2. Story In 14 Bullet Points
1. (Non-linear montage).
Close ups/Extreme close ups of diary.
(Pan across top/bottom on specific words or phrases).
Use dissolve/overlap transitions.
2. Close ups, mid and long shots of the person writing in her diary with low
and high angles of good kat.
3. Transition to bad kat (Kats voice).
4. Shots (shot reverse shot/eyeline-matching) of good kat/bad kat
Bad kat there one second and not there the next (vanishing).
5. Good kat opens eyes on bus (POV).
6. Stranger taps good kat on shoulder and asks ‘’Excuse me, are you alright?’’.
She turns to look at strangers and says yes.
(shot reverse shot).
7. Stranger taps good kat again and asks ‘’Are you sure?’’. Then stranger turns
into bad kat (shot reverse shot).
Blue text - Flashback
3. Continued..
8. Good kat runs off bus.
9. Stranger looking down at good kat from window, (Showing its in her
imagination).
10. Good kat running down street bumping into people (Fast pace parallel to
music).
11. Every person she bumps into looks like bad kat, but then turns normal.
(Shot reverse shot of and match on action of running).
12. Runs into final person and they fall down. Goes to check if shes ok.
(Shot reverse shot of bad kat and good kat, reveals stranger has bad kats
face).
13. Eyeline match of good kat.
14. Good kat screams. Screen blacks out and screaming continues.
4. Timeline Of Idea
Close ups/Extreme
close ups of words,
phrases and pictures
in diary.
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Non-linear (Flashback)
Linear
Camera shots/angles
Titles/Credits
0 secs
Pan across
words/phrases
within diary.
Close ups, Mid and
Long Shots of Good
Kat writing in diary
with voiceover.
Bad Kat appears behind
Good Kat for split
second.
Mid shot of camera
facing Good Kat
showing Bad Kat behind
her.
High and Low
Angles of Good Kat.
30 secs
5. Good Kat turns
around. Mid Shot
of her from front.
Bad Kat appears
behind Good Kat
again sitting on
desk for brief
second. Long Shot
of nobody behind
her.
Camera facing Good
Kat showing her facial
expression and body
language with a mid
shot. Bad Kat appears
behind Good Kat.
Good Kat stops
writing and puts
pen down. Close up
of diary.
High angle of Good
Kat writing. Bad Kat
appears in corner
of room for split
second.
Good Kat turns
around, no one
there.
6. Two shot of Good
Kat and Bad Kat.
Close up of Good
Kat’s face.
Mid Shot of Good
Kat alone from
different angle.
Mid Shot of Good Kat
alone. Bad Kat
appears behind her
and whispers in her
ear. Disappears.
Close Up of Good
Kat opening eyes.
7. POV of Good Kat.
POV of Good Kat.
Close up of
strangers hand
tapping Good Kat.
Mid shot of Good
Kat and stranger.
Over the shoulder
shot of the stranger
on the bus.
8. POV of stranger
watching Good Kat
run.
Good Kat runs off
bus.
Mid Shot of
stranger from
outside of bus.
POV of Good Kat
looks at stranger 1,
sees Bad Kat. Keeps
running.
Close up of stranger
1.
Mid Shot of Good
Kat running
towards camera.
Looks across road .
Close up of stranger
2 in front of her.
Long shot of Good
Kat running from
bus stop. Long shot
from front of Good
Kat running.
9. Long Shot of Good
Kat running. Good
Kat turns around to
look behind her.
Long shot of
stranger 3 in front
of her.
POV of stranger 2,
watching Good Kat
run. Mid shot of
stranger 2 to show
normal face.
Good Kat runs into
stranger 2, turns
around to see bad
Kat. Keeps running.
POV of Good Kat.
Good Kat runs into
stranger 3 causing
them to fall down.
Match on action of
collision.
10. Stranger 3 reaches
out their hand
towards Good Kat.
Stranger 3’s face
becomes Bad Kat’s
face. Shot reverse
shot of Good Kat
and Bad Kat looking
at eachother.
POV of Good Kat
looking at stranger
3. Good Kat tapping
stranger,
apologizing.
Two shot of Good
Kat and Bad Kat.
High angle of the
two characters.
Good Kat screams.
Screen cuts to black
but screaming
continues.
150 secs
11. Changes From Timelines
This was the original timeline, however we changed
it as it wasn’t detailed enough.
As the summary of each scene was vague and there
was no mention of shots or angles used.
This was our second timeline with a bit more detail however we altered our idea so we
had to change our timeline to match it. Also like before it was still quite vague.
12. This is the third timeline which was planned out on paper. We then decided to type it
up and write a bit more detail about what’s happening in every scene to make it more
clear.
