1. THE NOTE
SCRIPT
EXT. NEW FAMILY HOUSE – DAY
FREDDIE and CHARLOTTE begin to move things into their newly brought
house. An establishing shot will set the scene of the film
FREDDIE:
I feel really good about this
place Charlotte
CHARLOTTE:
So do I love it here, I can’t
believe it was such a bargain
BETH rummages through the last few boxes in order to find her
favourite teddy
BETH:
Mummy, I found it!
CHARLOTTE:
That tatty should have
been left behind
BETH glares at her mum and then runs into the new family home
INT.BETHS BEDROOM
BETH finds a note written on pink flowery paper saying ‘HI FRIEND’
in bold capital letters. BETH replies to the note saying ‘Hello, who
are you?’
CHARLOTTE:
(SHOUTS) Dinners Ready
BETH carefully places her teddy in bed and puts the note in her
draw. Then leaves her bedroom
INT. DINING ROOM
FREDDIE, CHARLOTTE, BETH are sat at the table. BETH hears her teddy
making a noise upstairs and proceeds upstairs.
INT.BETHS BEDROOM
BETH stands looking at her teddy that has had an ear ripped off and
the note is sat beside the teddy however it is scrunched up in a
ball. She opens the note and sees that it is blank, she then looked
up confused and sees a note written on the window saying ‘Friend why
didn’t you invite me to dinner?’
BETH:
(SCREAMS) MUMMY!
INT.BETHS BEDROOM
2. CHARLOTTE stands beside BETH whilst Beth point to the window but
there is nothing there. BETH holds the teddy up to CHARLOTTE and she
shakes her head
INT.BETHS BEDROOM - NIGHT
BETHS teddy begins to make a noise which is coming from the
bathroom, this wakes up BETH
INT.BETHS BATHROOM- NIGHT
She walks into the bathroom. She sees her teddy in a sink full of
blood with one arm missing. She turns round to face the mirror and
she notices the arm is above it, she goes to grab the arm and then
she notices a figure behind her.
INT. BETHS BEDROOM – NIGHT
BETH is sat on her bed cross legged upright rocking staring at the
blank wall
INT.LIVING ROOM- MORNING
BETH is writing notes to her own family on mirrors herself
INT.DINING ROOM
BETH starts reading the note at the family table and CHARLOTTE
snatches it off her BETH swipes her in the face leaving her with
scratch across her face
INT. KITCHEN
CHARLOTTE is sobbing whilst looking through old photos of BETH.
FREDDIE walks into the kitchen to see her crying
FREDDIE:
What’s up love?
CHARLOTTE:
(WHILST HOLDING UP A PICTURE)
What went wrong?
EXT.GARDEN- EVENING
BETH walks in the garden, and a light turns on as she walks. She
then stares into the light.
INT.DINING ROOM- NIGHT
BETH begins to destroys the house including ripping off the table
cloth and kicking the furniture around. BETH hears her mother coming
down the stairs and then she hides behind the kitchen wall and
follows her mother into the living room.
INT.LIVING ROOM- NIGHT
BETH pushes her mother and then goes to hit her with a vase, she is
then interrupted by her dad. He grabs the vase
