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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document?


The video footage can be used from DVD under two or more computer programs
to copy DVD from the disk to your computer.




2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent
the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.


Yes,I do.Because it was written as the procedure is detailed, and there is
not an uncertain point.


3. What details are included in the document?


Details of how to copy DVD that uses DVD Decrypter,DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning
Software,Easy DVD Clone.


4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?


It doesn't understand it is the best that which writing the method of using three set of
software uses though is good.


5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?


There is three methods. It is a model of step. So, this writing is easy to see and
comprehensible. It may be easy for you to understand because any step is composed of
short sentences. It may be easy for you to see because how to divide the step is circle
that attaches the color.


6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?


No, there are not. Because I understand this explain. But Decrypter is not exist word.
When I come right down to it, I think that increase the step a little more of this. It is
likely to become more comprehensible if there is sample animation.I want to not use the
technical term so much.




7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?


It is better to write about how to download DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software in
detail. Also, I think it become easy to understand.


8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar
document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).


It is different in the point of making stage such as step 1 and step 2 …. Also, there is one
subject (one major idea) that includes tree subtitle. Moreover, It is different in the point
of one step is made very short explanation.

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Peer r ex2

  • 1. <Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2 (Based on Rubric under Week 1)> 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document? The video footage can be used from DVD under two or more computer programs to copy DVD from the disk to your computer. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes,I do.Because it was written as the procedure is detailed, and there is not an uncertain point. 3. What details are included in the document? Details of how to copy DVD that uses DVD Decrypter,DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software,Easy DVD Clone. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? It doesn't understand it is the best that which writing the method of using three set of software uses though is good. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? There is three methods. It is a model of step. So, this writing is easy to see and comprehensible. It may be easy for you to understand because any step is composed of short sentences. It may be easy for you to see because how to divide the step is circle that attaches the color. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No, there are not. Because I understand this explain. But Decrypter is not exist word. When I come right down to it, I think that increase the step a little more of this. It is likely to become more comprehensible if there is sample animation.I want to not use the
  • 2. technical term so much. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? It is better to write about how to download DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software in detail. Also, I think it become easy to understand. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). It is different in the point of making stage such as step 1 and step 2 …. Also, there is one subject (one major idea) that includes tree subtitle. Moreover, It is different in the point of one step is made very short explanation.