RReesseeaarrcchh aanndd PPuubblliiccaattiioonn 
• “The world is just awesome” (Discovery) 
• “Question Everything” (Discovery Science) 
• "Dare to Explore". "Live Curious". "Think 
again.“ (National Geographic) 
• “Big ideas are nothing unless they're shared” 
(BBC Knowledge)
TTiittllee 
• Should be informative  it summarizes as 
specifically, accurately, and concisely as possible 
what the paper is about 
• Should reflect the significance of the work 
• Include information about the research subject 
matter and the contribution of the paper 
• Avoid the use of unnecessary words  “A recent 
study on” and “Notes on…” 
• One frequent mistake in the title is using 
acronyms and initials
AAbbssttrraacctt 
• A brief summary of the research and its 
significance 
• It is important because most readers will only 
read the abstract to determine its relevance to 
their research interests and to decide whether 
they need to explore the entire paper 
• The abstract also plays an important role as “the 
first impression” to the editor and the reviewers. 
 Thus, it deserves significant effort in polishing 
and editing.
AAbbssttrraacctt 
• A typical abstract should include: 
– Background, Aim, Purpose  An introduction to the 
research area and problem statement  To 
determine, to examine, to describe, to review 
– Setting*  Where the research was held at 
– Materials and Methods  The general research 
procedures and methods utilized 
– Results  A highlight of research findings and results 
– The expected significance in the field  Conclusion
AAbbssttrraacctt 
• Avoid using words such as “for the first time”, 
“new” and “novel” in the abstract and the title 
because the research work may not be new; 
therefore, it should be not be submitted for 
publication 
• Conclusion  High magnitude 
• Use “may”, “maybe” and avoid “do”, “does”, 
“is”, “are” in Conclusion
KKeeyywwoorrddss 
• 5 or 6 words 
• Allow others to see 
• Use the most “searchable” words
IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn 
• The highlight 
• Through the introduction, readers develop 
impressions about: 
– Are you really an expert in the field and know 
what you are doing/saying? 
– Do you know the mainstream, evolution, and 
challenges of the research field? 
– Do you motivate yourself?
IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn 
• Specify the research area 
• The magnitude and importance of the study 
• The purpose and benefit of the study 
• The goal and contribution of the study 
• Review the relevant knowledge and give 
credit to previous works 
• Point out the controversy or limitation in 
previous studies
IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn 
• Implicit sentences of the hypothesis 
• The abbreviation
IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn 
• An impressive introduction, for example, can 
have the following strategy in writing: 
– There is a technological obstacle: the present 
study is aimed to overcome the barrier 
– There is a phenomenon of fundamental interests: 
the present study is to understand underlying 
mechanisms. 
– There is a controversy in previous theories: the 
present study is aimed to prove or disapprove one 
such theory
MMaatteerriiaallss aanndd MMeetthhooddss 
• Setting  conducted 
• Design 
• Declare that all steps in the study ethically meet 
Declaration of Helsinki and particular center ethical 
council 
• Clinical grading, definition or criterion 
• Role, process and procedure of study  Who and How 
• Specific material used  What 
• Statistic analysis (test and software used) and 
significance criterion
RReessuullttss 
• Determines the merit of the work 
• Presenting the data 
• Informative Tables 
• Informative Figures 
• Statistic analysis 
• Significance of analysis
FFiigguurree 
• Tell what the figure is about 
• Tell the highlight 
• Explain what the general observations are 
• Explain the significance by pointing out the 
most important features in the figure 
• Helping the audience to understand the value 
of the information
DDiissccuussssiioonn 
• Explain the result in detail 
• Determines the “new founds” of the work  
to Whom, Where, When, Why its and How its 
work, What its mean  “Its should be…” or 
“its supposed to be…” 
• It should flow smoothly by following the order 
of the tables and figures under statistical 
analysis 
• Compared with previous studies
DDiissccuussssiioonn 
• Be clear among common sense, clinical 
significance and statistical significance 
• Limitation of the study* 
• Puts the results in the context of the 
hypothesis in the Introduction 
• Explain  What is really happen? 
• What is the suggestion
WWoorrddss tthhoossee wwiiddeellyy uusseedd iinn ddiissccuussssiioonn 
• Particularly 
• Obviously 
• Numerous 
• Slightly 
• Consecutively 
• Respectively 
• Successively 
• Sequentially 
• In accordance 
• The concordance 
• Interpreted 
• Predominant 
• Exceed 
• Interestingly
AAvvooiiddeedd wwoorrddss 
• Harmony 
• Awesome 
• Stunning 
• Magnificent 
• Wonderful 
• Beautiful 
• Majestic 
• Astonishing 
• Great 
• Huge 
• Amazing 
• Marvelous 
• Fabulous 
• Gorgeous 
• Lovable 
• Adorable
AAcckknnoowwlleeddggmmeennttss:: EExxaammppllee 
• The authors thank Prof Sjamsu Boediono MD, 
Andika Prahasta MD PhD, Anang Tribowo MD 
PhD, Apsari D Kusumastuti MD PhD, and 
Andrew P Watts MD PhD for their support and 
advice.
DDiisscclloossuurree:: EExxaammppllee 
• The authors report no conflicts of interest in 
this work.
RReeffeerreenncceess:: EExxaammppllee 
1. Pardianto G, Moeloek N, Reveny J, Wage S, Satari I, 
Sembiring R, Srisamran N (2013) Retinal thickness 
changes after phacoemulsification. Clin Ophthalmol 
7:2207–2214 
2. Pardianto G. 2014’s MataPedia. 1st ed. Medan: 
Perdana Publishing; 2014. 
How to cite a source in the discussion is extremely 
important to avoid plagiarism.
Remember 
• Use proper and official English 
• Use (for example): Medical School or School 
of Medicine
TThhee mmaannuussccrriipptt 
• Submit your paper to any international 
accredited meeting 
• Submit your paper to any PubMed, NLM and NIH 
indexed International Journal 
• It is not just about your self actuality 
• It is not just for institution 
• It is about the idea and inspiration 
• Make your work matters 
• Make your own legacy 
• Make it everlasting
LLaasstt qquuootteess 
• "I know that I know nothing“, or "I know one 
thing: that I know nothing“, or “Ipse se nihil 
scire id unum sciat”, or “Scio me nihil scire“, or 
“Scio me nescire“. (Socrates) 
• “In the end only kindness matters”. (Jewel)
www.slideshare.net/pardianto 
www.gedepardianto.blogspot.com 
#SpiritToGive

How to write

  • 2.
    RReesseeaarrcchh aanndd PPuubblliiccaattiioonn • “The world is just awesome” (Discovery) • “Question Everything” (Discovery Science) • "Dare to Explore". "Live Curious". "Think again.“ (National Geographic) • “Big ideas are nothing unless they're shared” (BBC Knowledge)
  • 3.
    TTiittllee • Shouldbe informative  it summarizes as specifically, accurately, and concisely as possible what the paper is about • Should reflect the significance of the work • Include information about the research subject matter and the contribution of the paper • Avoid the use of unnecessary words  “A recent study on” and “Notes on…” • One frequent mistake in the title is using acronyms and initials
  • 4.
    AAbbssttrraacctt • Abrief summary of the research and its significance • It is important because most readers will only read the abstract to determine its relevance to their research interests and to decide whether they need to explore the entire paper • The abstract also plays an important role as “the first impression” to the editor and the reviewers.  Thus, it deserves significant effort in polishing and editing.
  • 5.
    AAbbssttrraacctt • Atypical abstract should include: – Background, Aim, Purpose  An introduction to the research area and problem statement  To determine, to examine, to describe, to review – Setting*  Where the research was held at – Materials and Methods  The general research procedures and methods utilized – Results  A highlight of research findings and results – The expected significance in the field  Conclusion
  • 6.
    AAbbssttrraacctt • Avoidusing words such as “for the first time”, “new” and “novel” in the abstract and the title because the research work may not be new; therefore, it should be not be submitted for publication • Conclusion  High magnitude • Use “may”, “maybe” and avoid “do”, “does”, “is”, “are” in Conclusion
  • 7.
    KKeeyywwoorrddss • 5or 6 words • Allow others to see • Use the most “searchable” words
  • 8.
    IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn • Thehighlight • Through the introduction, readers develop impressions about: – Are you really an expert in the field and know what you are doing/saying? – Do you know the mainstream, evolution, and challenges of the research field? – Do you motivate yourself?
  • 9.
    IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn • Specifythe research area • The magnitude and importance of the study • The purpose and benefit of the study • The goal and contribution of the study • Review the relevant knowledge and give credit to previous works • Point out the controversy or limitation in previous studies
  • 10.
    IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn • Implicitsentences of the hypothesis • The abbreviation
  • 11.
    IInnttrroodduuccttiioonn • Animpressive introduction, for example, can have the following strategy in writing: – There is a technological obstacle: the present study is aimed to overcome the barrier – There is a phenomenon of fundamental interests: the present study is to understand underlying mechanisms. – There is a controversy in previous theories: the present study is aimed to prove or disapprove one such theory
  • 12.
    MMaatteerriiaallss aanndd MMeetthhooddss • Setting  conducted • Design • Declare that all steps in the study ethically meet Declaration of Helsinki and particular center ethical council • Clinical grading, definition or criterion • Role, process and procedure of study  Who and How • Specific material used  What • Statistic analysis (test and software used) and significance criterion
  • 13.
    RReessuullttss • Determinesthe merit of the work • Presenting the data • Informative Tables • Informative Figures • Statistic analysis • Significance of analysis
  • 14.
    FFiigguurree • Tellwhat the figure is about • Tell the highlight • Explain what the general observations are • Explain the significance by pointing out the most important features in the figure • Helping the audience to understand the value of the information
  • 15.
    DDiissccuussssiioonn • Explainthe result in detail • Determines the “new founds” of the work  to Whom, Where, When, Why its and How its work, What its mean  “Its should be…” or “its supposed to be…” • It should flow smoothly by following the order of the tables and figures under statistical analysis • Compared with previous studies
  • 16.
    DDiissccuussssiioonn • Beclear among common sense, clinical significance and statistical significance • Limitation of the study* • Puts the results in the context of the hypothesis in the Introduction • Explain  What is really happen? • What is the suggestion
  • 17.
    WWoorrddss tthhoossee wwiiddeellyyuusseedd iinn ddiissccuussssiioonn • Particularly • Obviously • Numerous • Slightly • Consecutively • Respectively • Successively • Sequentially • In accordance • The concordance • Interpreted • Predominant • Exceed • Interestingly
  • 18.
    AAvvooiiddeedd wwoorrddss •Harmony • Awesome • Stunning • Magnificent • Wonderful • Beautiful • Majestic • Astonishing • Great • Huge • Amazing • Marvelous • Fabulous • Gorgeous • Lovable • Adorable
  • 19.
    AAcckknnoowwlleeddggmmeennttss:: EExxaammppllee •The authors thank Prof Sjamsu Boediono MD, Andika Prahasta MD PhD, Anang Tribowo MD PhD, Apsari D Kusumastuti MD PhD, and Andrew P Watts MD PhD for their support and advice.
  • 20.
    DDiisscclloossuurree:: EExxaammppllee •The authors report no conflicts of interest in this work.
  • 21.
    RReeffeerreenncceess:: EExxaammppllee 1.Pardianto G, Moeloek N, Reveny J, Wage S, Satari I, Sembiring R, Srisamran N (2013) Retinal thickness changes after phacoemulsification. Clin Ophthalmol 7:2207–2214 2. Pardianto G. 2014’s MataPedia. 1st ed. Medan: Perdana Publishing; 2014. How to cite a source in the discussion is extremely important to avoid plagiarism.
  • 22.
    Remember • Useproper and official English • Use (for example): Medical School or School of Medicine
  • 23.
    TThhee mmaannuussccrriipptt •Submit your paper to any international accredited meeting • Submit your paper to any PubMed, NLM and NIH indexed International Journal • It is not just about your self actuality • It is not just for institution • It is about the idea and inspiration • Make your work matters • Make your own legacy • Make it everlasting
  • 24.
    LLaasstt qquuootteess •"I know that I know nothing“, or "I know one thing: that I know nothing“, or “Ipse se nihil scire id unum sciat”, or “Scio me nihil scire“, or “Scio me nescire“. (Socrates) • “In the end only kindness matters”. (Jewel)
  • 25.