The document provides feedback on the design of a magazine spread. It notes that the color scheme gives a classic style but that the red is a bold contrast. The font and picture are praised but it is noted that the image overpowers the article and there is not much text. The overall spread is described as boring and not catching the reader's eye due to the dull colors and small amount of text compared to the large image.

1. • Good colour scheme, gives a
classic, rugged style to the spread.
• In some way less text seems to give a
unique quality to the article.
• The Font is
unique
and
interesting
to look at.
This draws
in the
reader.
• The picture is welcoming to the reader.
• Miles’ clothes seem to match the style of
the spread, with plain colours.
• His suit gives a professional reputation
which matches the style of the article.
• First look at the spread , gives a reputation.
Perhaps there isn't enough information.
• The majority of the text is very small and in
comparison with the quote, It can be seen
as boring and not worth reading.
• The image over powers the article. As an
entire page is devoted to Miles.

2. • The colour scheme matches the picture.
But the red is a massive contrast.
• It may be needed to draw the reader in as
it doesn’t match but lightens the article
up.
• There isn’t
too much
going on in
the article to
distract the
reader.
• The image is
large, and the
model is
looking at the
camera. This
welcomes the
reader.
• The text is very small in comparison to the
image. This can make the reader not want
to read the article.
• The overall spread is very boring. The
colour scheme is not vey interesting.
• The image
overpowers
the article.
• There isn't
much to catch
the readers
eye.
• The headline is
out of the
way, the
reader may not
even notice it

3. • The colour scheme matches the model to
the extent it is plain and dull, it does work
though.
• The image isn't welcoming as the model
may or may not be looking at the camera.
This is due to the poor lighting.
• The Headline and sub heading are both
clear and easily readable.
• There is not a lot of text.
• The article isn't
very clear as the
background an
the font colour
are similar.
• The colour
scheme is boring
and doesn’t
catch the
reader’s eye.