SlideShare a Scribd company logo
1 of 14
Evaluation
Will Stewart
Production Process Evaluation
Research
• I believe the greatest strength of my research to be my product research,
analysing the composition of similar products, the techniques used to create
them, and the reasoning behind the final result. By analysing these topics, I
acquired a better understanding of what material to include in my products,
and where they could be most appropriately placed to incite the desired
reaction from the audience. In regards to the weaknesses of my research, I
believe that I have yet to fully understand the products I chose, and how my
primary research is more personalised to my tastes and does not cover more
fundamental criteria, leaving it lacking in discernment of the types of people
responding to the surveys I sent out. If I were able to improve my research, I
would take a second look at my product research and see whether all aspects
of the chosen material have been covered, and whether the effects of these
individual aspects are dependent on each other. I think if I had done this, then
I would have been able to coordinate my own individual pieces more
efficiently, and would have been more capable of properly finding a place for
each asset I had planned to utilise.
Planning
• I believe the greatest strength of my planning is the specificity I have
provided on what I have planned to include, and why I have decided to use
such assets. As the project went further and became more developed, I
was able to fine-tune more details through the use of the provided
documents, expanding upon the planned themes, aesthetics, and
techniques employed in the project, and how they related to the
audience. Weakness-wise, I don’t believe that I fully understood the more
complex terms and aspects of what I was meant to include, such as the
various demographics and how they related to my project outside of the
target audience. Because of this, I think that I moved from one thing to
the next too quickly, without leaving enough room for elaboration on why
I had chosen these elements. If I had the opportunity to improve this area,
I would prioritise fleshing out anything that I believe is lacking in content.
Time Management
• In order to properly organise the different aspects of the project, a
schedule was provided that were allowed to design at our leisure, which I
used to place the products I knew I could complete swiftly first and
foremost. I organised the timeslots for each product based on skill level,
with the products incorporating techniques I was more familiar with
sooner on in the timeline, with the production of the ones I was less
experienced with occurring later, so that I had less distractions while I was
working on them. Thanks to this type of schedule I managed to
successfully complete my project on time, with room for improvements in
the coming weeks in areas that are comparatively lacking. I also never
completely set down the specifics of how I would complete the products,
allowing them to be malleable in how they were constructed and the time
necessitating their completion. If I had more time I believe I would be able
to give a final check to each product to make sure that everything is
streamlined and all assets are in proper coordination.
Technical Qualities
My personal preference for techniques
is to use simple and basic tools in
combination to produce greater effects.
The tools I use the most are the
polygonal lasso, magic wand, paint
bucket, eyedropper, and text tools.
While all of these are basic and
rudimentary, I prefer using tools that
have straightforward uses, allowing me
to focus more on the overall
composition of the piece and how
everything stacks together rather than
on how any single asset is going to reach
completion.
For more complex effects, I used images
obtained from scouring the internet that
fit the themes of the project, colour
levels to adjust the light and dark in
these images, a texture that bolstered
the surrounding assets, and regular
blending options. Most of those option
choices involved effects that made a
single asset stand out against others and
vice-versa, such as the bevel and
emboss, and outer and inner glows and
shadows.
The coordination and positioning of the
individual assets was central in
generating the desired effect in the
audience. For example the product in
the upper-left corner required careful
selecting, de-selecting, inverting, and
layer coordination to achieve the final
result. Similarly, the product in the
upper-right necessitated arranging the
images in a decreasing sense of scale in
relation to their position. This
resembles the professional product in
the decreasing scale, while the more
fine-tuned colour tones are more
present in the other product. The
professional product is far more
streamlined and fluid than what I have
made, in part because I have very little
skill and experience in artistic pursuits.
It is furthermore made by a
collaborative team rather than a single
designer, with a systematic delegation
to perfect each aspect.
Aesthetic Qualities
The foremost methodology of my project was to be
dreamlike, varied, and representative of the inner
material that each product advertised. To properly
demonstrate these themes I decided to spread my
project out across multiple mediums, being poster
and magazine-based in order to focus on the print
area of my skillset. To emphasize the phantasmal
quality I was aiming for I tried to incorporate
fantastic and vivid imagery mixed with symbolic
elements, creating a highly interpretive but bold
atmosphere. Colours, details, and abstract shapes
were the central design elements, as demonstrated
particularly in the posters.
Secondary aesthetics include deeply natural themes
and celestial imagery, creating a dichotomy between
familiar and down-to-earth scenery contrasted
against the alien expanses of the wider universe,
tying into the idea of thematic diversity. The natural
elements are evident in the second poster and front
cover, with the blacked-out trees taking up
prominent places in the image. The solar diagram
and psychedelic vortices in the first poster and DPS,
respectively, hint at the celestial elements, both
resembling cosmic phenomena.
When planning out my project, I wanted to
incorporate many disparate and contrasting
individual themes, and finding some way to make
them work in concert to produce the desired effects.
To make room for everything I needed to find a
system in which each influence was allotted room to
breathe while making space for the others, while still
fitting with the abstract aesthetic. This involved
placing things very closely together in some areas,
while simultaneously attempting to give each aspect
it’s due area.
From a production standpoint, I wanted these
products to seem realistic enough to actually exist
and be plausible. To drive this home, I used the
magazine-based portion of the project to iron out the
more real-world aspects, such as the time frame for
the game’s release and the interview with the
developer shining a light on the thoughts and
feelings put into the development process.
Audience Appeal
The main target audience of my project are ages fifteen to thirty-five, ranging from working to upper-
class socioeconomic backgrounds, and with a slightly greater focus on women than men. This aspect
in particular is displayed in the first poster and magazine double-page spread, where a woman’s
silhouette is the foremost layer, and the interview featured is between two women, where a
discussion on the interviewee’s circumstances as a woman in the gaming industry is presented.
Furthermore, the interviewed developer carries my own sentiments regarding the project, in that I
wanted to create something that was unique and nobody had ever seen before. The incorporation of
the wide variety of themes plays into this, working to appeal to an array of audiences through the
intellectual and creative values that they represent, acting as more specialised signals for more niche
markets. The questionnaire I designed for my research phase helped to divine what kinds of qualities
people would want to see in the project, and I noted that there were various opinions on how gender
factored into the project, which helped me to iron out how to properly construct the characters
involved in the DPS product.
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– The posters are both very crisp looking and aesthetically pleasing, using very well made colour
schemes.
– Both posters have a degree of mystery behind them, making the reader think deeper about
what it could possibly be about.
– The magazine cover follows the poster’s design in the idea that it shows mysterious patterns
and images.
– The main font used in the designs seems to fit the vibe given by the products.
– The information in the magazine is simply structured and gives the product more accessibility.
• What improvements could have been made to the product?
- The magazine cover could potentially hold more content to fill in the blanks (unless
the design is meant to be simplistic)
- The magazine cover could have a clearer main cover line rather than making the
smaller cover lines the same.
- The dps could have more interactivity with the reader in the space near the cogs
and wheels.
- Some more images like the posters would be a nice addition to the dps to keep the
reader thinking about the product.
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
I really like the design of the poster with the colour
wheel as it is very creative. The double page spread
has a good layout and the colour scheme of the
second poster works well
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
The layout of the front cover looks a bit unfinished
and could be improved with more headers and
images.
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– I loved the range of colours, and how you’ve put them together throughout all
of the products, They contrast with each other, however they work very well.
– Within your double page spread not only did I appreciate the graphics and
colours, I personally loved the actual article itself, very creative and literate.
– I could see your target audience clearly within your products, aimed toward
the more intellectual/women. This was conveyed very well through your work.
• What improvements could have been made to the product?
• The only improvement I have is potentially with the front cover product. I
felt it need more attention to detail particularly on the font, simply to
bring it up to the other products standard.
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
– I agree that I succeeded aesthetically and contextually, with the overall design and article being
received well by those who delivered feedback.
– Visually, there was more of a focus on the posters than the magazine products, and they had a more
direct impact rather than the more muted front cover or DPS.
– My target audience was made clear in multiple products, especially in the DPS, which favoured text
more than image.
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
I do not think that each product needs to be directly connected to one another, as while they are
more subtle than the posters, the front cover and DPS still do the job of attracting an audience
well, and injecting the more bombastic qualities from the posters may overcrowd the area,
leading to misdirection and choking the audience.
Peer Feedback Summary
I would try to focus more on the magazine products, trying to bring them up to the
standard set by the posters. Particularly, there is empty space that could be filled up
more, adding more detail to bare patches and satisfying some of the concerns of those
who gave feedback.
Also, I would try and find any assets that disrupt each other and try to reorient them,
hopefully finding a more appropriate place for them if they clash against each other.

More Related Content

What's hot

7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)
7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)
7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)Libby Whitehorn
 
7. evaluation
7. evaluation7. evaluation
7. evaluationWill Stewart
 
(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...
(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...
(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...Jennifer Briselli
 
Natalie Bennett Comm 130 Portfolio
Natalie Bennett Comm 130 PortfolioNatalie Bennett Comm 130 Portfolio
Natalie Bennett Comm 130 PortfolioNatalie Bennett
 
Graphic Designer
Graphic DesignerGraphic Designer
Graphic DesignerUsman Ali Kjs
 
Evaluation powerpoint
Evaluation powerpointEvaluation powerpoint
Evaluation powerpointCameron Scoots
 
Project3 yiran jessica
Project3 yiran jessicaProject3 yiran jessica
Project3 yiran jessicajessica yuan
 

What's hot (20)

7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)
7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)
7. Evaluation FMP (Liberty Whitehorn)
 
Proposal
ProposalProposal
Proposal
 
2. proposal
2. proposal2. proposal
2. proposal
 
Print Evaluation
Print EvaluationPrint Evaluation
Print Evaluation
 
7. evaluation
7. evaluation7. evaluation
7. evaluation
 
7. evaluation
7. evaluation7. evaluation
7. evaluation
 
5. FMP Evaluation
5. FMP Evaluation5. FMP Evaluation
5. FMP Evaluation
 
2. proposal
2. proposal2. proposal
2. proposal
 
7. evaluation
7. evaluation7. evaluation
7. evaluation
 
2. proposal
2. proposal2. proposal
2. proposal
 
Fmp evaluation
Fmp evaluationFmp evaluation
Fmp evaluation
 
Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluation
 
(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...
(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...
(Socially Distanced) Participatory Design - Discovering Unmet Needs & New Sol...
 
Natalie Bennett Comm 130 Portfolio
Natalie Bennett Comm 130 PortfolioNatalie Bennett Comm 130 Portfolio
Natalie Bennett Comm 130 Portfolio
 
Graphic Designer
Graphic DesignerGraphic Designer
Graphic Designer
 
Evaluation powerpoint
Evaluation powerpointEvaluation powerpoint
Evaluation powerpoint
 
Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluation
 
Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluation
 
7. evaluation
7. evaluation7. evaluation
7. evaluation
 
Project3 yiran jessica
Project3 yiran jessicaProject3 yiran jessica
Project3 yiran jessica
 

Similar to 7. evaluation

Evaluation
Evaluation Evaluation
Evaluation BenDix4
 
6. fmp production reflection
6. fmp production reflection6. fmp production reflection
6. fmp production reflectionWill Stewart
 
Fmp production reflection finished
Fmp production reflection finishedFmp production reflection finished
Fmp production reflection finishedWilliamAnderson165
 
DONE NOW fmp production reflection
DONE NOW fmp production reflection DONE NOW fmp production reflection
DONE NOW fmp production reflection WilliamAnderson165
 
Changed fmp production reflection
Changed fmp production reflection Changed fmp production reflection
Changed fmp production reflection WilliamAnderson165
 
DONE Fmp production reflection
DONE Fmp production reflectionDONE Fmp production reflection
DONE Fmp production reflectionWilliamAnderson165
 
7. evaluation(1)
7. evaluation(1)7. evaluation(1)
7. evaluation(1)AmyWatson69
 
Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluationelaboscabbo
 
Pod handler evaluation
Pod handler evaluationPod handler evaluation
Pod handler evaluationLouisbiddles7
 
Evaluation audience
Evaluation audienceEvaluation audience
Evaluation audienceKarlShepherd6
 
FMP - Evaluation
FMP - EvaluationFMP - Evaluation
FMP - EvaluationDaisyPotter
 
Booklet review
Booklet reviewBooklet review
Booklet reviewLee Morrell
 
Evaluation fmp (1)
Evaluation fmp  (1)Evaluation fmp  (1)
Evaluation fmp (1)Daniel Thompson
 
Future York evaluation
Future York evaluationFuture York evaluation
Future York evaluationBrandonLambert4
 
Developmental Diary FMP Year 2
Developmental Diary FMP Year 2Developmental Diary FMP Year 2
Developmental Diary FMP Year 2RebeccaEdwards79
 

Similar to 7. evaluation (20)

Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluation
 
2. proposal
2. proposal2. proposal
2. proposal
 
2. proposal
2. proposal2. proposal
2. proposal
 
Evaluation
Evaluation Evaluation
Evaluation
 
6. fmp production reflection
6. fmp production reflection6. fmp production reflection
6. fmp production reflection
 
Fmp production reflection finished
Fmp production reflection finishedFmp production reflection finished
Fmp production reflection finished
 
DONE NOW fmp production reflection
DONE NOW fmp production reflection DONE NOW fmp production reflection
DONE NOW fmp production reflection
 
Changed fmp production reflection
Changed fmp production reflection Changed fmp production reflection
Changed fmp production reflection
 
DONE Fmp production reflection
DONE Fmp production reflectionDONE Fmp production reflection
DONE Fmp production reflection
 
7. evaluation(1)
7. evaluation(1)7. evaluation(1)
7. evaluation(1)
 
Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluation
 
Pod handler evaluation
Pod handler evaluationPod handler evaluation
Pod handler evaluation
 
Evaluation audience
Evaluation audienceEvaluation audience
Evaluation audience
 
FMP - Evaluation
FMP - EvaluationFMP - Evaluation
FMP - Evaluation
 
Booklet review
Booklet reviewBooklet review
Booklet review
 
Evaluation fmp (1)
Evaluation fmp  (1)Evaluation fmp  (1)
Evaluation fmp (1)
 
Evaluation FMP
Evaluation FMPEvaluation FMP
Evaluation FMP
 
5. evaluation
5. evaluation5. evaluation
5. evaluation
 
Future York evaluation
Future York evaluationFuture York evaluation
Future York evaluation
 
Developmental Diary FMP Year 2
Developmental Diary FMP Year 2Developmental Diary FMP Year 2
Developmental Diary FMP Year 2
 

More from Will Stewart

5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre productionWill Stewart
 
5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre productionWill Stewart
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)Will Stewart
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)Will Stewart
 
5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre productionWill Stewart
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)Will Stewart
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)Will Stewart
 
1. initial plans
1. initial plans1. initial plans
1. initial plansWill Stewart
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)Will Stewart
 
1. initial plans
1. initial plans1. initial plans
1. initial plansWill Stewart
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)Will Stewart
 
5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre productionWill Stewart
 
3. proposal sf 2017
3. proposal sf 20173. proposal sf 2017
3. proposal sf 2017Will Stewart
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)Will Stewart
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)Will Stewart
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)Will Stewart
 
1. initial plans
1. initial plans1. initial plans
1. initial plansWill Stewart
 
6. evaluation sf 2017
6. evaluation sf 20176. evaluation sf 2017
6. evaluation sf 2017Will Stewart
 
5. production reflection sf 2017
5. production reflection sf 20175. production reflection sf 2017
5. production reflection sf 2017Will Stewart
 
4. pre production sf 2017
4. pre production sf 20174. pre production sf 2017
4. pre production sf 2017Will Stewart
 

More from Will Stewart (20)

5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre production
 
5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre production
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)
 
5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre production
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)
 
1. initial plans
1. initial plans1. initial plans
1. initial plans
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)
 
1. initial plans
1. initial plans1. initial plans
1. initial plans
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)
 
5. pre production
5. pre production5. pre production
5. pre production
 
3. proposal sf 2017
3. proposal sf 20173. proposal sf 2017
3. proposal sf 2017
 
4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)4. production experiments(1)
4. production experiments(1)
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)
 
3. research(1)
3. research(1)3. research(1)
3. research(1)
 
1. initial plans
1. initial plans1. initial plans
1. initial plans
 
6. evaluation sf 2017
6. evaluation sf 20176. evaluation sf 2017
6. evaluation sf 2017
 
5. production reflection sf 2017
5. production reflection sf 20175. production reflection sf 2017
5. production reflection sf 2017
 
4. pre production sf 2017
4. pre production sf 20174. pre production sf 2017
4. pre production sf 2017
 

Recently uploaded

My Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 Presentation
My Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 PresentationMy Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 Presentation
My Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 PresentationRidwan Fadjar
 
Making_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptx
Making_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptxMaking_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptx
Making_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptxnull - The Open Security Community
 
Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024BookNet Canada
 
Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?
Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?
Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?Mattias Andersson
 
New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024BookNet Canada
 
Maximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptx
Maximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptxMaximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptx
Maximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptxOnBoard
 
Kotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmatics
Kotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmaticsKotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmatics
Kotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmaticscarlostorres15106
 
Enhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for Partners
Enhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for PartnersEnhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for Partners
Enhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for PartnersThousandEyes
 
Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024
Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024
Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024Enterprise Knowledge
 
#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024
#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024
#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024BookNet Canada
 
"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr Lapshyn
"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr Lapshyn"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr Lapshyn
"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr LapshynFwdays
 
FULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | Delhi
FULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | DelhiFULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | Delhi
FULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | Delhisoniya singh
 
How to convert PDF to text with Nanonets
How to convert PDF to text with NanonetsHow to convert PDF to text with Nanonets
How to convert PDF to text with Nanonetsnaman860154
 
Benefits Of Flutter Compared To Other Frameworks
Benefits Of Flutter Compared To Other FrameworksBenefits Of Flutter Compared To Other Frameworks
Benefits Of Flutter Compared To Other FrameworksSoftradix Technologies
 
Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)
Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)
Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)Allon Mureinik
 
Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 365
Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 365Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 365
Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 3652toLead Limited
 
Key Features Of Token Development (1).pptx
Key  Features Of Token  Development (1).pptxKey  Features Of Token  Development (1).pptx
Key Features Of Token Development (1).pptxLBM Solutions
 
SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024
SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024
SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024Scott Keck-Warren
 

Recently uploaded (20)

My Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 Presentation
My Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 PresentationMy Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 Presentation
My Hashitalk Indonesia April 2024 Presentation
 
Making_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptx
Making_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptxMaking_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptx
Making_way_through_DLL_hollowing_inspite_of_CFG_by_Debjeet Banerjee.pptx
 
Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
Transcript: New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
 
Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?
Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?
Are Multi-Cloud and Serverless Good or Bad?
 
New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
New from BookNet Canada for 2024: BNC BiblioShare - Tech Forum 2024
 
Maximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptx
Maximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptxMaximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptx
Maximizing Board Effectiveness 2024 Webinar.pptx
 
DMCC Future of Trade Web3 - Special Edition
DMCC Future of Trade Web3 - Special EditionDMCC Future of Trade Web3 - Special Edition
DMCC Future of Trade Web3 - Special Edition
 
Kotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmatics
Kotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmaticsKotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmatics
Kotlin Multiplatform & Compose Multiplatform - Starter kit for pragmatics
 
Enhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for Partners
Enhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for PartnersEnhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for Partners
Enhancing Worker Digital Experience: A Hands-on Workshop for Partners
 
Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024
Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024
Designing IA for AI - Information Architecture Conference 2024
 
#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024
#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024
#StandardsGoals for 2024: What’s new for BISAC - Tech Forum 2024
 
"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr Lapshyn
"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr Lapshyn"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr Lapshyn
"Federated learning: out of reach no matter how close",Oleksandr Lapshyn
 
FULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | Delhi
FULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | DelhiFULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | Delhi
FULL ENJOY 🔝 8264348440 🔝 Call Girls in Diplomatic Enclave | Delhi
 
How to convert PDF to text with Nanonets
How to convert PDF to text with NanonetsHow to convert PDF to text with Nanonets
How to convert PDF to text with Nanonets
 
Benefits Of Flutter Compared To Other Frameworks
Benefits Of Flutter Compared To Other FrameworksBenefits Of Flutter Compared To Other Frameworks
Benefits Of Flutter Compared To Other Frameworks
 
The transition to renewables in India.pdf
The transition to renewables in India.pdfThe transition to renewables in India.pdf
The transition to renewables in India.pdf
 
Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)
Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)
Injustice - Developers Among Us (SciFiDevCon 2024)
 
Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 365
Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 365Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 365
Tech-Forward - Achieving Business Readiness For Copilot in Microsoft 365
 
Key Features Of Token Development (1).pptx
Key  Features Of Token  Development (1).pptxKey  Features Of Token  Development (1).pptx
Key Features Of Token Development (1).pptx
 
SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024
SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024
SQL Database Design For Developers at php[tek] 2024
 

7. evaluation

  • 3. Research • I believe the greatest strength of my research to be my product research, analysing the composition of similar products, the techniques used to create them, and the reasoning behind the final result. By analysing these topics, I acquired a better understanding of what material to include in my products, and where they could be most appropriately placed to incite the desired reaction from the audience. In regards to the weaknesses of my research, I believe that I have yet to fully understand the products I chose, and how my primary research is more personalised to my tastes and does not cover more fundamental criteria, leaving it lacking in discernment of the types of people responding to the surveys I sent out. If I were able to improve my research, I would take a second look at my product research and see whether all aspects of the chosen material have been covered, and whether the effects of these individual aspects are dependent on each other. I think if I had done this, then I would have been able to coordinate my own individual pieces more efficiently, and would have been more capable of properly finding a place for each asset I had planned to utilise.
  • 4. Planning • I believe the greatest strength of my planning is the specificity I have provided on what I have planned to include, and why I have decided to use such assets. As the project went further and became more developed, I was able to fine-tune more details through the use of the provided documents, expanding upon the planned themes, aesthetics, and techniques employed in the project, and how they related to the audience. Weakness-wise, I don’t believe that I fully understood the more complex terms and aspects of what I was meant to include, such as the various demographics and how they related to my project outside of the target audience. Because of this, I think that I moved from one thing to the next too quickly, without leaving enough room for elaboration on why I had chosen these elements. If I had the opportunity to improve this area, I would prioritise fleshing out anything that I believe is lacking in content.
  • 5. Time Management • In order to properly organise the different aspects of the project, a schedule was provided that were allowed to design at our leisure, which I used to place the products I knew I could complete swiftly first and foremost. I organised the timeslots for each product based on skill level, with the products incorporating techniques I was more familiar with sooner on in the timeline, with the production of the ones I was less experienced with occurring later, so that I had less distractions while I was working on them. Thanks to this type of schedule I managed to successfully complete my project on time, with room for improvements in the coming weeks in areas that are comparatively lacking. I also never completely set down the specifics of how I would complete the products, allowing them to be malleable in how they were constructed and the time necessitating their completion. If I had more time I believe I would be able to give a final check to each product to make sure that everything is streamlined and all assets are in proper coordination.
  • 6. Technical Qualities My personal preference for techniques is to use simple and basic tools in combination to produce greater effects. The tools I use the most are the polygonal lasso, magic wand, paint bucket, eyedropper, and text tools. While all of these are basic and rudimentary, I prefer using tools that have straightforward uses, allowing me to focus more on the overall composition of the piece and how everything stacks together rather than on how any single asset is going to reach completion. For more complex effects, I used images obtained from scouring the internet that fit the themes of the project, colour levels to adjust the light and dark in these images, a texture that bolstered the surrounding assets, and regular blending options. Most of those option choices involved effects that made a single asset stand out against others and vice-versa, such as the bevel and emboss, and outer and inner glows and shadows. The coordination and positioning of the individual assets was central in generating the desired effect in the audience. For example the product in the upper-left corner required careful selecting, de-selecting, inverting, and layer coordination to achieve the final result. Similarly, the product in the upper-right necessitated arranging the images in a decreasing sense of scale in relation to their position. This resembles the professional product in the decreasing scale, while the more fine-tuned colour tones are more present in the other product. The professional product is far more streamlined and fluid than what I have made, in part because I have very little skill and experience in artistic pursuits. It is furthermore made by a collaborative team rather than a single designer, with a systematic delegation to perfect each aspect.
  • 7. Aesthetic Qualities The foremost methodology of my project was to be dreamlike, varied, and representative of the inner material that each product advertised. To properly demonstrate these themes I decided to spread my project out across multiple mediums, being poster and magazine-based in order to focus on the print area of my skillset. To emphasize the phantasmal quality I was aiming for I tried to incorporate fantastic and vivid imagery mixed with symbolic elements, creating a highly interpretive but bold atmosphere. Colours, details, and abstract shapes were the central design elements, as demonstrated particularly in the posters. Secondary aesthetics include deeply natural themes and celestial imagery, creating a dichotomy between familiar and down-to-earth scenery contrasted against the alien expanses of the wider universe, tying into the idea of thematic diversity. The natural elements are evident in the second poster and front cover, with the blacked-out trees taking up prominent places in the image. The solar diagram and psychedelic vortices in the first poster and DPS, respectively, hint at the celestial elements, both resembling cosmic phenomena. When planning out my project, I wanted to incorporate many disparate and contrasting individual themes, and finding some way to make them work in concert to produce the desired effects. To make room for everything I needed to find a system in which each influence was allotted room to breathe while making space for the others, while still fitting with the abstract aesthetic. This involved placing things very closely together in some areas, while simultaneously attempting to give each aspect it’s due area. From a production standpoint, I wanted these products to seem realistic enough to actually exist and be plausible. To drive this home, I used the magazine-based portion of the project to iron out the more real-world aspects, such as the time frame for the game’s release and the interview with the developer shining a light on the thoughts and feelings put into the development process.
  • 8. Audience Appeal The main target audience of my project are ages fifteen to thirty-five, ranging from working to upper- class socioeconomic backgrounds, and with a slightly greater focus on women than men. This aspect in particular is displayed in the first poster and magazine double-page spread, where a woman’s silhouette is the foremost layer, and the interview featured is between two women, where a discussion on the interviewee’s circumstances as a woman in the gaming industry is presented. Furthermore, the interviewed developer carries my own sentiments regarding the project, in that I wanted to create something that was unique and nobody had ever seen before. The incorporation of the wide variety of themes plays into this, working to appeal to an array of audiences through the intellectual and creative values that they represent, acting as more specialised signals for more niche markets. The questionnaire I designed for my research phase helped to divine what kinds of qualities people would want to see in the project, and I noted that there were various opinions on how gender factored into the project, which helped me to iron out how to properly construct the characters involved in the DPS product.
  • 10. Feedback 1 • What did you like about the product? – The posters are both very crisp looking and aesthetically pleasing, using very well made colour schemes. – Both posters have a degree of mystery behind them, making the reader think deeper about what it could possibly be about. – The magazine cover follows the poster’s design in the idea that it shows mysterious patterns and images. – The main font used in the designs seems to fit the vibe given by the products. – The information in the magazine is simply structured and gives the product more accessibility. • What improvements could have been made to the product? - The magazine cover could potentially hold more content to fill in the blanks (unless the design is meant to be simplistic) - The magazine cover could have a clearer main cover line rather than making the smaller cover lines the same. - The dps could have more interactivity with the reader in the space near the cogs and wheels. - Some more images like the posters would be a nice addition to the dps to keep the reader thinking about the product.
  • 11. Feedback 2 • What did you like about the product? I really like the design of the poster with the colour wheel as it is very creative. The double page spread has a good layout and the colour scheme of the second poster works well • What improvements could have been made to the product? The layout of the front cover looks a bit unfinished and could be improved with more headers and images.
  • 12. Feedback 3 • What did you like about the product? – I loved the range of colours, and how you’ve put them together throughout all of the products, They contrast with each other, however they work very well. – Within your double page spread not only did I appreciate the graphics and colours, I personally loved the actual article itself, very creative and literate. – I could see your target audience clearly within your products, aimed toward the more intellectual/women. This was conveyed very well through your work. • What improvements could have been made to the product? • The only improvement I have is potentially with the front cover product. I felt it need more attention to detail particularly on the font, simply to bring it up to the other products standard.
  • 13. Peer Feedback Summary • What do you agree with from your peer feedback? – I agree that I succeeded aesthetically and contextually, with the overall design and article being received well by those who delivered feedback. – Visually, there was more of a focus on the posters than the magazine products, and they had a more direct impact rather than the more muted front cover or DPS. – My target audience was made clear in multiple products, especially in the DPS, which favoured text more than image. • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? I do not think that each product needs to be directly connected to one another, as while they are more subtle than the posters, the front cover and DPS still do the job of attracting an audience well, and injecting the more bombastic qualities from the posters may overcrowd the area, leading to misdirection and choking the audience.
  • 14. Peer Feedback Summary I would try to focus more on the magazine products, trying to bring them up to the standard set by the posters. Particularly, there is empty space that could be filled up more, adding more detail to bare patches and satisfying some of the concerns of those who gave feedback. Also, I would try and find any assets that disrupt each other and try to reorient them, hopefully finding a more appropriate place for them if they clash against each other.

Editor's Notes

  1. What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  2. What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  3. Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  4. Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  5. Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  6. How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  7. What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?