BA 2196 Section 008/Teresa Cirillo Writing Assignment 2 – Internship letter Job posting: Federal Business Technology Analyst Summer Scholar Intern, Deloitte Consulting, LLP Requirements Qualifications for our Federal BTA Summer Scholar Intern Program include: *A strong interest in beginning a career in business technology consulting upon receiving your undergraduate degree *Junior standing in a full-time academic program with a target graduation date between December 2013 and June 2014 *Availability to participate, full-time, for approximately 10 weeks in the June to August 2013 time period *3.4 cumulative GPA strongly preferred with equal or stronger performance in your major(s) *Participation in extracurricular activities *Experience, interest and aptitude in technology *Sharp analytical mind *Demonstrated leadership abilities   *Excellent communication and interpersonal skills   *Willingness to travel (not all Summer Scholars will travel during their internship) *U.S. Citizenship *Ability to acquire U.S. Security Clearance The full posting can be found at: http://foxschool.experience.com/er/stu/opportunities/job_profile.jsp?job_hnd=29320013&affHnd=1560&search_id=32945376-1347815459417&fromAction=ActiveSearchResults&useGadgetSettings=false EXAMPLE FOLLOW THIS BUT DO NOT TAKE ITS WORDS, USE YOUR OWN, BUT SAME STRUCTURE. THANK YOU Troy T. Anderson 1750 Tysons Boulevard McLean, VA 22102-4219 Dear Mr. We had the opportunity to speak at the Deloitte information session held for the Association for Information Systems (AIS) at Temple University, and I would like to express my interest in becoming a Federal Business Technology Analyst Summer Scholar Intern. Based upon your intern selection criteria, my technological aptitude, my analytical thinking skills, and my leadership abilities make me a perfect fit for this opportunity and your company. My technological aptitude can be measured through my knowledge of coding languages, my web development experience, and my knowledge of hardware and operating systems. I currently know three coding languages: HTML, C++, and C#, and I am in the process of learning PHP. I also have web-development experience from creating my current e-portfolio and coordinating with the former VP of IT in AIS to create the current AIS website. While at SAP, I learned about the hardware components of IBM, Sun, HP, and Dell servers, and utilized Linux, Unix, and Windows OS. My current technological skills fit well with the requirements of a BTA Summer Scholar Intern. My analytical thinking skills were put to the test during a functional mailbox, group mailbox, improvement project when I was a business IS intern at Dow Chemical. I was assigned a project to provide recommendations for improvement on the functional mailbox provisioning process. In order to do this I completed in depth analysis of the current system by completing the creation process myself, checking for inconsistencies, and interviewing owners and user ...

1. BA 2196 Section 008/Teresa Cirillo
Writing Assignment 2 – Internship letter
Job posting: Federal Business Technology Analyst Summer
Scholar Intern, Deloitte Consulting, LLP
Requirements
Qualifications for our Federal BTA Summer Scholar Intern
Program include:
*A strong interest in beginning a career in business technology
consulting upon receiving your undergraduate degree
*Junior standing in a full-time academic program with a target
graduation date between December 2013 and June 2014
*Availability to participate, full-time, for approximately 10
weeks in the June to August 2013 time period
*3.4 cumulative GPA strongly preferred with equal or stronger
performance in your major(s)
*Participation in extracurricular activities
*Experience, interest and aptitude in technology
*Sharp analytical mind
*Demonstrated leadership abilities
*Excellent communication and interpersonal skills
*Willingness to travel (not all Summer Scholars will travel
during their internship)
*U.S. Citizenship
*Ability to acquire U.S. Security Clearance
The full posting can be found at:
http://foxschool.experience.com/er/stu/opportunities/job_profile
.jsp?job_hnd=29320013&affHnd=1560&search_id=32945376-
1347815459417&fromAction=ActiveSearchResults&useGadgetS
ettings=false
EXAMPLE FOLLOW THIS
BUT DO NOT TAKE ITS WORDS, USE YOUR OWN, BUT

2. SAME STRUCTURE.
THANK YOU
Troy T. Anderson
1750 Tysons Boulevard
McLean, VA 22102-4219
Dear Mr.
We had the opportunity to speak at the Deloitte information
session held for the Association for Information Systems (AIS)
at Temple University, and I would like to express my interest in
becoming a Federal Business Technology Analyst Summer
Scholar Intern. Based upon your intern selection criteria, my
technological aptitude, my analytical thinking skills, and my
leadership abilities make me a perfect fit for this opportunity
and your company.
My technological aptitude can be measured through my
knowledge of coding languages, my web development
experience, and my knowledge of hardware and operating
systems. I currently know three coding languages: HTML, C++,
and C#, and I am in the process of learning PHP. I also have
web-development experience from creating my current e-
portfolio and coordinating with the former VP of IT in AIS to
create the current AIS website. While at SAP, I learned about
the hardware components of IBM, Sun, HP, and Dell servers,
and utilized Linux, Unix, and Windows OS. My current
technological skills fit well with the requirements of a BTA
Summer Scholar Intern.
My analytical thinking skills were put to the test during a
functional mailbox, group mailbox, improvement project when I

3. was a business IS intern at Dow Chemical. I was assigned a
project to provide recommendations for improvement on the
functional mailbox provisioning process. In order to do this I
completed in depth analysis of the current system by completing
the creation process myself, checking for inconsistencies, and
interviewing owners and users of functional mailboxes. At the
end of my analysis I was able to provide over 30 value-added
suggestions from small changes in formatting, to more complex
solutions such as restructuring the help-documentation to fit the
users’ needs. My experience with the functional mailbox
improvement process demonstrates my analytical thinking
skills, skills that make me a great fit for the position of a BTA
Summer Scholar intern.
I also demonstrate leadership abilities, which is a key
characteristic of any BTA Summer Scholar intern. I led a team
of four Temple University students, in conjunction with Merck
in creating an application to identify pills using photo
recognition software. During this process I set goals for my
team, designated roles and responsibilities, and defined what
was expected of every group member to make this project a
success. Despite tight deadlines and busy schedules, my team
produced a working design prototype of the application. My
demonstrated leadership abilities throughout the creation of this
application align with the characteristics required of a BTA
Summer Scholar intern.
My technological aptitude, my analytical thinking skills, and
my leadership abilities are a perfect match for the position
based upon the job selection criteria. I welcome the opportunity
to speak with you further about this position, and would like to
arrange an interview for this position at your convenience.
Please feel free to call my cell-phone at 610-909-9724 if you
have any questions about me or my qualifications. Thank you
for taking the time to consider me for this position, and I hope
to hear from you soon.

4. Sincerely,
Dear Mr. Jacobs:
We had the opportunity to meet in person at the Job fair that
was held in Philadelphia. I am interested in applying for the
Service Coordinator position at Jevs Human services. My
leadership skills, management strengths and communication
skills, developed through my responsibilities as an assistant at
Temple University’s Academy of learning disabilities program,
Supervisor at Special people in the Northeast and my degree in
Human Resources Management from Temple University’s Fox
School of Business makes me an excellent fit for the position.
I developed leadership skills assisting individuals with
disabilities at Temple University’s Academy of learning center.
I plan and implement activities such as a after school study
program, so they could learn effectively with their academics. I
found that my leadership skills grew in 2013 when I was
recognized and a role model to other when I started a campaign
and use the funding for little trips and other social events in the
Philadelphia. I would imply this skill of mine to be an asset at
your company.
I demonstrated my management strengths working at Special
People in the Northeast. I supervise and train employees in
keeping updates and schedule meetings for employees who
assist individuals with disabilities. I am responsible client’s
individual support plan (ISPs) and scheduling monthly trainings
for employees. My management strengths enable me to meet the
needs of both clients and employees.
My coursework in Human Resources Management at Fox School

5. of Business has helped me to develop strong communication
skills in presenting with confidence and clarity to get my
message and opinion across to my audience. My
communications skills professional manner of bring service to
your clients.
My leadership skills, management strengths and communication
skills along with my degree in Human Resource Management
make me a strong candidate for the position. I look forward to
meeting with you to further discuss my qualifications and how I
can be an asset to Jevs Human services. I can be reached on my
phone, 215-xxx-xxxx or Email: [email protected] Thank you for
your time and consideration. Hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,