A workshop hosted by the South African Journal of Science aimed at postgraduate students and early career researchers with little or no experience in writing and publishing journal
articles.
A recording of the workshop is available here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bADqylF8qqA&t=618s
1. 8 June 2022
9:00 – 15:00
@SAJS_Official @ASSAf_Official
PROGRAMME
9:00 – 9:05 Welcome
9:05 – 10:35 How to find inspiration in a blank page – Chrissie Boughey
10:40 – 11:40 How to write a journal article – Leslie Swartz
11:45 – 12:30 How to write for a non-specialist audience – Emese Bordy
12:30 – 13:15 How to avoid plagiarism – Nadia Grobler
13:45 – 14:30 How to spot a predatory journal – Susan Veldsman
14:30 – 15:00 Q&A
How to write for a
scholarly journal
2. 8 June 2022
9:00 – 15:00
Emese Bordy
Associate Professor
in Geology,
University of Cape
Town
SAJS Outstanding
Article Awardee
2021
Nadia Grobler
Online Publishing
Systems
Administrator:
SAJS
Chrissie Boughey
Emeritus Professor,
Centre for
Postgraduate
Studies, Rhodes
University
Associate Editor:
SAJS
Leslie Swartz
Professor of
Psychology,
Stellenbosch
University
Editor-in-Chief:
SAJS
Susan Veldsman
Director: Scholarly
Publishing, ASSAf
Co-Chair, IAP report
on Combatting
Predatory Journals
and Conferences
@SAJS_Official @ASSAf_Official
How to write for a
scholarly journal
Meet the presenters
3. 8 June 2022
How to write for a
scholarly journal
@SAJS_Official @ASSAf_Official
#AcademicWriting
Chrissie Boughey
Emeritus Professor
Rhodes University
Writing: What the
research tells us
4. A lot of research on writing
• Focuses on the products of writing (i.e written
texts)
• It analyses texts
• It tells us what the products should look like
• So, it gives us descriptions of what, for example,
journal articles look like
5. The problem is . . .
• That this kind of research doesn’t tell us about how
to produce those perfect texts
• It doesn’t tell us how to address the actual writing
of a text
6. The other side of writing research
• Looks at writers as they write
• Identifies what writers do as they are writing
7. This kind of research on writing
• Began in the 1970s
• Has increasingly become more sophisticated in the
methods it uses
• Has looked at writers writing
• all sorts of different kinds of texts (academic text, fiction,
reports …)
• in a wide range of languages (including writers using non
alphabetic writing systems)
8. Over time
• It became possible to identify what ‘successful’
writers did and to compare what they did with
what ‘unsuccessful’ writers did
• This gave allowed us to identify successful writing
strategies
• The strategies were then developed into an
‘approach’ to teaching writing
9. So, what did the successful
writers do?
• They wrote for themselves first to find out what
they wanted to say
• They used informal writing strategies (freewriting,
journaling)
• They did not worry about the formalities of writing
(spelling, grammar, punctuation) at this stage
• They wrote in any language
• They used writing as a tool for learning
10. In academic writing
• Finding out what you want to say means identifying
your knowledge claims
• A knowledge claim is a statement about what you
believe to be true
• Importantly, a knowledge claim is always supported by
evidence
• So, finding out what you want to say also means
identifying the evidence
• In the early parts of an article, the evidence will come
from the literature
• In the latter parts it will come from the data
11. Over time
• They moved into writing for a prospective reader
(the reader of a journal, the examiner of a thesis…)
• As they wrote, they imagined the reactions of this
intended reader to what they were saying (‘If I say
this, they’ll say that, so I can’t say this’)
• Writing thus became a process of drafting and
redrafting a text in response to this imaginary
conversation
12. If they got stuck
• They moved back into the less formal ‘generative’
writing they had used to find out what they wanted
to say in the first place
13. Even at the drafting stage
• They did not pay a great deal of attention to the
form of the writing
14. Finally,
• When they thought they had satisfied or ‘silenced’
their reader they moved into editing their text
• Editing involved a process of polishing the text to
ensure it was technically perfect and stylistically
appropriate
15. The strategies used by successful
writers
• Allow us to identify three stages in a writing
process
16. A writing process
Generative Writing Drafting Editing
Focus on identifying ideas
‘Informal’ writing
No concern for reader
Moves into concern for
reader
Imaginary conversation
Drafting and redrafting
Focus on making
meanings stand up to
critique
Focus on form – on saying
things better at a
linguistic level
Focus on technical aspects
of writing
17. Importantly
• Movement between the three stages was not linear
• Writers began with generative writing
• Moved into drafting but
• If they got stuck went back to generative writing
18. Many writers
• Ignore the generative writing (i.e. using writing as a
tool to find out what they want to say)
• Move straight into writing for an audience
(drafting)
• Even worse, they combine writing for an audience
with editing
20. Freewriting
• Identify a question to answer (‘What’s the
relationship of x to y?’ ‘What does xxx really
mean?)
• Set a time limit (3,5,7 minutes)
• Write without stopping for the entire time
• Don’t worry about spelling, grammar, punctuation
• Write in any language
• When the time is up, stop!
• Read what came out
21. A reading journal
• Typical strategies for reading include highlighting,
underlining and making notes
• These focus on identifying important points, on
understanding and remembering
• Academic writing requires us to make knowledge
claims (statements about what we believe are true) and
to support them with evidence
• This is particularly true of the literature review section
• How does highlighting, underlining or making notes
allow you to identify those knowledge claims?
22. A reading journal
• Open a folder on your computer or buy a notebook
• Write a complete reference for everything you read at
the top of a new file or new page
• Sit somewhere comfortable
• Read without taking notes, highlighting or underlining
• Focus on what the author is saying, what claims they
are making and what the evidence is for those claims
• When you have finished reading, write an entry in your
journal
23. Dear Diary . . .
• How does this text agree or disagree with other
texts I have read?
• How does it relate to my article/study?
• What’s interesting about it?
• What do I agree with/disagree with?
24. Drafting: your audience
• Other sessions in this workshop will help you to
know your audience better
• Ask questions like
• What do they know (so what don’t I need to tell them)?
• What don’t they know (so what do I need to tell them)?
• What objections can they make?
• How does this evidence support the claim I am making?
What’s missing?
• Your aim is to ‘silence’ your reader
25. Editing
• Sit alone in a closed room and read your text aloud
to yourself
• You will often hear mistakes you can’t see
26. Remember
• An article is about presenting new knowledge to
your audience
• What are your knowledge claims?
• How well supported are those claims with
evidence?
108. Writing
journey
1
How to write for a non-specialist audience
Emese M Bordy
8 June 2022
How to write for a
scholarly journal
@SAJS_Official @ASSAf_Official
#AcademicWriting
113. Writing
journey
6
What is good writing in
Science?
1. Lucid thought = lucid writing
2. Concise, informative and coherent
3. Audience-centred yet impactful
4. A creative process, not a singular action
114. Writing
journey
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Who are our non-specialist
readers?
1. Decision makers in hiring, promotion, awards or
funding committees
2. Policy makers in science-policy advisory bodies
3. Collaborators in trans- and interdisciplinary
teams for robust knowledge synthesis
4. Family, friends and the general public – as
outreach activity is a must for all engaged
scholars
5. Fellow scientists across disciplines = the readers
of the most read, most trusted, brand-name but
broad scope science journals
115. Writing
journey
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1. Jargon free + concise yet informative,
effective + accessible HUGE
tension: being light on terminology =
verbose
2. Meticulously crafted using the fewest
words for highest impact and clarity =
time consuming
Why is this type of writing
different?
“If I had more time I would write a shorter letter.” Mark Twain
116. Writing
journey
9
1. Polish your everyday written
communication: impactful emails,
WhatsApp messages, Instagram caption,
slash the word-count in short assignments
How can you practice this
type of writing?
118. Writing
journey
11
3. Keep asking: Could I put it more shortly ?
More clearly-structured ?
How can you practice this
type of writing?
“The draft needs fixing, but first it needs writing” Don Murray
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should
contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no
unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that
a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and
a machine no unnecessary parts.“
William Strunk Jr., Elements of Style
BE rigorous to be vigorous
119. Writing
journey
12
4. Form peer-feedback teams to seek
critical comments: it takes ONLY two to
tango…(and only one to eat a mango!)
How can you practice this
type of writing?
120. Writing
journey
13
5. Remind yourself of the fundamentals
- Examine style guides or editorials of respected
journals’ before writing and esp. during revising
- Start your own collection of tips - E.g.,
How can you practice this
type of writing?
https://sites.duke.edu/scientificwriting/
https://www.annaclemens.com/
http://railsback.org/writing1.html
http://railsback.org/writing2.html
https://www.criticalthinking.org//
121. Writing
journey
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1. Polish your communication skills every turn
2. Read a lot, critically
3. Edit, edit, edit
4. Team-up
5. Remember the fundamentals of writing well
Inshort:
122. Writing
journey
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1. Communicating clearly = The paper of your roadmap to success
2. Improves credibility and performance, even among specialists
3. Research visibility for collaboration networks, feedback loops
impact
Whyistheskillofwritingwellimportant?
Summary
123. Writing
journey
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I hope you are more
ready for Your
writing journey
Emese M Bordy
Emese.Bordy@uct.ac.za
Safe travels!
124. How to avoid plagiarism
Nadia Grobler
8 June 2022
How to write for a
scholarly journal
@SAJS_Official @ASSAf_Official
#AcademicWriting
125. What is plagiarism?
Definition of plagiarism (from the University of Oxford):
“Plagiarism is presenting someone else’s work or ideas
as your own, with or without their consent, by
incorporating it into your work without full
acknowledgement. All published and unpublished
material, whether in manuscript, printed or electronic
form, is covered under this definition.”
126. • Journals screen manuscripts for potential plagiarism
Ethical publishing – journals and plagiarism
• Plagiarism policy
• In severe cases, consequences could be:
• Rejection of submitted paper
• Retraction of published paper
• Informing the authors’ institution
• Imposing sanctions (banning the author)
127. Types of plagiarism
•Global plagiarism: Plagiarising an entire text
•Verbatim plagiarism: Directly copying someone’s words, without using
quotation marks or citing the source.
•Paraphrasing plagiarism: Rephrasing someone else’s ideas and
presenting them as your own.
•Patchwork plagiarism: Copying phrases, passages, and ideas from
different sources and compiling them into a new text.
•Self-plagiarism: Recycling previous work that you’ve already submitted
or published
Source: https://www.scribbr.com/category/plagiarism/#types
128. How to avoid plagiarism
in 6 steps….
Adapted from:
1. Note-taking and keeping track of your sources
2. Outline your first draft (original ideas)
3. Identify ideas and details from your source notes (supporting your ideas)
4. Decide which details to paraphrase or quote from your sources
5. Credit the original author (cite and reference)
6. Use similarity detection software
129. ● Note-taking system in place while conducting research and in your pre-writing process
1. Note-taking and keeping track of your sources
Source: https://cdn.scribbr.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/05/Plagiarism-lecture-slides.pptx
● Keep a list of all the sources you consult, even if you’re not yet sure you’re going to use them
● Sources include anything from research papers and websites to multimedia such as videos, images.
● Capture the following information:
● Author/Institution/Publisher
● Source title
● Publication date
● Page numbers of specific quotes or passages
● URL or DOI for online sources
● Access date for online sources
130. • Original thesis statement and main ideas
• Ensure that you have not substituted others’ ideas or words for
your own
2.Outline your first draft (original ideas)
Source: https://writingcommons.org/section/information-literacy/information-literacy-perspectives-
practices/information-has-value/plagiarism/
3. Identify ideas and details from your source notes
• Purposefully selected details from credible, relevant sources to
support your thesis statement and main ideas
131. 4. Decide which details to paraphrase or quote from your sources
Paraphrase Quote
Description
When to use
it?
Tips
Sources: https://cdn.scribbr.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/05/Plagiarism-lecture-slides.pptx
https://indwes.libguides.com/c.php?g=71133p=458617
• Putting another person's ideas in your
own words
• Reader needs to understand or be
exposed to the argument of another
author in order to understand your
argument
• Allows you to clarify a message, make it
more relevant to your audience , or give
it greater impact
• Not sufficient to replace or switch a few
words around
• Recap the essential details without looking at
the source so that the words will be your own
• Online paraphrasing tools to play around with
• Copying the authors’ exact words
• Use quotation marks (‘’)
• Meaning of a thought/idea will
get lost through paraphrasing
• Authors’ exact words make strong
impact
• Language is too technical to
easily paraphrase
• To give textual evidence
• To analyse language
• Only quote when necessary
• Immediately add quotation marks
when you copy directly from a source
132. In-text citations:
• Briefly identify the source within the text itself (e.g. Jones5 reported that…)
• Include it directly after quoted/paraphrased information (not at the end of each paragraph)
• Lead quoted/paraphrased content with signal phrases or informative sentences
• (e.g. according to Jones5 OR Jones5 reported that)
5. Credit the original author (in-text citation + reference)
Source: https://cdn.scribbr.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/05/Plagiarism-lecture-slides.pptx
•A reference list gives the full information of all cited sources (quoted or paraphrased) at the end of a
paper
•Follow a consistent reference style (e.g. APA, MLA, Vancouver)
• Journals have their own preferred referencing style (see author guidelines)
•Reference management software like EndNote, Word Referencing tool
133. 3. Credit the original author (citation + reference)
Examples | Paraphrasing | Citation + Reference
In text citation Reference
SAJS example
Another example
However, a similar comparative study
conducted in South Africa by Chitaka
et al.39 found that paper straws had
lower climate change emissions than
plastic.
39. Chitaka TY, Russo V, Von Blottnitz
H. In pursuit of environmentally friendly
straws : A comparative life cycle
assessment of five straw material
options in South Africa. Int J Life Cycle
Assess. 2020;25:1818–1832.
https://doi.org/10.1007/s11367-020-
01786-w
Recent research has shown that
plagiarism is an increasingly widespread
issue (Smith Thomas, 2018, pp. 34–36).
Smith, T. H., Thomas, L. (2018). New
challenges in higher education. Free
Press.
134. 3. Credit the original author (citation + reference)
Examples | Quote | Citation + Reference
In text citation Reference
Source: https://libguides.newcastle.edu.au/paraphrasing-summarising/example-of-quoting
Short quote is a
sentence, phrase, or
part of a sentence
from the text, which is
reproduced exactly.
[40 words]
South Africa’s National Biodiversity
Assessment of 2018 considers the
coast as including all ‘…terrestrial
and marine ecosystem types with
strong coastal affinities...’18.
18.Harris LR, Sink KJ, Skowno AL, Van
Niekerk L, editors. South African
National Biodiversity Assessment 2018:
Technical report. Volume 5: Coast.
Pretoria: South African National
Biodiversity Institute; 2019.
http://hdl.handle.net/20.500.12143/6374
Block quote is a
longer quote
indented and
formatted differently
from your own text to
identify it is text
taken from an
original source.
[40 words]
Rent-seeking is:
The process whereby
organisations or individuals
expend resources to obtain
actions from state institutions
that allow these actors to earn
‘rents’ in excess of what they
would earn in the hypothetical
scenario of a competitive
market.7
7. Muller SM. Academics as rent seekers:
Distorted incentives in higher
education, with reference to the South
African case. Int J Educ Develop.
2017;52:58–67.
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ijedudev.2016.1
1.004
135. When not to cite?
•Writing about your own experiences, observations, thoughts or conclusions
about a subject
•Writing up your own results obtained through lab or field experiments
•Using your own media (photographs, video, audio, etc.)
•Common knowledge (facts that everyone knows/accepts)
•Common knowledge in a specific field (if you are writing for a broader
audience you might need to cite)
When in doubt – cite!
Sources: https://guides.libraries.uc.edu/integrity/cite
https://www.editage.com/all-about-publication/plagiarism/how-can-students-avoid-plagiarism.html
136. •Compares your document to a database of sources
•Identifies similarity between your manuscript and that of other
sources
•Similarity should be assessed in context
•Free online similarity detection software(*data protection)
•Paid products (iThenticate, Turnitin)
•Institutional subscription
6. Use of similarity detection software
Source: https://libguides.newcastle.edu.au/paraphrasing-summarising/example-of-quoting
138. Plagiarism vs Copyright?
Source: https://scholarworks.duke.edu/copyright-advice/copyright-faq/copyright-and-plagiarism/
Plagiarism: Copyright infringement:
Brief
description
Differences
How to
prevent it
Presenting someone else’s work or
ideas as your own.
Unfair or unregulated use of someone’s
property and the violation of their rights
over it
Ethical issue - you can plagiarise
someone else’s work regardless of
the copyright status
Legal issue - depends on whether the
work is protected by copyright as well
as the specifics thereof
Prevented through proper
citation to the original source of
the material.
• Copying too much of a protected work, or
copying for an unauthorised purpose,
simply acknowledging the original source is
not sufficient
• Prevented by obtaining permission from the
copyright holder beforehand
Tip: Ask for permission when using quotations, illustrations, tables and other materials taken from
previously published works that are not in the public domain
139. Test your knowledge
Do you need to cite your source even if you
paraphrased?
YES
NO YES
140. Test your knowledge
When is it appropriate to quote?
1.If you want to make the reader aware of supporting
arguments
2.If the language is too technical to easily paraphrase
3.Meaning of a thought/idea will get lost if otherwise
stated
4.Options 2 3
5.All of the above 4
141. Test your knowledge
What steps can help you to avoid
plagiarism?
1. Keep track of your sources
2. Paraphrase or quote from your sources
3. Credit the original author
4. Use similarity detection software
5. All of the above All of the
above
142. Closing remarks
• Allow enough time for writing and revision
• Increase your vocabulary by reading on a variety of topics
• Be original – bulk of the work should be your own and not previously
published
• Only use quotes when necessary
• If you had to look it up, you should probably cite it
• Make use of the resources available to you (online plagiarism resources,
similarity detection software, citation software, reference managers)
145. SA Policy on Research Output
2
http://www.dhet.gov.za/Policy%20and%20Development%20Support/Research
%20Outputs%20policy%20gazette%202015.pdf
• To increase the research
output in SA
• To ensure quality research
output
146. The DHET Funding Framework
• The DHET recognises all journals listed in the
– Clarivate Web of Science (Core collection)
– ProQuest International Bibliography of the Social
Sciences (IBSS). The IBSS was added in 2003 to ensure
better coverage of the social sciences and humanities
– SA journals for inclusion or exclusion for subsidy
purposes.
– Directory of Open Access Journals
– SciELO SA
147. Total HE research publication output (subsidy units
rounded off): 1993-2019
148. Increase in number of papers published by SA
authors in predatory journals (2005 – 2014)
9 9 17 30
59
169
384
699 692
850
14 27 27
74 70
132
227 233
139
72
2005 2006 2007 2008 2009 2010 2011 2012 2013 2014
Predatory - strong evidence Predatory - weak evidence
149. Defining “questionable”
There are at least three publication practices which we believe should be
regarded as questionable (if not unethical):
• Unacceptable levels of publication intensity
– by the editor or a member of the editorial board (in their journal)
– by an individual in the journal (for example publication of excessively
large number of papers (more than 2 (?) in the same issue
– “Publication cartels” where two or more individuals (some times also
members of the editorial board) co-author repeatedly in the same journal
150. The perverse consequence of the “Publish or
perish” imperative
The enormous pressure to publish and publish fast — preferably in
the very best journals — influences both authors and editors.
As long as authors are (mostly) rewarded for publishing many
articles and editors are (mostly) rewarded for publishing them
rapidly, new ways of gaming the traditional publication models will
be invented more quickly than new control measures can be put in
place.
ASSAf Report: twelve year of scholarly publishing is SA, 2018
152. 9
“Comatting predatory academic journals and conferences
Study objectives
❑ Define predatory and unethical practices in
academic journals and conferences
❑ Gauge their prevalence and impact
❑ Understand the primary drivers or root
causes
❑ Examine efforts to-date to combat
predatory journals and conferences around
the world
❑ Provide concrete recommendations for a
GLOBAL STRATEGY to address the problem,
that engages all key stakeholders
research
community
and
academies
libraries and
indexing
services
publishers
public and
private sector
funders of
research
universities
and research
administrators
policymakers
155. 12
“Combatting predatory academic journals and conferences
Survey headlines
❏ Researchers at ALL career stages need to be on their guard
❏ Researchers in low and middle income countries are more vulnerable
❏ Some disciplines are more vulnerable than others
- researchers in arts and humanities with predatory journals
- researchers in transdisciplinary engineering sciences with predatory conferences
❏ At least 14% of respondents admit they have used a predatory journal or conference
❏ This equates to over 1.2 million researchers of the 8.8m around the world who could
have used predatory outlets, with billions of dollars of research costs (people, materials,
time) wasted as a result. This requires urgent attention.
160. 17
“Combatting predatory academic journals and conferences
Common features of “predatory” journals
and conferences
❑ They solicit articles from researchers through practices that exploit the pressure on
researchers to publish and present their work.
❑ Features include, but are not limited to:
- rapid pay-to-publish/present models without rigorous (or indeed any) peer review
- fake editorial or conference boards falsely listing respected scientists
- fraudulent impact factors or metrics
- journal and conference titles that are deceptively similar to legitimate ones
- aggressive spam invitations to solicit articles and abstracts, including outside of a researcher’s
own expertise
❑ These genuinely fraudulent practices continue to evolve and are becoming more
difficult to distinguish between low quality, unethical and questionable publishing
and conferencing practices.
164. A spectrum of predatory publishing practices
When does a journal become deceptive?
• When it is lying about its true purpose or misleading authors
or readers about the journal status, costs involved, or
services provided
– Non-existent or improper peer review and misrepresenting the process by which
its articles are selected.
– Mimicry of other journals or websites.
– No or fake editorial board
– Alternative of fake Impact Factor
– Lies about being indexed or members of publishing organisations
– Hides the cost for publishing
– Potentially illegal operations
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165. A spectrum of predatory publishing practices
When should a journal be considered low quality?
– The more markers checked, the lower the quality.
• Typical markers:
• Low quality peer review
• Breaches of good editorial practice
• Services to authors and academia are lacking or poor
• Use of aggressive and indiscriminate solicitation practices
• Unclear about publishing charges
• Lack of satisfactory archiving
• Inactive editorial board
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166. 23
“Combatting predatory academic journals and conferences
Drivers or root causes
• The monetisation and commercialisation of the
research sector, including an academic publishing system
whose proprietary and commercial interests may lead to
conflict with research integrity, with the author-pays
model being especially prone to abuse.
• Quantity-over-quality research evaluation systems,
together with the institutional drivers and incentives that
shape the behaviour of individual academics.
• The lack of transparency (whether fully open,
anonymised or hybrid) in the peer-review process,
exacerbated by poor training, capacity and recognition of
peer reviewers.
168. 25
“Combatting predatory academic journals and conferences
Universities, academies, wider academic
leadership and researchers
To act in concert regarding messaging around predatory practices that diminish
and damage academic life, by
(i) awareness raising of the dangers of predatory journals and conferences
amongst their communities through training and mentoring services;
(ii) championing and setting standards for research integrity and best
practice;
(iii) recognising peer-review as a highly valued responsibility; and
(iv) recovering some ownership of the publishing process and
strengthening its function as a vital scientific service to the scholarly
community