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1.What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?

We think the primary idea of this article is about how to use a Map-Based GPS car Navigation system
and how do car Navigation Systems Work.

This article explain it with using step. And, using paragraph. This is important for explain article to
people.

One type of GPS (Global Positioning System) navigation system involves a monitor that displays a
map; the other kind uses voice recognition and a text display of the street you're on. These instructions
are for an Alpine map-based system.


2.Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea
that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

I think that individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that is chastity.
Because, I think this article is easy to see and easy to understand. Spoken it by the above, paragraph is
important writing article.

step 1 is that read the instructions that come with the product. Step 2 is that turn on the car's ignition.
Turn on the navigation system. A disclaimer will appear on the screen. This article is very
comprehensible like this.


3.What details are included in the articles?

The explanation of the usage of the car navigation system is described from step one to step nine. In
concrete terms the method of displaying map of place which I want to go is described. The method is
using the up and down keys. Next, choose a site for your destination. Finally, press enter. This is the
method of displaying map.

Other, car navigation capabilities and accent of GPS satellites and car navigation is written with a fine-
tooth comb.


4.Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

The confused place thinks us not to be it in this sentence. A sentence is written carefully, and the
quantity does not so have many trips of one nothing to move car navigation either. It is easy to read
very much and thinks that it is a good article. But I thought that I should have added the pictures
because I felt it when there was the place that it was hard to be transmitted through only in a sentence.


5.What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

It is good to write it how you use the GPS car navigation system of the map base.

Because all do not understand the direction for uses of the car navigation system, I think that I had
better write it how I use the GPS car navigation system of the map base. Because it is difficult for the
person of the old man to understand that I considerably think about it, the explanation of the car
navigation system of this article is very good. The explanation about the car navigation system of this
article is written for all.

6.Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

I think it to be it to become it not a reformed point. This article is very good. However, I think that you
should add it to me because the point that navigation system has bad is not written. For example, the
navigation system changed artificial hygiene for information by an electrical signal. Therefore, the
electrical signal is disturbed when locality is going to strongly break down, and it is used for the
domains. I think that navigation system should write the bad point by an article in this way. think it to
be it to become it not a reformed point. This article is very good. However, I think that you should add
it to me because the point that navigation system has bad is not written. For example, the navigation
system changed artificial hygiene for information by an electrical signal. Therefore, the electrical signal
is disturbed when locality is going to strongly break down, and it is used for the domains. I think that
navigation system should write the bad point by an article in this way.


7.What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?

First,this document does not have picture. We can understand that there is a painting for this document
in this way.

When it was to have thought that the thing that I whom an unexpected event happens was expressed in
detail should write it about it, I think for business earnestly.

I think that it is easy to read if I write thirdly the meaning of the term in detail.


8.Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how
this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

When I write a similar sentence, this author divides an entry into even similar contents more, and I
change a point of view next and mainly write the same contents first. I finally make a link about the
contents that I explained.

Unlike it, we do not intend to write most of the sentences about similar contents. Even if I change a
point of view, the entry does not change it. In addition, the link is not made more. This is the difference
that there are us and an author.

9.Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.

One purpose is bells and whistles.
I upset an email by using bells and whistles and can upset a photograph.
There are two purposes to find the place to stay of people in Emergency.
Here, there are a family, a friend and background information and some options to follow the place to
stay of the employee.
It is a Cell telephone enabled by GPS to be 3.
Motorola and Blackberry were the telephones which did it for the first GPS possibility to multiply the
United States.
It is Services of the base by Location to be 4.
There is an agreement with a wireless network carrier I go along an Internet website or the call center
in the LBS provider, and I receive data from a mobile telephone, and to make it easy to access it for
you in it.


10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.


The position as of a thing of a user on the Iphone beats a Maps icon to bring a local map, and it is
found by pushing the aim icon next. I enlarge an image slowly, and I am more detailed, and please find
the position as of a thing of identification from the digital professional of this free video for a tip on
Iphone, When probably it confirms it, in now that is the width of the error, we are slightly so and
probably in other words I only take it whether we let it only get well many times if it can watch a large-
scale thing letting you be depressed comparatively near when it is to say, and it does it, and you hit it
again, and nearby just a little, therefore you can enter and can watch whether I can enlarge an image
slowly inside within a quarter of 1 mile about somewhere that you can watch.

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Peer review exercise5

  • 1. 1.What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? We think the primary idea of this article is about how to use a Map-Based GPS car Navigation system and how do car Navigation Systems Work. This article explain it with using step. And, using paragraph. This is important for explain article to people. One type of GPS (Global Positioning System) navigation system involves a monitor that displays a map; the other kind uses voice recognition and a text display of the street you're on. These instructions are for an Alpine map-based system. 2.Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think that individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that is chastity. Because, I think this article is easy to see and easy to understand. Spoken it by the above, paragraph is important writing article. step 1 is that read the instructions that come with the product. Step 2 is that turn on the car's ignition. Turn on the navigation system. A disclaimer will appear on the screen. This article is very comprehensible like this. 3.What details are included in the articles? The explanation of the usage of the car navigation system is described from step one to step nine. In concrete terms the method of displaying map of place which I want to go is described. The method is using the up and down keys. Next, choose a site for your destination. Finally, press enter. This is the method of displaying map. Other, car navigation capabilities and accent of GPS satellites and car navigation is written with a fine- tooth comb. 4.Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? The confused place thinks us not to be it in this sentence. A sentence is written carefully, and the quantity does not so have many trips of one nothing to move car navigation either. It is easy to read very much and thinks that it is a good article. But I thought that I should have added the pictures because I felt it when there was the place that it was hard to be transmitted through only in a sentence. 5.What is good about the writing? Why is it good? It is good to write it how you use the GPS car navigation system of the map base. Because all do not understand the direction for uses of the car navigation system, I think that I had better write it how I use the GPS car navigation system of the map base. Because it is difficult for the person of the old man to understand that I considerably think about it, the explanation of the car
  • 2. navigation system of this article is very good. The explanation about the car navigation system of this article is written for all. 6.Are there any errors that need to be corrected? I think it to be it to become it not a reformed point. This article is very good. However, I think that you should add it to me because the point that navigation system has bad is not written. For example, the navigation system changed artificial hygiene for information by an electrical signal. Therefore, the electrical signal is disturbed when locality is going to strongly break down, and it is used for the domains. I think that navigation system should write the bad point by an article in this way. think it to be it to become it not a reformed point. This article is very good. However, I think that you should add it to me because the point that navigation system has bad is not written. For example, the navigation system changed artificial hygiene for information by an electrical signal. Therefore, the electrical signal is disturbed when locality is going to strongly break down, and it is used for the domains. I think that navigation system should write the bad point by an article in this way. 7.What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? First,this document does not have picture. We can understand that there is a painting for this document in this way. When it was to have thought that the thing that I whom an unexpected event happens was expressed in detail should write it about it, I think for business earnestly. I think that it is easy to read if I write thirdly the meaning of the term in detail. 8.Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). When I write a similar sentence, this author divides an entry into even similar contents more, and I change a point of view next and mainly write the same contents first. I finally make a link about the contents that I explained. Unlike it, we do not intend to write most of the sentences about similar contents. Even if I change a point of view, the entry does not change it. In addition, the link is not made more. This is the difference that there are us and an author. 9.Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. One purpose is bells and whistles. I upset an email by using bells and whistles and can upset a photograph. There are two purposes to find the place to stay of people in Emergency. Here, there are a family, a friend and background information and some options to follow the place to stay of the employee. It is a Cell telephone enabled by GPS to be 3. Motorola and Blackberry were the telephones which did it for the first GPS possibility to multiply the United States. It is Services of the base by Location to be 4.
  • 3. There is an agreement with a wireless network carrier I go along an Internet website or the call center in the LBS provider, and I receive data from a mobile telephone, and to make it easy to access it for you in it. 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. The position as of a thing of a user on the Iphone beats a Maps icon to bring a local map, and it is found by pushing the aim icon next. I enlarge an image slowly, and I am more detailed, and please find the position as of a thing of identification from the digital professional of this free video for a tip on Iphone, When probably it confirms it, in now that is the width of the error, we are slightly so and probably in other words I only take it whether we let it only get well many times if it can watch a large- scale thing letting you be depressed comparatively near when it is to say, and it does it, and you hit it again, and nearby just a little, therefore you can enter and can watch whether I can enlarge an image slowly inside within a quarter of 1 mile about somewhere that you can watch.