The document discusses a student's speech and areas for improvement. The student acknowledges that their speech could have been more organized and had a more original opening. They used paragraphs well but could have added more detail. Their arguments were supported but not drawn to a clear conclusion. The student recognizes their voice could have been louder in delivery and that others put more effort into their speeches. They prepared with paragraphs and note cards but get nervous giving speeches.

2. Target Mark Comment Write with appropriate structure and organisation. 1 2 3 4 5 I think that made my speech orgnisd but I could make it mor orgnisd. Use quality openings 1 2 3 4 5 My opening is origul and I could of made it not quit origun but it is still ok. Use paragraphs effectively 1 2 3 4 5 I used my paragraphs wisly because I put lots of info in my paragrphs. Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5 I rely rote with good deetaul because I took my time and put lots of efti in to my speech. Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively 1 2 3 4 5 My arguments were baked up with info.

4. In what way(s) do you think you could have improved the delivery of your speech? I think I could of made my delivery beter by making my voys lowder. After watching everyone’s speech, what were some things that stood out in your mind? They were more efert in to the speeches then me. 3.How did you prepare for the speech? I peper my speech with parografes and qucardes.

5. 4. What were two things that you think were ‘fantastic’ about your speech? The write of it was well writun and sed. 5. How do you feel about giving speeches? I think it is hard because I get nurves.