blog feedback for my music magazine

1. Post-16 Feedback Form
Focus:
Blog Update (16/12/13)
http://joshlockeysa2media.blogspot.co.uk/
Strengths:
1. Your personal images are lovely and will certainly add to your band’s genre.
2. You have started to upload the missing work to show you have completed it.
3. You are showing progression by acting upon your feedback.
Areas for improvement:
1. When planning your information placement, ensure you are not compromising the
image you have taken – all of the conventions for your product will need to be
carefully placed. I will check this on 18.12.13.
Resulting Actions (student response):
I will take into account the image when designing the music magazine as this is something I
did not consider.