This document discusses feedback received on a draft double page magazine spread about Bloom and the revisions made in response. The feedback suggested adding secondary images, moving the page numbers to the end, flipping the main image to the other side for better structure, moving a pull quote to break up text blocks, and anchoring the main image. The final spread incorporated this feedback to create a more visually pleasing layout, enhanced the main image to make Bloom look more attractive, and maintained consistency with the magazine's style.