2. I have received a number of audience feedbacks and have learnt how to improve my
main product.
Teaser trailer-
My first audience feedback is:
In my teaser trailer I did use an emotional song for an emotional scene and a
heartbeat to reflect the main characters heartbeat. But by looking at this feedback
there are scene with not much sound which I may improve by adding some non
diegetic music. I used different shots, but this person has pointed out I could have
used more especially to build a faster pace to the trailer.
3. This comment praises me for my build up of pace, which I believe I done well. This comment can
be related with the one before I could add sound which will keep the audience stimulated or
add some faster scene which catches audience attention and keep them stimulated.
The tracking shot was hard to do as the dolly was to shaky but I made my own dolly at did the
best I could do and I’m happy that someone has noticed it. I agree the darkness may be a
problem but it was hard to light up certain scene as light was limited at night, I did my best be
staying near street laps and roads, net time I would overcomes this by having better lighting
equipment.
4. I thought the end title was different as it comes on like a type writes, but I understand that I
could have used a more creative way of putting it in, next time I will make a title name in
Photoshop and then place that at the end.
Magazine-
When reading this audience feedback I am happy that the person likes my colour scheme as I
thought about it quite thoroughly, the person believes that more images could be added, this
could be done by a few smaller images of other movies or actors which will intrigue audience
members.
5. When deciding what main image to use I had to decide between to two images, I am
happy I choose the action pose one as it Is more exciting for the audience. Also I'm
happy the masthead and main cover line are very eye catching as there are the text
you want the audience to notice straight away.
Film poster
I wanted the audience to be caught up in the moment of this image with the action
pose and atmosphere of it, if I changed the image to a close up I could put across to
the audience a mood of the character.
6. I'm happy the title is clear as this is an important piece of text, I agree with this
feedback looking back I could have made the text of the release date to portray a
horror genre when I was making the release date I choose that font as I thought it
would be different.
Overall I am very happy with my products but I am happy with my audience feedback
because it helps my recognise some things that could be changed to make my
products better. I believe some of the feedback helped me realise things I would have
not picked upon by my self so the feedback was really helpful.
