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Feature Photo:
Shows one of the facilities available
at the school and also shows a
student using these facilities proving
that the library is accessible to
students.
Things to improve:
• Have a less busy feature photo have
more focus on what you are trying to
get through
• Less colours
• Have a bigger photo so again it focuses
on what you want to get through
Masthead: ‘True De
Mag’ states the name of the
magazine in big bold characters so it
is visible to the customers.
Things to improve:
• Have a boulder colour so it stands
out more
• Maybe larger in size
• Be in a better positioning
Plug: On the left hand side I
have pictures which show the story’s
that will be in this issue of ‘True De
Mag’.
Things to improve:
• Have more information
• Be in a bolder more noticeable font
• Better positioning
Plug: At the bottom of the
page it shows all the story’s that will
be in this week’s True De Mag
magazine. The rather large numbers
show what page you can find these
certain Story’s on.
Puff: ‘More news Read on…’ this
is used to boost its status and want
you to read on I also have used ‘Just
the way you like it, only at True De
Mag!’ this increases its status makes
you think you can only get the news
given in a True D Mag no were else.
Things to improve:
• Have a better quote
• Better positioning
• Colours the same so you know
both of them are puffs
Filler: The barcode in the
bottom right is a vital piece of info
but it has also been used as a filler to
fill an empty space in the front cover.
Things to improve:
• Have more of them
Negative space:
Unfortunately there is quite a bit of negative
space on the front of my magazine cover, this
can be improved by using more fillers and
spreading the contents of the page around
more.
Things to improve:
• Have more fillers
• Fill the negative space with information
Mise-en-scene:
The photo used shows the map of the
school so if you are reading the
magazine to can always refer to the
map and without even going to the
school you can know were certain
classes are and be aware of the
schools surroundings this shows
meaning.
Things to improve:
• Have it bigger
• More detail
Mode of Address:
The mode of address of the magazines
front and contents page is quite chatty
and informal which shows the readers
what the contents will be like.
Things to improve:
• Have it formal
• Have it more informal
• Have it less chatty
Sell: On the front cover a sell
has been used ‘Your news just the
way you like it, only at Tre De Mag’
this makes the reader want to read
the magazine and makes this
magazine stand out from the others,
the sell quote promotes the
magazine.
Things to improve:
• Bolder
• Bigger
• Shorter slogan
Tools used
Tools I could use
I used this tool to
move the picture
round and move one
picture onto the other
The magic wand tool
The lasso tool
The crop tool
I used this tool Adobe
Photoshop
I used this tool to type
text on top of my
work for the title of
the mag etc…

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School magazine evaluation

  • 1. Feature Photo: Shows one of the facilities available at the school and also shows a student using these facilities proving that the library is accessible to students. Things to improve: • Have a less busy feature photo have more focus on what you are trying to get through • Less colours • Have a bigger photo so again it focuses on what you want to get through
  • 2. Masthead: ‘True De Mag’ states the name of the magazine in big bold characters so it is visible to the customers. Things to improve: • Have a boulder colour so it stands out more • Maybe larger in size • Be in a better positioning
  • 3. Plug: On the left hand side I have pictures which show the story’s that will be in this issue of ‘True De Mag’. Things to improve: • Have more information • Be in a bolder more noticeable font • Better positioning Plug: At the bottom of the page it shows all the story’s that will be in this week’s True De Mag magazine. The rather large numbers show what page you can find these certain Story’s on.
  • 4. Puff: ‘More news Read on…’ this is used to boost its status and want you to read on I also have used ‘Just the way you like it, only at True De Mag!’ this increases its status makes you think you can only get the news given in a True D Mag no were else. Things to improve: • Have a better quote • Better positioning • Colours the same so you know both of them are puffs
  • 5. Filler: The barcode in the bottom right is a vital piece of info but it has also been used as a filler to fill an empty space in the front cover. Things to improve: • Have more of them
  • 6. Negative space: Unfortunately there is quite a bit of negative space on the front of my magazine cover, this can be improved by using more fillers and spreading the contents of the page around more. Things to improve: • Have more fillers • Fill the negative space with information
  • 7. Mise-en-scene: The photo used shows the map of the school so if you are reading the magazine to can always refer to the map and without even going to the school you can know were certain classes are and be aware of the schools surroundings this shows meaning. Things to improve: • Have it bigger • More detail
  • 8. Mode of Address: The mode of address of the magazines front and contents page is quite chatty and informal which shows the readers what the contents will be like. Things to improve: • Have it formal • Have it more informal • Have it less chatty
  • 9. Sell: On the front cover a sell has been used ‘Your news just the way you like it, only at Tre De Mag’ this makes the reader want to read the magazine and makes this magazine stand out from the others, the sell quote promotes the magazine. Things to improve: • Bolder • Bigger • Shorter slogan
  • 10. Tools used Tools I could use I used this tool to move the picture round and move one picture onto the other The magic wand tool The lasso tool The crop tool I used this tool Adobe Photoshop I used this tool to type text on top of my work for the title of the mag etc…