2. 1st step of second draft !
• This is my very changed front page here I have changed all of the text
apart from the meet and greet and the win popsicles tickets. I changed
this because I thought the text was too delicate looking and not bold or
suitable for a front page. Changing the text has made the front cover look
very different I prefer this to how the first draft turned out. I have kept all
the size of the font the same. The text that I decided to keep the same I
thought I needed to come up with a way that made it look more bold so I
added pink boxes around them to make this happen. I also added a box
around the writing ‘singers latest heart break’ and then had to change the
colour to white and green so this could be seen. A box around the website
was also added. I also experimented with shaped including the circle
which I then added a green font ‘top 100 songs’ too. I have also added an
pink arrow saying ‘get Cheyenne's look’ this I like as it goes with the theme
of the popsicles. In the last draft I mentioned that the models board she is
holding was too messy and unprofessional looking as the writing was
uneven and patchy I changed this by using the paint brush and a black to
go over the existing writing. This effect is the most drastic change the front
cover. It creates a bold more appropriate looking picture.

4. 2nd step of second draft
• Here in this step I was concentrating on the left hand side of the
magazine as the area is left blank. So I was researching and found a
common existing magazine convention was they use their logo and
put investigates I like this idea so I decided to use it in my front
cover. I have then added the juice logo then the words ‘investigates
the truth behind the popsicles’ I have added this in the same font as
the rest of the front cover. Keeping the same green colour scheme.
The thing I would change for next time is the word investigates as I
think this goes too far over her face and covers to much of the
picture but it fill the space up nicely. I have also added a barcode to
the magazine on paint and copied and pasted it over to Photoshop
this was easier than trying to draw it. I think that by adding this
makes it more professional looking. I was also researching banner
methods that are added at the bottom of the magazine and found
that some of them add dots in to break up the words I like this as I
think it makes it easier to read so I added green ones in.

6. 3rd step of second draft
• This is my final second draft I have added a
little pink rectangle in order to put a feature of
the magazine into it I think the I might put
‘how Facebook effects fame’ . So far I think
this draft is nearly finished however there
needs to be a lot more work onto it.