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Double page spread
audience feedback
By Amber Gardner
• This was my first
draft of my double
page spread of
Bloom which again
was influenced by
existing pop
magazines We Love
Pop and Top Of The
Pops.
Audience feedback
• You need some secondary images
to make it more appealing a
young audience
• Move the page numbers to the
end of the page
• Maybe horizontally flip the main
image to the other side of the
page to structure it better
• Move the pull quote in the middle
of the text to break it up more
and reduce block text
• Anchor the main image to provide
clarity
Final double page spread
• I have followed my audience
feedback to form a new
effective layout which is more
visually pleasing. Also I have
manipulated the main image by
enhancing her makeup and air
brushing her armpit to make
her look more attractive to
readers. I have also followed the
house style of my front cover
and contents page by using a
similar colour scheme and same
fonts

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Double page spread audience feedback

  • 1. Double page spread audience feedback By Amber Gardner
  • 2. • This was my first draft of my double page spread of Bloom which again was influenced by existing pop magazines We Love Pop and Top Of The Pops.
  • 3. Audience feedback • You need some secondary images to make it more appealing a young audience • Move the page numbers to the end of the page • Maybe horizontally flip the main image to the other side of the page to structure it better • Move the pull quote in the middle of the text to break it up more and reduce block text • Anchor the main image to provide clarity
  • 4. Final double page spread • I have followed my audience feedback to form a new effective layout which is more visually pleasing. Also I have manipulated the main image by enhancing her makeup and air brushing her armpit to make her look more attractive to readers. I have also followed the house style of my front cover and contents page by using a similar colour scheme and same fonts