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Due Week 7 and worth 100 points Revise the two (2) emails
below to remove problematic content and help these students
construct polite, effective email messages instead. Scenario 1:
Susan is unhappy with her grade in her college class. She wants
to clarify what she can do to improve in the course. She also
feels like venting her frustrations to her professor due to the
many hours she is spending studying and writing papers (which
may or may not be a good idea). She decides to email her
professor; however, before she hits SEND, she asks you, her
friend, to take a look at the email. Reading the email, you note
a lack of civility, polarizing language, and other unethical
language (given the context). Help Susan rewrite her email, so
she can express her concerns over her poor grade politely and
ask for help from the professor. Susan’s Email: (No greeting) I
want to know why my grade was so bad. I spent hours finding
sources and writing that paper and it was graded unfair. My
friend wrote her paper the night before it was due and got a
better grade. I know most professors grade hard but this is
ridiculous. I felt good when I submitted the paper but now I feel
like crap. I guess I am going to fail. (No closing) Scenario 2:
Don is worried about passing his college class due to some low
grades. He wants to ask his professor for help to pass the class.
He decides to email his professor; however, before he hits
SEND, he decides to ask you, his friend, to take a look at the
email. Reading the email, you note a lack of civility, poor
manners, and poor grammar in Don’s email. Help Don rewrite
the email, so he can express his concerns and appropriately seek
help from the professor. Don’s Email: (No greeting) Yo teach.
I dunno no way to pass this class. What I gotta do to pass? (No
closing) Instructions: 1.Revise both emails. 2.Create two (2)
new email messages of one to two (1-2) paragraphs each for a
total of two to four (2-4) paragraphs. 3.Create an appropriate
greeting and closing for each email. 4.Target the appropriate
professional audience. 5.Use appropriate language for
professional audience. 6.Use appropriate email formatting.
7.Follow appropriate netiquette rules for electronic
communication. 8.Meet the 100-to-200-word minimum
requirement for each email revision. 9.Use correct sentence
mechanics, grammar, spelling, punctuation, and style. Your
assignment must follow these formatting requirements: •Be
typed, single-spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12),
with 1-inch margins on all sides. Check with your professor for
any additional instructions. •Include a cover page containing the
title of the assignment, student’s name, professor’s name,
course, and date. (The cover page is not included in the required
page count.) The specific course learning outcomes associated
with this assignment are: •Demonstrate understanding of the
basic fundamentals of communication. •Develop and practice
communication skills, including skills in verbal, nonverbal,
listening, writing, interpersonal, perception, and critical
thinking as appropriate for the audience. •Relate to the
interpersonal and organizational dynamics that affect
communication in organizations. •Analyze and assess effective
communication. •Use correct sentence mechanics, grammar,
spelling, punctuation, and style. •Use technology and
information resources to research issues in communications.
•Write clearly and concisely about communications using proper
writing mechanics.

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Due Week 7 and worth 100 points  Revise the two (2) emails below to

  • 1. Due Week 7 and worth 100 points Revise the two (2) emails below to remove problematic content and help these students construct polite, effective email messages instead. Scenario 1: Susan is unhappy with her grade in her college class. She wants to clarify what she can do to improve in the course. She also feels like venting her frustrations to her professor due to the many hours she is spending studying and writing papers (which may or may not be a good idea). She decides to email her professor; however, before she hits SEND, she asks you, her friend, to take a look at the email. Reading the email, you note a lack of civility, polarizing language, and other unethical language (given the context). Help Susan rewrite her email, so she can express her concerns over her poor grade politely and ask for help from the professor. Susan’s Email: (No greeting) I want to know why my grade was so bad. I spent hours finding sources and writing that paper and it was graded unfair. My friend wrote her paper the night before it was due and got a better grade. I know most professors grade hard but this is ridiculous. I felt good when I submitted the paper but now I feel like crap. I guess I am going to fail. (No closing) Scenario 2: Don is worried about passing his college class due to some low grades. He wants to ask his professor for help to pass the class. He decides to email his professor; however, before he hits SEND, he decides to ask you, his friend, to take a look at the email. Reading the email, you note a lack of civility, poor manners, and poor grammar in Don’s email. Help Don rewrite the email, so he can express his concerns and appropriately seek help from the professor. Don’s Email: (No greeting) Yo teach. I dunno no way to pass this class. What I gotta do to pass? (No closing) Instructions: 1.Revise both emails. 2.Create two (2) new email messages of one to two (1-2) paragraphs each for a total of two to four (2-4) paragraphs. 3.Create an appropriate greeting and closing for each email. 4.Target the appropriate professional audience. 5.Use appropriate language for professional audience. 6.Use appropriate email formatting.
  • 2. 7.Follow appropriate netiquette rules for electronic communication. 8.Meet the 100-to-200-word minimum requirement for each email revision. 9.Use correct sentence mechanics, grammar, spelling, punctuation, and style. Your assignment must follow these formatting requirements: •Be typed, single-spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with 1-inch margins on all sides. Check with your professor for any additional instructions. •Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, student’s name, professor’s name, course, and date. (The cover page is not included in the required page count.) The specific course learning outcomes associated with this assignment are: •Demonstrate understanding of the basic fundamentals of communication. •Develop and practice communication skills, including skills in verbal, nonverbal, listening, writing, interpersonal, perception, and critical thinking as appropriate for the audience. •Relate to the interpersonal and organizational dynamics that affect communication in organizations. •Analyze and assess effective communication. •Use correct sentence mechanics, grammar, spelling, punctuation, and style. •Use technology and information resources to research issues in communications. •Write clearly and concisely about communications using proper writing mechanics.