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The Effect of Television Viewing on Children’s Behavioral
Development
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Walden University
MS Psychology – I/O Psychology
PSYC-6393 (Capstone)
September 29, 2019
Abstract
Table of Contents
Introduction…………………………………………………………
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Contemporary
Issues…………………………………………………………..5
Background
Definitions…………………………………………………..…...6
Problem
Statement…………………………………………………………….7
Integrated Literature
Review…………………………………………………..9
Critical
Analysis……………………………………………………………….
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Resolution……………………………………………………………
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Introduction
Child behavioral development is important to every parent,
society and the nation at large. When children are brought up in
a well-mannered way through instilling good behaviors in them,
parents as well as the society finds peace and joy in the
children. Nevertheless, due to the changing nature of the
society, children brought up has greatly changed. [<--Sentence
structure: As a reader, this sentence was hard for me to follow
as not all points within the sentence were clear and or clearly
connected. Example: Parents have been raising children
differently in tandem with societal changes] Technology has
impacted the behavior of children and continues to change their
lives differently each day. [<--APA: Is this point supported by a
source? Per APA, each sentence that provides information from
a source, or needs to be supported by a source, should be cited.
This is to ensure points are supported and accidental plagiarism
is avoided] The availability and accessibility of technological
gadgets such as cellphones, computers, television by children is
increasing every day. This paper focuses on investigating on
how television viewing has influenced behavioral development
among children below 18 years of age. Research studies about
child behaviors is greatly influenced by what they watch in
television, online, movies and peers more than the influence and
guidelines they get from their parents and close relatives. [<--
Connection and flow: As a reader, the connection between this
point and the previous one wasn’t quite clear to me. For
instance, this point seems more general than the previous point
which seems like a purpose statement for the paper]
Children hostile behaviors are increasing tremendously
currently in different ways. [<--Connection and flow: As a
reader, I wasn’t always following the connection and flow
among points. For instance, some points from the previous
paragraph seem connected to points in this paragraph, such as
the focus on children’s behavior in connection to technology.
For strong connection and flow, I suggest keeping like / similar
topics and points together] The influences children get while
watching television are both positive and negative. For instance,
child bullying in schools, drug use, early introduction into sex,
malnutrition and obesity, aggressive and violent behaviors and
prosocial and educational benefits are some of the influence
children get from watching television. [<--Sentence structure:
As a reader, some sentences were hard for me to follow. For
instance, not all wording within this sentence was clear and or
clearly connected. For clear and complete sentences, I suggest
ensuring wording within sentences are clear and clearly
connected and sentences follow subjectverbobject as a structure.
Example: For instance, television may influencechildren to
become involved in drug use and early sex, develop eating
disorders, or partake in bullying and other aggressive and
violent behaviors. The highlighting and font correspond to the
parts of the sentence: yellow highlighting in bold type=subject;
green highlighting in underlined type=verb; blue highlighting in
italicized type=object] However, the negative effects are of high
concern since they make the child antisocial and eventually
turns the child inhumane. The educative episodes in television
enhances the vital educational skills for children during their
preschool period hence improving the academic performance of
the child. Nevertheless, “television viewing in infancy is
disruptive to play; it reduces the quality and quantity of child-
parent interactions and is associated with
inattentive/hyperactive behaviors, lower executive functions,
and language delay, at least in the short-term” (Kostyrka-
Allchorne, K., Cooper, N. R., & Simpson, A., 2017). [<--
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Contemporary Issue
There are various contemporary issues that are meaningful when
discussing the effects of television watching among children:
(1) the increase of juvenile delinquency behaviors which is
attributed to imitations from television (de Leeuw, R. N. H.,
Kleemans, M., Rozendaal, E., Anschütz, D. J., & Buijzen, M.,
2015); (2) rise in obesity among young children due to too much
time taken watching television and consumption of snack among
the young children (Nikkelen, S. W. C., Vossen, H. G. M., &
Valkenburg, P. M., 2015); (3) increase in drug and alcohol
abuse among children as influenced by the ads children see in
television among other key contemporary factors. All these
factors significantly influence the behavioral development of
children and thus appropriate actions should be taken to revert
the trend. This paper intends to find the changing life of
children dur to the introduction and continuous use of television
among children.
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Problem Statement
The problem is that many children are developing extraordinary
behaviors which their parents and guardians don’t even
understand how they got the behaviors. Juvenile delinquency
has increased more significantly due to these adopted behaviors.
Children are become obese and have developed critical medical
problems because of too much time children take watching
television than playing and doing other physical exercises
useful to their health wellbeing. A research done by the
University of Michigan found that just being awake and in the
room with the television for several hours a day poses risk of
obesity at ages three to four-and-a-half. [<--Cohesion and flow:
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wasn’t quite following the cohesion and flow of the topic and
sections of the paper] Children effected by this will have weight
issues that continue into adulthood resulting in serious and
complicated medical challenges (Michael Rich, M.D., S. Jean
Emans, M.D., Elizabeth R. Woods, M.D., M.P.H., Robert H.
DuRant, Ph.D., 2013). Children watch the most television on
weekends, in doing so this affects their body mass index (BMI),
and can lead to obesity in adulthood. A study done by
researchers from Michigan University and colleagues while
investigating question whether physical activity, dieting,
inactive behavior or television viewing predicted BMI among
children in the ages of 3- to 7 years. Research have found that
lack of physical activity and television viewing are common
factors for becoming overweight. Watching television was
considered a higher influence than dieting. Inactivity and
television viewing became stronger predictors as children aged.
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Another serious problem a child is exposed to while watching
television is the overweight problem. Previous studies gathered
were based on adults the age of 26, and how much television
watched as children. Research found that "17% of overweight,
15% of raised serum cholesterol, 17% of smoking, and 15% of
poor fitness can be attributed to watching television for more
than 2 hours a day during childhood and adolescence." After
monitoring for perplexing variable. Therefore, when children
watch television too much, results are that they are likely to
become overweight problem at an old age.
A key problem for parents and the society with children
currently is the information children get from television about
sexuality and relationships, sexually transmitted diseases as
well as birth control measures which most parents, schools even
religious denominations fail to talk with their children about.
Therefore, children are left with no option but turning to
television where all the information about sex is available. The
sexual content which is available on television is mostly for
adults, hence, children are sexually exploited by what they
watch in soap operas, music videos, prime time shows and
advertisements which all contain lots of sexual content, but
usually nothing about contraception or safer sex (Labaš, S. D.,
& Ljubičić, M., 2016). According to American Journal Assc
(2015), adolescents that are exposed to sexual content displayed
on TV are more likely to impregnate or become pregnant.
Researchers found even after monitoring for other risk factors,
adolescent pregnancy increased with more sexual exposure on
television. Alcohol use among children is initiated by the
frequent advertisement that runs through the television while
watching prime shows. Children are therefore introduced to
alcohol use while at their tender age and hence affects greatly
their behavioral development.
Therefore, the major problems that arise to children while
watching television are earlier sexual orientation, overweight,
drug abuse and lack of sleep due to too much time watching
television. This problem requires a lot of attention to protect
children for bad behavior development.
Integrated Literature Review
Various studies have been conducted on the affect television
viewing and child development are similar in various parts of
the world. The effect television viewing influences children are
dependent on the age range of the child and the duration the
child takes watching TV in a single day. A study done by Ling-
Yi Lin at el (2015) on television exposure and how it effects
developmental skills among young children. The study was
based in Taiwan where a sample of 150 children ages between
15 months and 36 months were interviewed on the effect
television viewing has on language, cognitive and motor
development skills.
Data Collection Procedures and Data Analysis Used in the
Study
Lin-Yi Lin et al (2015) conducted the research at Southern
Taiwan university medical center on pediatric outpatient clinics
after the National Cheng Kung University Hospital gave the
ethical clearance license to conduct the study. Parents and
caregivers were requested to allow their children to participate
in the study by signing a written informed consent for the same.
The children who participated in the study were divided into
two broad groups, i.e. those who frequently watched television
and those who watched television infrequently. After the
grouping, those who rarely watched TV were used as control
group for the study. Both children and the parents/caregivers
were participants in a study where questions were tailored
towards them. One question the parents/caregivers were asked
was if the child use any source of entertainment such as
television, smartphone, iPad, and computer (Lin-Yi Lin et al,
2015).
The measures studied were developmental assessment and
demography. Based on the developmental assessment of
children, language skills development and the intellectual
development of the child. Demographic information collected
during the study were gender, age, birth order, weight, height,
preschool attendance, care providers, media used, and time
spent on each of these activities (Lin-Yi Lin et al, 2015). The
parental and family characteristics included marital status,
ethnic group, parent highest education level, and employment
status is part of the demographic information collected from
parents or caregivers and children. SPSS statistical software
was used for the analysis and appropriate statistics were
recorded.
Results
The study by Ling-Yi Lin et al (2015), the outcome of the study
showed that children that frequently watched television (137.2
min per day) had a higher probability of experiencing delayed
cognitive, language, and motor development skills than children
who infrequently watched television (16.3 min per day). There
is an increase of delayed language development when a child is
more exposed to viewing television. According to Ling, et al
(2015), children who were often exposed to television were at
risk for delayed motor development skills than those who were
infrequently exposed (OR = 3.7). Children exposed to TV at an
early age experiences language development as they grow.
The article addressed is relevant to the study since it provides
background on the influence television viewing has on children.
It forms part of the support from the study based on the effect
television viewing have on the child’s behavioral development.
Literature Review II
Child developmental behaviors studies has been done by various
researchers. More specifically, the effects technology has on
children has been done. Television viewing and use of phones
as well as social media access has made more negative effects
on children as compared to positive impacts. Four articles will
be analyzed and integrated to support the literature of the
research topic. The contributions the studies have made to the
topic, the methods of data collection used for the study and the
results of the research.
Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K. (2013) studied the
influence of excessive television watching on little children – at
preschool age. The study involved the examination on how
social support from family members influences children to
watch television and the outcome of the social support. The
study involved a random sample 129 parents of pre-school
children of ages between 2 and 5 years old (Li, K., Jurkowski, J.
M., & Davison, K. K., 2013). The research questions were
administered to the caregivers on how they socially support
their children to watch television. The frequency of allowing
their children to watch television was considered and then the
behavior changes of their children, i.e. physical activities,
eating activities, weight, stress perception and management as
well as symptoms of depression (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., &
Davison, K. K., 2013). The social support which children
receive from nonfamily members was also measured and
recorded (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013).
The findings from the study shows that children took
approximately three hours to watch television per day (Li, K.,
Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013). The increased time
of watching TV per day resulted to poor family functioning,
increased obesity among the children, rise in depression cases
among the children, increased maternal stress had a direct
association with the time the child takes watching television per
day. The study also reported that children reduced their playing
time to watch television hence increase in obesity among the
children (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013).
Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R. (2016) studied whether the difficult
behaviors of a child at earlier years were associated with
television watching more frequently at this age. The time
children watched television per day has a significant influence
of their behaviors, i.e. health behavior, social interaction, their
achievements both at the early and late time (Ansari, A., &
Crosnoe, R., 2016, Christakis, 2009). The more the time
children take watching television, the more the deterioration of
the behaviors of the child (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016).
The study reported that children between ages two and five
years watched television for approximately two hours a day
(Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R.
(2016) included several independent variables such as the age
the age of the child, the economic status of the parents, the
number of siblings in the family, the region where the child is
from, the race of the child, the marital status of the parents and
the migration status of the child as well as the preschool going
status of the child. A sample of 6, 250 children born in US were
sampled and used for the study (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R.,
2016).
The result of the study shows that the hypersensitive behaviors
of the child were associated with television watching (Ansari,
A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). The behaviors are nevertheless not
very aggressive (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). Less
disadvantaged families allowed children to watch television for
more time as opposed to advantaged families (Ansari, A., &
Crosnoe, R., 2016).
Another study by Kostyrka-Allchorne, K., Cooper, N. R., &
Simpson, A. (n.d.) where the association between child’
development and cognitive behavior and television viewing.
According to Kostyrka-Allchorne et al (n.d.) where children 14
years or less were involved in the study, reported that the age of
the child determines the duration the child takes to watch
television per day. Older children – adolescents – watched
television more than the younger ones – less than 5 year. The
behavioral influence increased with the duration taken to watch
television. Nevertheless, the adolescents watched education
shows more than their young ones, hence they were beneficial
to them (Kostyrka-Allchorne et al, n.d.). Linebarger & Walker,
(2005) however reported that when infants watch the educative
shows with the adolescents, their language development was
affected negatively.
Kostyrka-Allchorne et al (n.d.) indicated that television
watching among the children lowers the likelihood of them
acquire and learn languages and communication skills. The
communication skills and the language used by children who
spend more time per day to watch television is closely
associated with the shows they watch (Kostyrka-Allchorne et al,
n.d.). As Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R. (2016) reported, Kostyrka-
Allchorne et al (n.d.) similarly founded out that the age and
family social economic status contributed immensely to time the
child watch television per day. Television watching reduces the
playtime of the child, the interaction time between parents and
children, lower responsiveness and delay in language
development among the children (Kostyrka-Allchorne et al,
n.d.).
Zhao, J. et al (2018) studied the effect of excessive television
watching among the children on their sleep time, the body mass
index and their interaction with their parent. A sample of
20,324 – three to four years of age children were used in the
study (Zhao, J. et al, 2018). Both parents and children were
asked questions. Specifically, the duration the child took
watching television, playing, sleeping, interacting with their
parent as well as the age and height of the child were recorded.
The difficult questions were answered by parents. The study
was based in Shanghai – China.
The results show that the increased time to watch television
affected the psychological well-being of the child. The
association between sleeping time, parents’ interaction, time
playing were neatively associated with time taken watch
television (Zhao, J. et al, 2018). This is in line with the
previous studies.
Therefore, child development behaviors and television watching
are negatively associated. The more time a child took watching
television lowers his/her development skills. Parents and
caregivers should control television watching for their children
to enable them development their behaviors well. The four
articles used of the synthesize and integration are listed below;
1. Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K. (2013). Social
support may buffer the effect of intrafamilial stressors on
preschool children's television viewing time in low-income
families. Childhood Obesity, 9(6), 484-91.
http://dx.doi.org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1089/chi.2013.0071
2. Kostyrka-Allchorne, K., Cooper, N. R., & Simpson, A. (n.d.).
The relationship between television exposure and children’s
cognition and behaviour: A systematic review.
DEVELOPMENTAL REVIEW, 44, 19–58. https://doi-
org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1016/j.dr.2016.12.002
3. Zhao, J., Zhang, Y., Jiang, F., Ip, P., Ho, F. K. W., Zhang,
Y., & Huang, H. (2018). Excessive Screen Time and
Psychosocial Well-Being: The Mediating Role of Body Mass
Index, Sleep Duration, and Parent-Child Interaction. The
Journal of Pediatrics, 202, 157–162.e1. https://doi-
org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1016/j.jpeds.2018.06.029
4. Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R. (2016). Children’s hyperactivity,
television viewing, and the potential for child effects. Children
and Youth Services Review, 61, 135–140. https://doi-
org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1016/j.childyouth.2015.12.018
Summary
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• Certain security attributes must be present in all
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• Best practices, standards, and audits establish a low-
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• Audits must be both meaningful and measurable
– Often the most measurable things aren’t all that
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• Common security-related best practices/standards
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– Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act (HIPAA)
– Payment Card Industry Data Security Standard (PCI DSS)
– ETSI Cyber Security Technical Committee (TC-CYBER)
– ISO/IEC 27000 Standard family (ISO27K)
• ISO 27001 – Security management systems
• ISO 27002 – Code of practice for InfoSec controls
– COBIT - Control Objectives for Information and related
Technology
– NIST Cybersecurity Framework
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– Not the audit score
• Security of critical components relies on
– Step #1: Standard audit
– Step #2: World-class focus
• Sometimes security audit standards and best
practices proven through experience are in conflict
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• Four basic security policy considerations are
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– Enforceable: Policies without enforcement are not
valuable
– Small: Keep it simple and current
– Online: Policy info needs to be online and searchable
– Inclusive: Good policy requires analysis in order to include
computing and networking elements in the local nat’l
infrastructure environment
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• Culture of security is one where standard operating
procedures provide a secure environment
• Ideal environment marries creativity and interest in
new technologies with caution and a healthy
aversion to risk
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• Organizations should be explicitly committed to
infrastructure simplification
• Common problems found in design and operation of
national infrastructure
– Lack of generalization
– Clouding the obvious
– Stream-of-consciousness design
– Nonuniformity
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• How to simplify a national infrastructure
environment
– Reduce its size
– Generalize concepts
– Clean interfaces
– Highlight patterns
– Reduce clutter
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• Hundred percent end-user awareness is impractical;
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decision-makers
– Senior Managers
– Designers and developers
– Administrators
– Security team members
• Create low-cost, high-return activities to certify and
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• Create and establish career paths and reward
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• These elements should be present in national
infrastructure environments
– Attractive salaries
– Career paths
– Senior managers
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• Companies and agencies being considered for
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• Companies and agencies must do a better job of
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– Past damage
– Past prevention
– Past response
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  • 1. 1 2 The Effect of Television Viewing on Children’s Behavioral Development Shauna Davis Comment by Veronica Oliver: Hi, Shauna! Welcome to the Writing Center. My name is Veronica, and I’ll be reviewing your paper today. You can read more about me on the Writing Center’s Meet Our Staff page. You noted that you would like feedback on grammar and sentence structure. I will certainly provide you feedback on this. During the process of my review, I might provide other suggestions for revising based on patterns I see in your paper. However, since I will not be commenting on every instance of an issue, make sure you apply my feedback to your whole paper. Please email me at [email protected] if you have any questions about my comments! Let’s get started Walden University MS Psychology – I/O Psychology PSYC-6393 (Capstone) September 29, 2019 Abstract Table of Contents
  • 2. Introduction………………………………………………………… …………4 Contemporary Issues…………………………………………………………..5 Background Definitions…………………………………………………..…...6 Problem Statement…………………………………………………………….7 Integrated Literature Review…………………………………………………..9 Critical Analysis………………………………………………………………. TBD Problem Resolution…………………………………………………………… TBD Social Implications………………………………………………………… ….TBD Capstone Reflection……………………………………………………………T BD References…………………………………………………………… ………...TBD Introduction Child behavioral development is important to every parent, society and the nation at large. When children are brought up in a well-mannered way through instilling good behaviors in them, parents as well as the society finds peace and joy in the children. Nevertheless, due to the changing nature of the society, children brought up has greatly changed. [<--Sentence structure: As a reader, this sentence was hard for me to follow as not all points within the sentence were clear and or clearly connected. Example: Parents have been raising children
  • 3. differently in tandem with societal changes] Technology has impacted the behavior of children and continues to change their lives differently each day. [<--APA: Is this point supported by a source? Per APA, each sentence that provides information from a source, or needs to be supported by a source, should be cited. This is to ensure points are supported and accidental plagiarism is avoided] The availability and accessibility of technological gadgets such as cellphones, computers, television by children is increasing every day. This paper focuses on investigating on how television viewing has influenced behavioral development among children below 18 years of age. Research studies about child behaviors is greatly influenced by what they watch in television, online, movies and peers more than the influence and guidelines they get from their parents and close relatives. [<-- Connection and flow: As a reader, the connection between this point and the previous one wasn’t quite clear to me. For instance, this point seems more general than the previous point which seems like a purpose statement for the paper] Children hostile behaviors are increasing tremendously currently in different ways. [<--Connection and flow: As a reader, I wasn’t always following the connection and flow among points. For instance, some points from the previous paragraph seem connected to points in this paragraph, such as the focus on children’s behavior in connection to technology. For strong connection and flow, I suggest keeping like / similar topics and points together] The influences children get while watching television are both positive and negative. For instance, child bullying in schools, drug use, early introduction into sex, malnutrition and obesity, aggressive and violent behaviors and prosocial and educational benefits are some of the influence children get from watching television. [<--Sentence structure: As a reader, some sentences were hard for me to follow. For instance, not all wording within this sentence was clear and or clearly connected. For clear and complete sentences, I suggest ensuring wording within sentences are clear and clearly connected and sentences follow subjectverbobject as a structure.
  • 4. Example: For instance, television may influencechildren to become involved in drug use and early sex, develop eating disorders, or partake in bullying and other aggressive and violent behaviors. The highlighting and font correspond to the parts of the sentence: yellow highlighting in bold type=subject; green highlighting in underlined type=verb; blue highlighting in italicized type=object] However, the negative effects are of high concern since they make the child antisocial and eventually turns the child inhumane. The educative episodes in television enhances the vital educational skills for children during their preschool period hence improving the academic performance of the child. Nevertheless, “television viewing in infancy is disruptive to play; it reduces the quality and quantity of child- parent interactions and is associated with inattentive/hyperactive behaviors, lower executive functions, and language delay, at least in the short-term” (Kostyrka- Allchorne, K., Cooper, N. R., & Simpson, A., 2017). [<-- Introduction and connection and flow: Since sources are used to support claims, they would usually not begin or end a paragraph. That said, as a reader, it wasn’t quite clear to me if all of these points in these introduction paragraphs were part of the introduction. More specially, the first paragraph of a paper is usually the introductory paragraph that introduces the overall topic of the paper for readers and ends with a thesis (the main claims you argue in the paper) and or a purpose statement, so readers know what will be covered in the paper regarding the topic introduced. Example purpose statement: In this paper, I will discuss xxx] Comment by Veronica Oliver: Connection and flow: You might check out our blogs on connection and flow and transitions for tips on ensuring strong organization, connection, and flow among points Comment by Veronica Oliver: Connection and flow: Here is an example of where a transitions (“For instance”) helped connect points for me as a reader as points move from a claim to an example to support the claim Comment by Veronica Oliver: Sentence structure: You might check out our page on sentence structure—on the
  • 5. right side you can find the tab for “knowledge check” where you can test your knowledge of sentence structure Comment by Veronica Oliver: APA: This is correct—using “&” as opposed to “and” when a source is cited parenthetically (when it is in parentheses) Comment by Veronica Oliver: APA: Author’s first name initials wouldn’t be included in a citation. As well, when a direct quote is included, the page number where the quote was found would be included (as “p. xx”). For sources with no page numbers, the paragraph number would be included (as “para. xx”) Our page on citation includes an overview of how to cite, how often, and the importance of doing so Contemporary Issue There are various contemporary issues that are meaningful when discussing the effects of television watching among children: (1) the increase of juvenile delinquency behaviors which is attributed to imitations from television (de Leeuw, R. N. H., Kleemans, M., Rozendaal, E., Anschütz, D. J., & Buijzen, M., 2015); (2) rise in obesity among young children due to too much time taken watching television and consumption of snack among the young children (Nikkelen, S. W. C., Vossen, H. G. M., & Valkenburg, P. M., 2015); (3) increase in drug and alcohol abuse among children as influenced by the ads children see in television among other key contemporary factors. All these factors significantly influence the behavioral development of children and thus appropriate actions should be taken to revert the trend. This paper intends to find the changing life of children dur to the introduction and continuous use of television among children. Comment by Veronica Oliver: Spelling: Do you mean “due” here as opposed to “dur”? Background Definitions This section requires a minimum of four key terms surrounding your topic along with their scholarly, peer-reviewed definitions.
  • 6. ***Do not use a dictionary or encyclopedia as a definition reference Problem Statement The problem is that many children are developing extraordinary behaviors which their parents and guardians don’t even understand how they got the behaviors. Juvenile delinquency has increased more significantly due to these adopted behaviors. Children are become obese and have developed critical medical problems because of too much time children take watching television than playing and doing other physical exercises useful to their health wellbeing. A research done by the University of Michigan found that just being awake and in the room with the television for several hours a day poses risk of obesity at ages three to four-and-a-half. [<--Cohesion and flow: As a reader, it wasn’t quite clear to me what the focus of the paper was. For instance, earlier it seemed that the focus was on violent behavior as a result of children watching television, whereas here the focus seems to be obesity. As well, this section seemed like an additional introduction section, so I wasn’t quite following the cohesion and flow of the topic and sections of the paper] Children effected by this will have weight issues that continue into adulthood resulting in serious and complicated medical challenges (Michael Rich, M.D., S. Jean Emans, M.D., Elizabeth R. Woods, M.D., M.P.H., Robert H. DuRant, Ph.D., 2013). Children watch the most television on weekends, in doing so this affects their body mass index (BMI), and can lead to obesity in adulthood. A study done by researchers from Michigan University and colleagues while investigating question whether physical activity, dieting, inactive behavior or television viewing predicted BMI among children in the ages of 3- to 7 years. Research have found that lack of physical activity and television viewing are common factors for becoming overweight. Watching television was considered a higher influence than dieting. Inactivity and television viewing became stronger predictors as children aged.
  • 7. Comment by Veronica Oliver: Cohesion and flow: Our archived webinar on cohesion and flow covers topics such as transitions, thesis statements, and organization Comment by Veronica Oliver: Thanks for sharing your work with me, Shauna! Since I focused on some main patterns in your work, I will end my review here for today, so you can work on applying my feedback to your paper as a whole. I would love to work with you again, so once you apply my feedback to this draft, or another assignment, you might sign up for another review with me. Here are my main suggestions for revising this draft: Revise introduction Ensure strong organization, cohesion, and flow Revise sentences for structure and clarity Revise per APA (citations and references) I commented on your reference list so make sure you check that out. � Scholarly writing takes practice. Writing goals help you to focus on the skills needed to grow and advance. Our new goal plan pilot supports students’ writing goals through guaranteed access to four paper review appointments with the same Writing Center instructor. You’ll receive individualized feedback and resources designed to maximize progress. To enroll, complete this module and use the submission form at the end to join the pilot. We hope to see you soon! After you review my comments, you can provide feedback regarding your review and experience with the Writing Center: How was your experience with the Writing Center? Take a short survey to let us know how we’re doing!
  • 8. Another serious problem a child is exposed to while watching television is the overweight problem. Previous studies gathered were based on adults the age of 26, and how much television watched as children. Research found that "17% of overweight, 15% of raised serum cholesterol, 17% of smoking, and 15% of poor fitness can be attributed to watching television for more than 2 hours a day during childhood and adolescence." After monitoring for perplexing variable. Therefore, when children watch television too much, results are that they are likely to become overweight problem at an old age. A key problem for parents and the society with children currently is the information children get from television about sexuality and relationships, sexually transmitted diseases as well as birth control measures which most parents, schools even religious denominations fail to talk with their children about. Therefore, children are left with no option but turning to television where all the information about sex is available. The sexual content which is available on television is mostly for adults, hence, children are sexually exploited by what they watch in soap operas, music videos, prime time shows and advertisements which all contain lots of sexual content, but usually nothing about contraception or safer sex (Labaš, S. D., & Ljubičić, M., 2016). According to American Journal Assc (2015), adolescents that are exposed to sexual content displayed on TV are more likely to impregnate or become pregnant. Researchers found even after monitoring for other risk factors, adolescent pregnancy increased with more sexual exposure on television. Alcohol use among children is initiated by the frequent advertisement that runs through the television while watching prime shows. Children are therefore introduced to alcohol use while at their tender age and hence affects greatly their behavioral development. Therefore, the major problems that arise to children while watching television are earlier sexual orientation, overweight, drug abuse and lack of sleep due to too much time watching
  • 9. television. This problem requires a lot of attention to protect children for bad behavior development. Integrated Literature Review Various studies have been conducted on the affect television viewing and child development are similar in various parts of the world. The effect television viewing influences children are dependent on the age range of the child and the duration the child takes watching TV in a single day. A study done by Ling- Yi Lin at el (2015) on television exposure and how it effects developmental skills among young children. The study was based in Taiwan where a sample of 150 children ages between 15 months and 36 months were interviewed on the effect television viewing has on language, cognitive and motor development skills. Data Collection Procedures and Data Analysis Used in the Study Lin-Yi Lin et al (2015) conducted the research at Southern Taiwan university medical center on pediatric outpatient clinics after the National Cheng Kung University Hospital gave the ethical clearance license to conduct the study. Parents and caregivers were requested to allow their children to participate in the study by signing a written informed consent for the same. The children who participated in the study were divided into two broad groups, i.e. those who frequently watched television and those who watched television infrequently. After the grouping, those who rarely watched TV were used as control group for the study. Both children and the parents/caregivers were participants in a study where questions were tailored towards them. One question the parents/caregivers were asked was if the child use any source of entertainment such as television, smartphone, iPad, and computer (Lin-Yi Lin et al, 2015). The measures studied were developmental assessment and demography. Based on the developmental assessment of
  • 10. children, language skills development and the intellectual development of the child. Demographic information collected during the study were gender, age, birth order, weight, height, preschool attendance, care providers, media used, and time spent on each of these activities (Lin-Yi Lin et al, 2015). The parental and family characteristics included marital status, ethnic group, parent highest education level, and employment status is part of the demographic information collected from parents or caregivers and children. SPSS statistical software was used for the analysis and appropriate statistics were recorded. Results The study by Ling-Yi Lin et al (2015), the outcome of the study showed that children that frequently watched television (137.2 min per day) had a higher probability of experiencing delayed cognitive, language, and motor development skills than children who infrequently watched television (16.3 min per day). There is an increase of delayed language development when a child is more exposed to viewing television. According to Ling, et al (2015), children who were often exposed to television were at risk for delayed motor development skills than those who were infrequently exposed (OR = 3.7). Children exposed to TV at an early age experiences language development as they grow. The article addressed is relevant to the study since it provides background on the influence television viewing has on children. It forms part of the support from the study based on the effect television viewing have on the child’s behavioral development. Literature Review II Child developmental behaviors studies has been done by various
  • 11. researchers. More specifically, the effects technology has on children has been done. Television viewing and use of phones as well as social media access has made more negative effects on children as compared to positive impacts. Four articles will be analyzed and integrated to support the literature of the research topic. The contributions the studies have made to the topic, the methods of data collection used for the study and the results of the research. Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K. (2013) studied the influence of excessive television watching on little children – at preschool age. The study involved the examination on how social support from family members influences children to watch television and the outcome of the social support. The study involved a random sample 129 parents of pre-school children of ages between 2 and 5 years old (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013). The research questions were administered to the caregivers on how they socially support their children to watch television. The frequency of allowing their children to watch television was considered and then the behavior changes of their children, i.e. physical activities, eating activities, weight, stress perception and management as well as symptoms of depression (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013). The social support which children receive from nonfamily members was also measured and recorded (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013). The findings from the study shows that children took approximately three hours to watch television per day (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013). The increased time of watching TV per day resulted to poor family functioning, increased obesity among the children, rise in depression cases among the children, increased maternal stress had a direct association with the time the child takes watching television per day. The study also reported that children reduced their playing time to watch television hence increase in obesity among the children (Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K., 2013). Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R. (2016) studied whether the difficult
  • 12. behaviors of a child at earlier years were associated with television watching more frequently at this age. The time children watched television per day has a significant influence of their behaviors, i.e. health behavior, social interaction, their achievements both at the early and late time (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016, Christakis, 2009). The more the time children take watching television, the more the deterioration of the behaviors of the child (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). The study reported that children between ages two and five years watched television for approximately two hours a day (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R. (2016) included several independent variables such as the age the age of the child, the economic status of the parents, the number of siblings in the family, the region where the child is from, the race of the child, the marital status of the parents and the migration status of the child as well as the preschool going status of the child. A sample of 6, 250 children born in US were sampled and used for the study (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). The result of the study shows that the hypersensitive behaviors of the child were associated with television watching (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). The behaviors are nevertheless not very aggressive (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). Less disadvantaged families allowed children to watch television for more time as opposed to advantaged families (Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R., 2016). Another study by Kostyrka-Allchorne, K., Cooper, N. R., & Simpson, A. (n.d.) where the association between child’ development and cognitive behavior and television viewing. According to Kostyrka-Allchorne et al (n.d.) where children 14 years or less were involved in the study, reported that the age of the child determines the duration the child takes to watch television per day. Older children – adolescents – watched television more than the younger ones – less than 5 year. The behavioral influence increased with the duration taken to watch television. Nevertheless, the adolescents watched education
  • 13. shows more than their young ones, hence they were beneficial to them (Kostyrka-Allchorne et al, n.d.). Linebarger & Walker, (2005) however reported that when infants watch the educative shows with the adolescents, their language development was affected negatively. Kostyrka-Allchorne et al (n.d.) indicated that television watching among the children lowers the likelihood of them acquire and learn languages and communication skills. The communication skills and the language used by children who spend more time per day to watch television is closely associated with the shows they watch (Kostyrka-Allchorne et al, n.d.). As Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R. (2016) reported, Kostyrka- Allchorne et al (n.d.) similarly founded out that the age and family social economic status contributed immensely to time the child watch television per day. Television watching reduces the playtime of the child, the interaction time between parents and children, lower responsiveness and delay in language development among the children (Kostyrka-Allchorne et al, n.d.). Zhao, J. et al (2018) studied the effect of excessive television watching among the children on their sleep time, the body mass index and their interaction with their parent. A sample of 20,324 – three to four years of age children were used in the study (Zhao, J. et al, 2018). Both parents and children were asked questions. Specifically, the duration the child took watching television, playing, sleeping, interacting with their parent as well as the age and height of the child were recorded. The difficult questions were answered by parents. The study was based in Shanghai – China. The results show that the increased time to watch television affected the psychological well-being of the child. The association between sleeping time, parents’ interaction, time playing were neatively associated with time taken watch television (Zhao, J. et al, 2018). This is in line with the previous studies. Therefore, child development behaviors and television watching
  • 14. are negatively associated. The more time a child took watching television lowers his/her development skills. Parents and caregivers should control television watching for their children to enable them development their behaviors well. The four articles used of the synthesize and integration are listed below; 1. Li, K., Jurkowski, J. M., & Davison, K. K. (2013). Social support may buffer the effect of intrafamilial stressors on preschool children's television viewing time in low-income families. Childhood Obesity, 9(6), 484-91. http://dx.doi.org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1089/chi.2013.0071 2. Kostyrka-Allchorne, K., Cooper, N. R., & Simpson, A. (n.d.). The relationship between television exposure and children’s cognition and behaviour: A systematic review. DEVELOPMENTAL REVIEW, 44, 19–58. https://doi- org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1016/j.dr.2016.12.002 3. Zhao, J., Zhang, Y., Jiang, F., Ip, P., Ho, F. K. W., Zhang, Y., & Huang, H. (2018). Excessive Screen Time and Psychosocial Well-Being: The Mediating Role of Body Mass Index, Sleep Duration, and Parent-Child Interaction. The Journal of Pediatrics, 202, 157–162.e1. https://doi- org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1016/j.jpeds.2018.06.029 4. Ansari, A., & Crosnoe, R. (2016). Children’s hyperactivity, television viewing, and the potential for child effects. Children and Youth Services Review, 61, 135–140. https://doi- org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1016/j.childyouth.2015.12.018 Summary Example direction: “By now we have addressed four peer- reviewed articles, acknowledging the strengths and weaknesses of their perspectives as well as the focus or breadth of their scope relative to the overall problem of” [Capstone Topic] Critical Analysis
  • 15. Example direction: “This critical analysis will use the same four articles discussed in the integrated literature review” Origins, concepts and research methods of the present literature Example direction: “We will begin with an elemental definition of” Critique Example direction: “The most glaring deficiencies [OR strengths] must be seen holistically rather than specifically.” Specifically, etc.…Holistically, etc…. Summary Example: “In an attempt to acknowledge the literature on both narrow and broad scales, both primary and secondary sources were chosen for this critical analysis” Problem Resolution “The primary problems we can identify are” Problem 1 w/ Corrective Goal Problem 2 w/ Corrective Goal Social Implications Example: “Regarding social implications, we can separate the discussion into a ‘goals’ section and a ‘vision’ section, with the former being composed of short-term resolutions and consequences and the latter being composed of a long-term, synthetic possibility” Capstone Reflection Example: “This Capstone was expressive for me and served not only as a means of social inquiry but also as personal ventilation…” References Kostyrka-Allchorne, K., Cooper, N. R., & Simpson, A. (2017). The relationship between television exposure and children’s cognition and behaviour: A systematic review. Developmental Review, 44, 19–58. https://doi- org.ezp.waldenulibrary.org/10.1016/j.dr.2016.12.002
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  • 19. 2 • Certain security attributes must be present in all aspects and areas of national infrastructure to ensure maximum resilience against attack • Best practices, standards, and audits establish a low- water mark for all relevant organizations • Audits must be both meaningful and measurable – Often the most measurable things aren’t all that meaningful Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o m m o
  • 20. n a lity Introduction 3 • Common security-related best practices/standards – Federal Information Security Management Act (FISMA) – Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act (HIPAA) – Payment Card Industry Data Security Standard (PCI DSS) – ETSI Cyber Security Technical Committee (TC-CYBER) – ISO/IEC 27000 Standard family (ISO27K) • ISO 27001 – Security management systems • ISO 27002 – Code of practice for InfoSec controls – COBIT - Control Objectives for Information and related Technology – NIST Cybersecurity Framework Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a
  • 21. p te r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Introduction 4 Fig. 5.1 – Illustrative security audits for two organizations Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5
  • 22. – C o m m o n a lity 5 Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o m m o n
  • 23. a lity Fig. 5.2 – Relationship between meaningful and measurable requirements 6 • The primary motivation for proper infrastructure protection should be success based and economic – Not the audit score • Security of critical components relies on – Step #1: Standard audit – Step #2: World-class focus • Sometimes security audit standards and best practices proven through experience are in conflict Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 –
  • 24. C o m m o n a lity Meaningful Best Practices for Infrastructure Protection 7 Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o m m
  • 25. o n a lity Fig. 5.3 – Methodology to achieve world-class infrastructure protection practices 8 • Four basic security policy considerations are recommended – Enforceable: Policies without enforcement are not valuable – Small: Keep it simple and current – Online: Policy info needs to be online and searchable – Inclusive: Good policy requires analysis in order to include computing and networking elements in the local nat’l infrastructure environment Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p
  • 26. te r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Locally Relevant and Appropriate Security Policy 9 Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C
  • 27. o m m o n a lity Fig. 5.4 – Decision process for security policy analysis 10 • Create an organizational culture of security protection • Culture of security is one where standard operating procedures provide a secure environment • Ideal environment marries creativity and interest in new technologies with caution and a healthy aversion to risk Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te
  • 28. r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Culture of Security Protection 11 Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o m
  • 29. m o n a lity Fig. 5.5 – Spectrum of organizational culture of security options 12 • Organizations should be explicitly committed to infrastructure simplification • Common problems found in design and operation of national infrastructure – Lack of generalization – Clouding the obvious – Stream-of-consciousness design – Nonuniformity Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te
  • 30. r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Infrastructure Simplification 13 Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o m
  • 31. m o n a lity Fig. 5.6 – Sample cluttered engineering chart 14 Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o m m o n a lity
  • 32. Fig. 5.7 – Simplified engineering chart 15 • How to simplify a national infrastructure environment – Reduce its size – Generalize concepts – Clean interfaces – Highlight patterns – Reduce clutter Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o m m
  • 33. o n a lity Infrastructure Simplification 16 • Key decision-makers need certification and education programs • Hundred percent end-user awareness is impractical; instead focus on improving security competence of decision-makers – Senior Managers – Designers and developers – Administrators – Security team members • Create low-cost, high-return activities to certify and educate end users Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p
  • 34. te r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Certification and Education 17 Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te r 5 – C o
  • 35. m m o n a lity Fig. 5.8 – Return on investment (ROI) trends for security education 18 • Create and establish career paths and reward structures for security professionals • These elements should be present in national infrastructure environments – Attractive salaries – Career paths – Senior managers Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te
  • 36. r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Career Path and Reward Structure 19 • Companies and agencies being considered for national infrastructure work should be required to demonstrate past practice in live security incidents • Companies and agencies must do a better job of managing their inventory of live incidents Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p te
  • 37. r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Responsible Past Security Practice 20 • Companies and agencies being considered for national infrastructure work should provide evidence of the following past practices – Past damage – Past prevention – Past response Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a p
  • 38. te r 5 – C o m m o n a lity Responsible Past Security Practice 21 • A national commonality plan involves balancing the following concerns – Plethora of existing standards – Low-water mark versus world class – Existing commissions and boards Copyright © 2012, Elsevier Inc. All rights Reserved C h a