The document provides feedback on a finished music video. It summarizes positive comments praising the creative camerawork, editing, use of mise-en-scene, and how it suits the genre. Some comments note it may be too dark at times. Overall, the feedback indicates the video successfully challenged conventions, matched its target audience, and had an interpretive narrative while communicating how society portrays teenagers. A few comments suggested the watch sequence could be clearer and the video might benefit from more lighting.