The document summarizes revisions across 4 drafts of a film presentation. Draft 1 lacked organization and missing information. Draft 2 organized the presentation better but was still missing some slides. Draft 3 included most necessary slides but some needed more details. Draft 4 represented the most organized, complete version with separate, fully developed slides covering all necessary elements like target audience, characters, locations, and genre/conventions.

1. Draft 1 Draft 2 Draft 3 Draft 4
We didn’t have 3 ideas as an We have 4 long ideas in one slide, The slides for the ideas are much The ideas are all in separate slides
individual to work to the final idea too much text better with 1 slide each of the ideas, and have an evaluation
but no evaluation – www/ebi
The whole presentation are The presentation is still not The presentation is nearly organised, The presentation is much more
incomplete, and not organised organised but missing a slide ‘G’ organised with all of the slides are
finished
There is no Target Research slide – There is a target audience slide but Have research for the target There is research about target
researching the audiences, basic information audience and the interview, but audience and different slides for the
questionnaire interview is hard to read, graph is interviews
hard to read
There are no slides for the location, Have the slides with pictures of the Have slides of the characters and Have own slides for the
props, characters, introducing the location, props, actors, and actors, but it’s all in one slide and character/actor, props, location,
actors characters but no annotation not in different sectors each. Have costume, with pictures and
pictures and annotation. There is annotation
slides for props with annotation, and
location with no annotation
There is script for the opening There is script for the opening There is script for the opening The script for the opening sequence
sequence but wrong structure sequence but wrong structure sequence but wrong structure is all in correct structure
There is no Film Distribution There is no film distribution slide There is a film distribution slide, but There is a film distribution slide with
the company is too big – must find a the draft two of the film distributors
small British film distribution which is a British Small distribution
company company
There is no fonts slide for the There is no fonts slide for the credits There is a font slide, but the font is There is a font slide with much
credits and titles and titles too basic and must choose a better better chosen font for our title and
font and chose inspirational fonts credits. Chosen font is Harlow Solid
from opening sequence of different Italicand added another slide for
films the inspirational fonts from other
films and screenshots.
There is no genre and convention There is no genre and convention Have genre and convention slides Have a diagram for the genre slide
slides with research to know that slides with research to know that with diagrams, but its basic and a table for the convention slides
you understand your genre and you understand your genre and what information – must make a table with explanation of how are we

2. what the conventions are the conventions are with the different conventions of going to develop the conventions for
your chosen genre and put different our Opening Sequence, and added
films with it films to back it up