SlideShare a Scribd company logo
1 of 2
Download to read offline
1.Explain the complete organization of the content in the document.

This document is said about how to install sound driver hardware. Most hardware comes
with drivers, usually on an installation CD. The drivers tell the computer exactly how to
function with the device. However, without the installed hardware, the drivers do nothing
but take up space on the hard drive.

2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly
represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your
comments.

I think that the individual sections and headings in the articles clearly represent the idea
that was communicated. This article is easy to look. And the article is colorful ,so it is easy
to see a important thing. Anything else, the article introduce step by step. So, it is easy to
read the article.


3. What details are included in the document?
This document showed me how to install sound driver hardware. The document introduce
step by step. So, it is easy to read the document. If I will do according to the instruction, it
is easy for me to install sound driver hardware. And, this document explains about how to
download sound driver.


4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

There was no confused one in obtaining in the content. However, it was felt that the
expression of English was difficult. It was difficult to understand the term related to the
sound driver hardware to obtaining. In obtaining, the term related to the sound driver
hardware easily very much and was made understood difficult because it was classified.


5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

Being classified was good. In this favor, the procedure was able to be comprehensible and
to see. Moreover, hanging by the polite remark was good. It is likely to make them revolt
the reader if the word is not polite. Overall, it is made easy to see. Therefore, I think that I
want to read this.

6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

I think that, there are little mistakes in this Homepage. However, the density of the
character is changed, it becomes better. For example, from “Instructions”
 to “Instructions”. It is likely to see it very unlike only by doing like this.


7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?

No, I can't. Because I think that this Homepage is perfect. So there are no suggestions for
improving the document. Perhaps, if I express the opinion, the opinion will become
unrelated. So, my opinion cannot improve the document. I think that I must study to
suggest for improving the document.
8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar
document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

If our group would author a similar document, It is hard to see. Because we cannot use the
computer well. For example, the color will not be able to be changed. And, We can not
clearly represent the idea that was communicated of the individual sections and headings
in the document . And, we can write only an easy thing which is about car sound driver
hardware.

More Related Content

What's hot

How to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced Authors
How to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced AuthorsHow to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced Authors
How to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced AuthorsGoDates
 
#Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument letters
 #Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument letters #Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument letters
#Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument lettersJanet Ilko
 
How to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical Tips
How to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical TipsHow to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical Tips
How to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical TipsAnnotated Bibliography APA
 
How to make essay longer: tips and guidelines
How to make essay longer: tips and guidelinesHow to make essay longer: tips and guidelines
How to make essay longer: tips and guidelinesEssay Extender
 
Important Tips In Composing Articles
Important Tips In Composing ArticlesImportant Tips In Composing Articles
Important Tips In Composing Articlesprofitdrive1
 
Critical Tips In Creating Article content
Critical Tips In Creating Article contentCritical Tips In Creating Article content
Critical Tips In Creating Article contentprofitdrive1
 
How to create a table of contents in word
How to create a table of contents in wordHow to create a table of contents in word
How to create a table of contents in wordLer Wen Yea
 
Day 4 productivity
Day 4 productivityDay 4 productivity
Day 4 productivityTravis Klein
 
Academic writing-services-hgse
Academic writing-services-hgseAcademic writing-services-hgse
Academic writing-services-hgse1andi55
 
Academic writing-assistance
Academic writing-assistanceAcademic writing-assistance
Academic writing-assistance1andi55
 

What's hot (16)

How to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced Authors
How to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced AuthorsHow to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced Authors
How to Write a Great Article: Simple Tips & Tricks from Experienced Authors
 
#Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument letters
 #Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument letters #Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument letters
#Why i-write #2nextprez writing argument letters
 
Presentation 8
Presentation 8Presentation 8
Presentation 8
 
How to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical Tips
How to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical TipsHow to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical Tips
How to Create APA Bibliography: 5 Practical Tips
 
7.evaluation(9)
7.evaluation(9)7.evaluation(9)
7.evaluation(9)
 
How to make essay longer: tips and guidelines
How to make essay longer: tips and guidelinesHow to make essay longer: tips and guidelines
How to make essay longer: tips and guidelines
 
Important Tips In Composing Articles
Important Tips In Composing ArticlesImportant Tips In Composing Articles
Important Tips In Composing Articles
 
Critical Tips In Creating Article content
Critical Tips In Creating Article contentCritical Tips In Creating Article content
Critical Tips In Creating Article content
 
Love languages
Love languagesLove languages
Love languages
 
How to create a table of contents in word
How to create a table of contents in wordHow to create a table of contents in word
How to create a table of contents in word
 
Questions to ask before reading
Questions to ask before readingQuestions to ask before reading
Questions to ask before reading
 
Day 4 productivity
Day 4 productivityDay 4 productivity
Day 4 productivity
 
Peer5
Peer5Peer5
Peer5
 
Question seven
Question sevenQuestion seven
Question seven
 
Academic writing-services-hgse
Academic writing-services-hgseAcademic writing-services-hgse
Academic writing-services-hgse
 
Academic writing-assistance
Academic writing-assistanceAcademic writing-assistance
Academic writing-assistance
 

Viewers also liked

Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4
Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4
Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4Mimabis
 
Ecoturismo en veraguas 3
Ecoturismo en veraguas 3Ecoturismo en veraguas 3
Ecoturismo en veraguas 3Mimabis
 
Master Certificate
Master CertificateMaster Certificate
Master CertificateSyed Walid
 
Location pictures
Location picturesLocation pictures
Location picturesDanniG_x
 
Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...
Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...
Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...Institución Educativa Académico
 
Music Video Script
Music Video ScriptMusic Video Script
Music Video ScriptTheBoaLads
 
Questionnaire Results Analysis
Questionnaire Results AnalysisQuestionnaire Results Analysis
Questionnaire Results AnalysisTheBoaLads
 

Viewers also liked (17)

Madhulika Jain (Sec 39, Noida)
Madhulika Jain (Sec 39, Noida)Madhulika Jain (Sec 39, Noida)
Madhulika Jain (Sec 39, Noida)
 
ortografia 9
ortografia 9ortografia 9
ortografia 9
 
Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4
Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4
Ecoturismo en veraguas salto el bejucal o chorro de los aizpruas 4
 
Ecoturismo en veraguas 3
Ecoturismo en veraguas 3Ecoturismo en veraguas 3
Ecoturismo en veraguas 3
 
Master Certificate
Master CertificateMaster Certificate
Master Certificate
 
Adnan shahbuddin amm 1 a
Adnan shahbuddin amm 1 aAdnan shahbuddin amm 1 a
Adnan shahbuddin amm 1 a
 
D3048compilado
D3048compiladoD3048compilado
D3048compilado
 
Location pictures
Location picturesLocation pictures
Location pictures
 
CONTRARIOS
CONTRARIOSCONTRARIOS
CONTRARIOS
 
Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...
Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...
Cuales son las problematicas ambientales causadas por estos residuos electron...
 
Presentación1
Presentación1Presentación1
Presentación1
 
Gost r 54587 2011
Gost r 54587 2011Gost r 54587 2011
Gost r 54587 2011
 
Ois front page
Ois front pageOis front page
Ois front page
 
Music Video Script
Music Video ScriptMusic Video Script
Music Video Script
 
ThermX1-Report
ThermX1-ReportThermX1-Report
ThermX1-Report
 
Función buscarh
Función buscarhFunción buscarh
Función buscarh
 
Questionnaire Results Analysis
Questionnaire Results AnalysisQuestionnaire Results Analysis
Questionnaire Results Analysis
 

Similar to Week1

Peer reviewexercise1
Peer reviewexercise1Peer reviewexercise1
Peer reviewexercise1s1170209
 
Week4 kozin
Week4 kozinWeek4 kozin
Week4 kozins1170208
 
Peer reviewexercise4
Peer reviewexercise4Peer reviewexercise4
Peer reviewexercise4s1170209
 
Peer1
Peer1Peer1
Peer1aizu
 
Peer review exercise2
Peer review exercise2Peer review exercise2
Peer review exercise2Ryoma Abe
 
Peer2
Peer2Peer2
Peer2aizu
 
Peer Review Exercise#1
Peer Review Exercise#1Peer Review Exercise#1
Peer Review Exercise#1s1170230
 
Peer 1
Peer 1Peer 1
Peer 1DoRujI
 
Peer review exercise5
Peer review exercise5Peer review exercise5
Peer review exercise5Ryoma Abe
 
Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2
Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2
Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2s1170223
 

Similar to Week1 (20)

Peer reviewexercise1
Peer reviewexercise1Peer reviewexercise1
Peer reviewexercise1
 
Week4 kozin
Week4 kozinWeek4 kozin
Week4 kozin
 
英語6
英語6英語6
英語6
 
Sw3-Pre4
Sw3-Pre4Sw3-Pre4
Sw3-Pre4
 
Pre4
Pre4Pre4
Pre4
 
Peer reviewexercise4
Peer reviewexercise4Peer reviewexercise4
Peer reviewexercise4
 
Peer1
Peer1Peer1
Peer1
 
P ex2
P ex2P ex2
P ex2
 
Peer review exercise2
Peer review exercise2Peer review exercise2
Peer review exercise2
 
Spre2
Spre2Spre2
Spre2
 
Peer2
Peer2Peer2
Peer2
 
Peer Review Exercise#1
Peer Review Exercise#1Peer Review Exercise#1
Peer Review Exercise#1
 
Pre1
Pre1Pre1
Pre1
 
Peer 1
Peer 1Peer 1
Peer 1
 
E5
E5E5
E5
 
Peer review exercise5
Peer review exercise5Peer review exercise5
Peer review exercise5
 
R ex1
R ex1R ex1
R ex1
 
E4
E4E4
E4
 
Review02.prn
Review02.prnReview02.prn
Review02.prn
 
Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2
Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2
Submit Peer Review Exercise # 2
 

More from s1170204

More from s1170204 (8)

Submit e1
Submit e1Submit e1
Submit e1
 
Individual e4
Individual e4Individual e4
Individual e4
 
Individual e2
Individual e2Individual e2
Individual e2
 
Complete e3
Complete e3Complete e3
Complete e3
 
Complete e2
Complete e2Complete e2
Complete e2
 
Complete e1
Complete e1Complete e1
Complete e1
 
E3
E3E3
E3
 
Cmap
Cmap Cmap
Cmap
 

Week1

  • 1. 1.Explain the complete organization of the content in the document. This document is said about how to install sound driver hardware. Most hardware comes with drivers, usually on an installation CD. The drivers tell the computer exactly how to function with the device. However, without the installed hardware, the drivers do nothing but take up space on the hard drive. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think that the individual sections and headings in the articles clearly represent the idea that was communicated. This article is easy to look. And the article is colorful ,so it is easy to see a important thing. Anything else, the article introduce step by step. So, it is easy to read the article. 3. What details are included in the document? This document showed me how to install sound driver hardware. The document introduce step by step. So, it is easy to read the document. If I will do according to the instruction, it is easy for me to install sound driver hardware. And, this document explains about how to download sound driver. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? There was no confused one in obtaining in the content. However, it was felt that the expression of English was difficult. It was difficult to understand the term related to the sound driver hardware to obtaining. In obtaining, the term related to the sound driver hardware easily very much and was made understood difficult because it was classified. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? Being classified was good. In this favor, the procedure was able to be comprehensible and to see. Moreover, hanging by the polite remark was good. It is likely to make them revolt the reader if the word is not polite. Overall, it is made easy to see. Therefore, I think that I want to read this. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? I think that, there are little mistakes in this Homepage. However, the density of the character is changed, it becomes better. For example, from “Instructions” to “Instructions”. It is likely to see it very unlike only by doing like this. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? No, I can't. Because I think that this Homepage is perfect. So there are no suggestions for improving the document. Perhaps, if I express the opinion, the opinion will become unrelated. So, my opinion cannot improve the document. I think that I must study to suggest for improving the document.
  • 2. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). If our group would author a similar document, It is hard to see. Because we cannot use the computer well. For example, the color will not be able to be changed. And, We can not clearly represent the idea that was communicated of the individual sections and headings in the document . And, we can write only an easy thing which is about car sound driver hardware.