.
the choice of font colour was difficult to
read against the image’s changing colour
pallet. While it was legible against the black
dress, it was incoherent against everything
else.
We found the font Monotype Corsiva to be
quite romanticised which we felt was
unsuitable for our genre and style.
We wanted to use the same image on our
magazine cover as we did on our digipak
cover in order to stick to the conventions of
magazine advertisements and to keep
continuity between the two.
We found the typography’s sizing to be too
small and unreadable.