This document provides instructions for duplicating DVD movies in three sections. The first section explains DVD Decrypter, the second covers DVD Shrink and DVD burning software, and the third discusses Easy DVD Clone. It receives positive feedback for its clear organization into labeled sections, making it easy for readers to understand the duplication process. Some criticisms note the document contains too many small letters, links, and is fully written in Japanese, which can make it difficult for some readers to understand. Suggestions are provided to improve readability, including using larger font, reducing the number of links, including both English and Japanese text, and placing advertisements at the bottom of the page rather than as flashing ads at the top.

1. Peer Review Exercise # 2
1.
The content of this document is how to Duplicate DVD Moviesby using computer.
This document consists of three instructions. Each instructions consists of five steps.
The content of the first instruction is about DVD decrypter.
The content of the second instruction is about DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software.
The content of the third instruction is about Easy DVD Clone.
2.
I think that the construction of this document is very good. This document is divided into three
sections. And individual headings is entitled appropriate name. It is very clearly for reader to
read this document. That is why reader of this document is easy to understand how to Duplicate
DVD.
3.
This document is divided by three instructions. And all the three instructions is divided by five
steps . Almost all the sentences are imperative sentences. And almost all the sentences are
itemized. And almost all the sentences are concise and almost all the sentences are began on a
new line on a suitable line.
4.
There are letters too many in this page.That is why it is difficult for us to read and see this page.
There are link that is to web site too many. That is why we don't know which link we should
click.
This document is written in Japanese all. That's why it is difficult for me to read this document.
5.
The title is separated by color and the title is written in huge lettering. That's why we can see
easily and we can make good use of this page.
Many pictures and images are placed. That's why it is easy for us to see this page and in
addition, it is easy for us to use this page.
6.
There is advertisement used flash at the top of a page.But this flash have a harmful influence on
eye's. There are letters too many in this page and there are letters too small in this page. That is
why we should write letters appropriate size for this page and we should write letters
appropriate qualify for this page.
7.
We should reduce a number of link that is insert this page.
We should write in huge lettering on the document.
We should draw up the document in Japanese too.
We should place an other company's advertisement at the bottom of a page.
The layout of this document is too oblong. That's why we should edit layout of this page.
8.
1.When our group will author a similar document, our group don't edit this document's layout
the shape of oblong.
2.When our group will author a similar document, our group insert other company's
advertisement at the bottom of a page.
3.When our group will author a similar document, our group author the document in Japanese.