The document is a timeline for a story in 14 bullet points that outlines the key events. It begins with Good Kat walking upstairs to her room and finding her diary. She then sees Bad Kat appearing several times, causing her to panic. Later on a bus, a stranger taps Good Kat's shoulder and asks if she's okay, but when Good Kat turns around she sees Bad Kat instead of the stranger. The timeline then follows Good Kat running away from the bus in a series of shots that build tension as she encounters another stranger who also turns out to be Bad Kat, causing Good Kat to scream. The timeline also notes some changes between this draft and the previous one.
2. Story In 14 Bullet Points
1. Good Kat walking upstairs and going to her room.
2. Good Kat looking for her diary on her desk (long shot).
3. Finding her diary and sitting on her bed and looking through it (Close ups
and extreme close ups).
4. Bad Kat appearing in Good Kat’s room several times causing Good Kat to
panic.
5. Good Kat opens her eyes on the bus (POV).
6. Stranger taps Good Kat on shoulder and asks if shes ok. She turns to the
stranger and says yes (shot reverse shot).
7. Stranger taping Good Kat again and asking if she’s sure shes ok?
Good Kat sees Bad Kat instead of stranger when she turns around (shot
reverse shot).
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3.
4. Close up of Good
Kats feet, walking
up stairs.
Mid shot of Good
Kat approaching
door. Close up of
Good Kat opening
door.
Long shot of Good
Kat entering room
and approaching
her desk.
High angle of Good
Kat looking for
diary.
Close up of Good Kat
find her diary. Long shot
of Good Kat going to sit
down on her bed. 6
Different extreme close
ups and close ups of
diary.
5. Good Kats POV.
Long shot of Good
Kat looking around.
High angle of Good
Kat drawing in book.
Good Kats POV.
Mid shot of nobody
there.
6. Close up of
strangers hand
tapping Good Kat.
POV Of Good
Kat.
Mid shot of Good
Kat and stranger.
POV Of Good
Kat.
Over the shoulder
shot of the
stranger on the
bus.
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By
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7. Good Kat runs
off bus. Mid Shot
of stranger from
outside of bus.
POV Of stranger
watching Good
Kat run.
POV Of Good Kat
looking at stranger
1. Sees Bad Kat.
Keeps running.
Close up of
stranger 1s face.
Long shot of Good
Kat running from
bus stop. Long shot
from front of Good
Kat running.
Mid shot of
Good Kat
running towards
camera.
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8. Mid shot of Good
Kat turns around to
look behind her.
Long shot of
Good Kat
running.
Good Kats POV.
Mid shot of
Stranger 2.
Long shot of Good
Kat and Stranger
2.
Long shot of
Good Kat and
Stranger 2. High
angle of the two.
Long shot of Good
Kat running.
Directed By
9. Good Kats POV. Mid shot
of stranger 2. Mid shot of
Good Kat.
Close up of stranger 2
turning her head and
actually being Bad Kat.
Good Kat screams. Scene
cuts to black but
screaming continues.
Double
Sided
10. Changes From Timelines
The timeline for draft 2 stayed the same as draft 1, apart from
scene 1 being changed, and instead of Good Kat bumping into
three strangers on the street she only bumps into two.
Also the location of scene 1 changed meaning the scene had
to be altered.
Draft 1 Scene 1