Audience Feedback

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3. The general people I asked for their opinion on the qualities was my
family; where the ages range from 40-80. From the audience
feedback I received I found that my:
Strengths were:
 Informative
 Conventional
And my weaknesses were:
 Entertaining
 Eye Catching
I then posted the links on numerous social networking sites where the
majority of my feedback was from my target audience; Teens.

8. Follow the link on blogger, to see
any latest likes, dislikes, comments
and views.

9. Strengths
 Informative
 Follows all the conventions of a documentary, radio
trailer and print advert
 Flows well between different interviews
 Good relevance to the topic
 Interviews are short and quirky, and interesting
 Consistent camera work makes the work more
professional
 Creative title ‘short cuts’
 Wide range of interviews and opinions
 Good choice of music

10. Weaknesses
 Include more about benefits of hair treatment and
why people value their hair so much that they are
willing to spend so much on it
 More information on how they style their hair on a
daily basis
 Rustly background noise
 Volume changes
 Include celebrity influences

11. Follows the
correct
conventions that
print adverts
should
Very professional,
looks like a real
print advert
Very creative main
image,
immediately you
can tell the topic of
the documentary
I think the editing
of the hair could
be a bit tighter
The main image is
very creative,
however I think you
should have
included even more
hair types
Love the main
image, but maybe
a boy version of the
hair as well would
have been even
better

12. To conclude, I found that my audience particularly liked the creativity of the
title ‘Short Cuts’ which was made from hair and the wide range of
interviews. However, content was the biggest weakness, my target
audience said it was very informative and interesting, however some
wanted more information about celebrities and also more from the
Nigerian hairdresser interview. Some also commented on the rustling
behind some of the interviews and the volume changes, which could
have been improved. The print advert was said to follow all the correct
conventions and my target audience immediately could tell what the
topic of the documentary was through the creative main image.
The graph at the start showed that the 40-80 year old audience didn’t think
it was very interesting or entertaining. However, looking at the actual
target audience for my specific documentary (teenagers) the feedback
was very positive in saying that they found it interesting. This shows that
my documentary was successful in pleasing its intended target
audience, which I am extremely happy with.