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Week 7 Assignment 4: Email Revisions Due Week 7 and worth
100 points
Revise the two (2) emails below to remove problematic content
and help these students construct polite, effective email
messages instead.
Scenario 1: Susan is unhappy with her grade in her college
class. She wants to clarify what she can do to improve in the
course. She also feels like venting her frustrations to her
professor due to the many hours she is spending studying and
writing papers (which may or may not be a good idea). She
decides to email her professor; however, before she hits SEND,
she asks you, her friend, to take a look at the email.
Reading the email, you note a lack of civility, polarizing
language, and other unethical language (given the context).
Help Susan rewrite her email, so she can express her concerns
over her poor grade politely and ask for help from the professor.
Susan’s Email: (No greeting) I want to know why my grade
was so bad. I spent hours finding sources and writing that paper
and it was graded unfair. My friend wrote her paper the night
before it was due and got a better grade. I know most professors
grade hard but this is ridiculous. I felt good when I submitted
the paper but now I feel like crap. I guess I am going to fail.
(No closing) Scenario 2: Don is worried about passing his
college class due to some low grades. He wants to ask his
professor for help to pass the class. He decides to email his
professor; however, before he hits SEND, he decides to ask you,
his friend, to take a look at the email.
Reading the email, you note a lack of civility, poor manners,
and poor grammar in Don’s email. Help Don rewrite the email,
so he can express his concerns and appropriately seek help from
the professor.
Don’s Email: (No greeting) Yo teach. I dunno no way to pass
this class. What I gotta do to pass? (No closing) Instructions:
Create two (2) new email messages of one to two (1-2)
paragraphs each for a total of two to four (2-4) paragraphs.
Create an appropriate greeting and closing for each email.
Target the appropriate professional audience. Use appropriate
language for professional audience.

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  • 1. Week 7 Assignment 4: Email Revisions Due Week 7 and worth 100 points Revise the two (2) emails below to remove problematic content and help these students construct polite, effective email messages instead. Scenario 1: Susan is unhappy with her grade in her college class. She wants to clarify what she can do to improve in the course. She also feels like venting her frustrations to her professor due to the many hours she is spending studying and writing papers (which may or may not be a good idea). She decides to email her professor; however, before she hits SEND, she asks you, her friend, to take a look at the email. Reading the email, you note a lack of civility, polarizing language, and other unethical language (given the context). Help Susan rewrite her email, so she can express her concerns over her poor grade politely and ask for help from the professor. Susan’s Email: (No greeting) I want to know why my grade was so bad. I spent hours finding sources and writing that paper and it was graded unfair. My friend wrote her paper the night before it was due and got a better grade. I know most professors grade hard but this is ridiculous. I felt good when I submitted the paper but now I feel like crap. I guess I am going to fail. (No closing) Scenario 2: Don is worried about passing his college class due to some low grades. He wants to ask his professor for help to pass the class. He decides to email his professor; however, before he hits SEND, he decides to ask you, his friend, to take a look at the email.
  • 2. Reading the email, you note a lack of civility, poor manners, and poor grammar in Don’s email. Help Don rewrite the email, so he can express his concerns and appropriately seek help from the professor. Don’s Email: (No greeting) Yo teach. I dunno no way to pass this class. What I gotta do to pass? (No closing) Instructions: Create two (2) new email messages of one to two (1-2) paragraphs each for a total of two to four (2-4) paragraphs. Create an appropriate greeting and closing for each email. Target the appropriate professional audience. Use appropriate language for professional audience.