This document provides teacher feedback on student blogs for a media assessment. It outlines the typical mark ranges, highlights areas that need improvement, and provides guidance on strengthening certain elements of the blogs. The teacher requests revisions to inconsistent formatting, incomplete content, and weak presentations in target audience and conventions. Students are asked to add more evidence of their media production process, include reflections and audience feedback, and properly document alterations made between drafts. Specific posts are flagged for deletion, and students must submit change logs to qualify for a re-mark.