2. Story In 14 Bullet Points
1. Good Kat walking upstairs and going to her room.
2. Good Kat looking for her diary on her desk (long shot).
3. Finding her diary and sitting on her bed and looking through it (Close ups
and extreme close ups).
4. Bad Kat appearing in Good Kat’s room several times causing Good Kat to
panic.
5. Good Kat opens her eyes on the bus (POV).
6. Stranger taps Good Kat on shoulder and asks if shes ok. She turns to the
stranger and says yes (shot reverse shot).
7. Stranger taping Good Kat again and asking if she’s sure shes ok?
Good Kat sees Bad Kat instead of stranger when she turns around (shot
reverse shot).
Blue Text – Flashback
3.
4. Close up of Good
Kats feet, walking
up stairs.
Mid shot of Good
Kat approaching
door. Close up of
Good Kat opening
door.
Long shot of Good
Kat entering room
and approaching
her desk.
High angle of Good
Kat looking for
diary.
Close up of Good Kat
find her diary. Long shot
of Katherine going to sit
down on her bed. 6
Different extreme close
ups and close ups of
diary.
5. Good Kats POV.
Long shot of Good
Kat looking around.
High angle of Good
Kat drawing in book.
Good Kats POV.
Mid shots of nobody
there.
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10. Changes From Timelines
The timeline for draft 2 stayed the same as draft 1, apart from
scene 1 being changed.
Also the location of scene 1 changed meaning the scene had
to be altered.
Draft 1 Scene 1
