The document provides feedback on a documentary, radio trailer, and print advert created by students. Based on the feedback, the students made several improvements: 1) They re-adjusted sound levels and reordered interviews in the documentary. 2) They added background music to the radio trailer to make it less boring. 3) They changed the print advert to have a darker background and made the date/time bolder to improve clarity.

2. Documentary Feedback This is very good,
surprisingly
professional –
Melisa Johnson
Could do with shortening
some of the cut scenes,
but other wise very good
- Reese Johnson
Very well put together
and informative, but
sometimes the audio is
a bit loud for me – Linda
Cross
The interviews could
be re ordered better –
Louis Johnson
Enjoyed the intro a lot
and found the
interviews very
interesting – Joyce
Johnson

3. How we improved our
documentary with the feedback
 We re adjusted the sound levels so they
were all to the right quality
 We re ordered the interviews so they
made a bit more sense and allowed for
a better flow of the documentary overall
 And we cut down a couple of cut scenes
that seemed to long.

4. Radio Trailer Feedback Very Informative, but
could do with some
sort of music behind it
– Melisa Johnson
Found this interesting
and to the point –
Louis Johnson
The channel name
could do with being
last – Joyce Johnson
Found It a little Boring–
Reese Johnson
Made me want to
watch the actual
documentary –
Linda Cross

5. How we improved our Radio
Trailer with the feedback
 We added a the music box sound we
had used in our documentary to the
radio trailer
 This we think made it a little less boring
 Changed the channel name to the last
thing as this fitted the convention

6. Print Advert Feedback Eye catching and
intriguing - Reese
Johnson
Could Do with a
darker background
than just white –
Melisa Johnson
The date and time isn't
really clear enough –
Linda Cross
Very Good and
professional – Louis
Johnson
Clear and easy to
understand – Joyce
Johnson

7. How we improved our Print
advert with the feedback
 We made the background darker to add
a colour and to add to the mystery.
 We made the date and time in bigger
and bolder writing to make it clearer as
that's important