The document critiques James Potts' pitch for a zombie film idea where a group of college students are trapped in a mansion surrounded by zombies. The critique notes that the idea seems plausible and realistic compared to other pitches, as it does not require as many special effects. However, the critique also notes that James did not provide a storyboard to help visualize the film, and that while he had a script, it did not help explain the idea very well. The document concludes by reflecting on the critiquer's own pitch performance, noting areas for improvement such as providing more context for the inspirations.