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Assignment 27:
Timelines (Draft 2)
Judy Ibelgauptiene
Katia Martins
Leticia Silva
Noor Naoum
Story In 14 Bullet Points
1. Good Kat walking upstairs and going to her room.
2. Good Kat looking for her diary on her desk (long shot).
3. Finding her diary and sitting on her bed and looking through it (Close ups
and extreme close ups).
4. Bad Kat appearing in Good Kat’s room several times causing Good Kat to
panic.
5. Good Kat opens her eyes on the bus (POV).
6. Stranger taps Good Kat on shoulder and asks if shes ok. She turns to the
stranger and says yes (shot reverse shot).
7. Stranger taping Good Kat again and asking if she’s sure shes ok?
Good Kat sees Bad Kat instead of stranger when she turns around (shot
reverse shot).
Blue Text – Flashback
Close up of Good
Kats feet, walking
up stairs.
Mid shot of Good
Kat approaching
door. Close up of
Good Kat opening
door.
Long shot of Good
Kat entering room
and approaching
her desk.
High angle of Good
Kat looking for
diary.
Close up of Good Kat
find her diary. Long shot
of Good Kat going to sit
down on her bed. 6
Different extreme close
ups and close ups of
diary.
Good Kats POV.
Long shot of Good
Kat looking around.
High angle of Good
Kat drawing in book.
Good Kats POV.
Mid shot of nobody
there.
Close up of
strangers hand
tapping Good Kat.
POV Of Good
Kat.
Mid shot of Good
Kat and stranger.
POV Of Good
Kat.
Over the shoulder
shot of the
stranger on the
bus.
Costumes
By
Music By
Good Kat runs
off bus. Mid Shot
of stranger from
outside of bus.
POV Of stranger
watching Good
Kat run.
POV Of Good Kat
looking at stranger
1. Sees Bad Kat.
Keeps running.
Close up of
stranger 1s face.
Long shot of Good
Kat running from
bus stop. Long shot
from front of Good
Kat running.
Mid shot of
Good Kat
running towards
camera.
Edited By
Mid shot of Good
Kat turns around to
look behind her.
Long shot of
Good Kat
running.
Good Kats POV.
Mid shot of
Stranger 2.
Long shot of Good
Kat and Stranger
2.
Long shot of
Good Kat and
Stranger 2. High
angle of the two.
Long shot of Good
Kat running.
Directed By
Good Kats POV. Mid shot
of stranger 2. Mid shot of
Good Kat.
Close up of stranger 2
turning her head and
actually being Bad Kat.
Good Kat screams. Scene
cuts to black but
screaming continues.
Double
Sided
Changes From Timelines
The timeline for draft 2 stayed the same as draft 1, apart from
scene 1 being changed, and instead of Good Kat bumping into
three strangers on the street she only bumps into two.
Also the location of scene 1 changed meaning the scene had
to be altered.
Draft 1 Scene 1

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Ass 27 draft 2 VERSION DOSS

  • 1. Assignment 27: Timelines (Draft 2) Judy Ibelgauptiene Katia Martins Leticia Silva Noor Naoum
  • 2. Story In 14 Bullet Points 1. Good Kat walking upstairs and going to her room. 2. Good Kat looking for her diary on her desk (long shot). 3. Finding her diary and sitting on her bed and looking through it (Close ups and extreme close ups). 4. Bad Kat appearing in Good Kat’s room several times causing Good Kat to panic. 5. Good Kat opens her eyes on the bus (POV). 6. Stranger taps Good Kat on shoulder and asks if shes ok. She turns to the stranger and says yes (shot reverse shot). 7. Stranger taping Good Kat again and asking if she’s sure shes ok? Good Kat sees Bad Kat instead of stranger when she turns around (shot reverse shot). Blue Text – Flashback
  • 3.
  • 4. Close up of Good Kats feet, walking up stairs. Mid shot of Good Kat approaching door. Close up of Good Kat opening door. Long shot of Good Kat entering room and approaching her desk. High angle of Good Kat looking for diary. Close up of Good Kat find her diary. Long shot of Good Kat going to sit down on her bed. 6 Different extreme close ups and close ups of diary.
  • 5. Good Kats POV. Long shot of Good Kat looking around. High angle of Good Kat drawing in book. Good Kats POV. Mid shot of nobody there.
  • 6. Close up of strangers hand tapping Good Kat. POV Of Good Kat. Mid shot of Good Kat and stranger. POV Of Good Kat. Over the shoulder shot of the stranger on the bus. Costumes By Music By
  • 7. Good Kat runs off bus. Mid Shot of stranger from outside of bus. POV Of stranger watching Good Kat run. POV Of Good Kat looking at stranger 1. Sees Bad Kat. Keeps running. Close up of stranger 1s face. Long shot of Good Kat running from bus stop. Long shot from front of Good Kat running. Mid shot of Good Kat running towards camera. Edited By
  • 8. Mid shot of Good Kat turns around to look behind her. Long shot of Good Kat running. Good Kats POV. Mid shot of Stranger 2. Long shot of Good Kat and Stranger 2. Long shot of Good Kat and Stranger 2. High angle of the two. Long shot of Good Kat running. Directed By
  • 9. Good Kats POV. Mid shot of stranger 2. Mid shot of Good Kat. Close up of stranger 2 turning her head and actually being Bad Kat. Good Kat screams. Scene cuts to black but screaming continues. Double Sided
  • 10. Changes From Timelines The timeline for draft 2 stayed the same as draft 1, apart from scene 1 being changed, and instead of Good Kat bumping into three strangers on the street she only bumps into two. Also the location of scene 1 changed meaning the scene had to be altered. Draft 1 Scene 1