This feedback form summarizes a student's blog update exploring media theories and conventions, noting it as a strength. As an area for improvement, it recommends the student upload examples of camera shots, angles, and practice film shoots. The student responded that examples will be uploaded once edited together to work better and practice shots will be uploaded once able.

1. Post-16 Feedback Form
Focus:
Blog Update (14/11/13)
http://joshlockeysa2media.blogspot.co.uk/
Strengths:
1. You are exploring theories and conventions well which you will need to use when
creating your own products.
Areas for improvement:
1. Upload examples of camera shots and angles as well as practice film shoots.
Resulting Actions (student response):
Have examples and will upload once edited together so that it works better.
Also will upload the practise shots once I can.