2. ‘I think that the part where
the girl is being followed by
the man in the park makes
it realistic’
‘I like that the stalker texts
the girl from an unknown
number as it makes me
want to know who’s
following her’
‘I think that it is good that
Katie didn’t know that she
had a stalker until the end
as it adds mystery and
suspense’
3. ‘I want to see more scenes of the stalker
following the girl as it would emphasis
how long he has followed her’
‘I think the montage should
be faded over some more
shots to show how much he
follows her’
‘I think that Katie should
look out the window and
see a figure in the dark
which makes her panic’