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1. LOST IN YOUR THOUGHTS
By
William Wallace
BH24 1SE
Ringwood School, Parsonage Barn Lane
01425475000
wallacew@ringwood.hants.sch.uk

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INTRODUCTION
A black screen is the only thing visible while a backing
track is playing, the scene then opens with the sound of a
bell ringing and we see Ringwood School on a dull afternoon
while all the students are leaving at the end of the school
day. The final establishing shot is still and we then see
several different legs.
SCENE 1: EXT - OUTSIDE SCHOOL - AFTERNOON
The film then changes so we can see our main group of
characters (CAMERON, DAVID, JAMES, JACK, JACOB) walking
away from the school all in a conversation.
JAMES
That was such a shit day
*GROUP LAUGHS*
CAMERON
What time’s everyone out tonight then?
DAVID
Think we should meet at 8
JACK
Fine with me
JACOB
Yeah
CAMERON
Yeah. James?
JAMES looks up from his phone
JAMES
Yeah, should be ok I think
DAVID
Alright sick, I’ll go get drinks

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JACK
I can’t wait to go out, I’ve needed it
CAMERON
Think we all do.
All characters continue walking down the street, we
then see the weird kid, WILL. The group notices him
in the distance and start making rude comments
towards him.
CAMERON
Look at him, what a twat
*Group laughs*
DAVID
Where are you going mate!?
JACK
Definitely off to see all his girls
JAMES
Look how he quick he’s walking, fuckin’
racing off
CAMERON
Slow down a minute, we want to talk
JACOB
Look he has drinks sticking out his bag,
David I dare you to go and steal it.
DAVID
Alright, what for?
JACK
Nobody’s going to give you any money
DAVID
Ok then, I’ll do it anyway. He won’t do
shit back to me

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The group agrees on this idea and begins to run towards
WILL, we see this from over his shoulder. The group run
towards WILL grabbing his bag and wrestling for the drink
sticking out of the bag.
WILL
Just leave me alone!
The group manages to take the bag away and push WILL to the
ground, they take the drink out and throw the bag to the
ground. The group runs off laughing.
CAMERON
Dickhead!
JAMES slows down and turns to WILL on the floor
JAMES
Sorry mate
He then joins the group running off into the distance, we
then see WILL sat on the floor next to his bag staring at
the group running away.
The shot cuts to black with the start of a musical score.
SCENE 2: EXT – PARK - NIGHT
The scene starts with the same upbeat backing track
playing.
CAMERON and DAVID arrive the latest to the park in the dark
and are speaking about stealing the drinks off WILL
CAMERON
I feel bad for him now
DAVID
Who gives a shit, it was so funny. Did you
see his face?
They both start laughing and joking about the situation as
the shot moves to an establishing shot of the new location
where the other 3 friends are already sat at an old bench
in the middle of drinking, there is then a few shots of
DAVID and CAMERON jumping over the fence to get the rest of

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the group. The backing track turns diegetic as the group
are playing the song.
DAVID
Alright boys?
The group all get up and greet each other, and then all sit
back on the bench and start drinking their beers which are
out on the table.
CAMERON
When did you all get here?
JACK
Like 10 minutes ago, but I think Jacob’s
already drunk
JACOB
No! I’m completely fine *he slurs his
words*
JAMES
How’ve you managed that?
JACOB
I said I’m not drunk! I’m fine
DAVID
Anyway, I brought the drink, who want’s
some?
The group then passes round the large bottle containing the
blue liquid all taking big sips, Jacob drinks the largest
amount and Cameron only tries a small amount.
JACK
That was disgusting, who would buy that?
CAMERON
I didn’t even have that much because it
smelt awful.

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JACOB
It was fine, stop moaning
The group laughs at Jacob
JACOB
I need a piss, someone come with me
DAVID
Need someone to hold your hand?
JAMES
No, not his hand
Groups start laughing at him so JACOB stumbles away from
the group towards some trees.
JACOB
Fine, don’t worry then!
JACK
David would, but it’s too dark for him
DAVID
Shut the fuck up
The group laughs and goes back to drinking and turns away
from JACOB.
SCENE 3: EXT – TREES TO THE EDGE OF THE PARK - NIGHT
He then stumbles away on his own away from the group, once
he reaches the trees and bushes we see the friends behind
him, we then see there is then an open area on his other
side, we then see the original shoulder and we see the
bench and all the group have gone, again, we switched
shoulder and we see a dark figure wearing a dark robe, a
half balaclava and gloves. The figure is holding an axe
dragging it along the floor as he walks towards JACOB.
We then see JACOB from behind where he is urinating, and we
see a shot of his face looking relieved.
SCENE 4: EXT - DARK FOREST - NIGHT

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We then follow JACOB’s head as he turns around to notice he
is alone in a dark forest. As a tense backing track starts
to play.
JACOB
Cameron? Jack? James!?
After he realises he is not with his friends and completely
alone in a pitch black forest with no sign of light, lost,
he enters a panic and turns his flashlight on from his
phone. There is a few shots of him walking through the
forest. He then decides to sit down because he is breathing
too quick and needs to stop evaluate what’s happening. As
the tense backing track fades out.
JACOB
*exhales* Calm down, just need to find the
way out
In the distance JACOB can just about make out a dark
silhouette of a person.
JACOB
Thank fuck for that. I didn’t mean to walk
this far!
The figure continues to walk towards him, he tense backing
track continues from where it faded.
JACOB (DISTRESSED)
Hello!?
The figure then continues to walk towards him increasing in
pace. JACOB then realises that this isn’t one of his
friends, gets up as quick as possible and begins to run
away. As he turns away to run quicker, he bumps into the
tall dark figure getting knocked to the ground. He then
crawls backwards and struggles on the ground. The dark
figure then pulls back his arms holding an axe, JACOB lets
out a scream as we see the axe slash across the screen.
SCENE 5: EXT – PARK - POULNER
We then see the group still sat at the bench and they then
hear the same scream.

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CAMERON
What the fuck?
DAVID
Was that Jacob?
JAMES
Sounded like him, he never came back
JACK
Probably just lost *laughs*
DAVID
Jack this could be serious, just shut the
fuck up a minute.
CAMERON
Don’t argue about it let’s just go and see
if he’s ok.
JAMES
I’ll wait here
DAVID
What so you can just sit on your phone?
JAMES stares at him and then turns away and pulls out his
phone, DAVID sighs and the group starts to walk towards the
scream.
DAVID
What a dickhead.
We see the group in the distance as James is sat on the
bench on his phone, he then gets a call from DAVID and so
picks up. He believes that they have pocket dialed him and
are taking about him behind his back.
DAVID
*mumbling* He’s just such a prick
sometimes, I don’t like him.

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JACK
*mumbling* Yeah, I don’t mind him but he’s
a bit strange
DAVID
*mumbling* No, I just hate him
JAMES ends the call, and puts his head in his hands, upset,
he then gets up and walks away from the bench, checking his
surroundings and checking his phone.
SCENE 6: EXT – STREET - NIGHT
JAMES reaches the dimly lit street and begins to walk home,
he checks his phone and sees that his lock screen is now an
image of his friend JACOB’s lifeless body in the middle of
a forest, he looks up and notices a dark figure stood in
the distance towards the end of the road where there is
little light.
JAMES
Hello!?
After getting no reply, JAMES looks around checking if
anyone else can see this figure. After turning around the
figure is no longer in front of him. JAMES enters a panic
and starts calling DAVID, while he is stood waiting for him
to pick up, we see a shot of JAMES and then two arms wrap
around and begin to choke him.
SCENE 7: EXT – TREES TO THE EDGE OF THE PARK - NIGHT
We then see the group investigating, and DAVID picks up his
phone.
DAVID
Hello? What do you want? Hello?
We see a cracked phone with DAVID talking next to JAMES’
body lying on the cold, wet pavement, we then cut back to
the group.
DAVID (TO THE OTHERS)
He didn’t say anything

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CAMERON
Might have been an accident
JACK
*pointing* is that Jacob on the floor
there?
We see JACOB dead on the floor with a gash in his chest as
he lays on the leaves and dirt, the friends gather round
him. All characters enter a panic.
CAMERON
Oh god, I wish someone went with him.
DAVID
Who would’ve done it though?
JACK
Right now, it doesn’t matter let’s leave
before anyone else gets hurt.
The group then begins to walk away at a fast pace.
CAMERON
We need to stick together
JACK
No, I need to go home.
DAVID
What do you mean? Your friend has just
been killed?
JACK
Exactly, I just want to get home, I’ll see
you tomorrow
CAMERON
Really Jack?

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JACK
Yes, I don’t want to be here, I’ll see you
in a bit.
Jack then walks off on his own and we see him jump the
fence and walk down the street. We then see CAMERON and
DAVID sat on the bench.
DAVID
Let’s just wait here and figure out what
we’re doing.
CAMERON
Yeah, I hope Jack will be alright
DAVID
He wanted to walk off.
SCENE 7: EXT – STREET - NIGHT
We then see JACK walking down the street and he hears a
laugh from a dark playground and can just about make out
two figures sat on the old, dirty bench.
JACK
What are you laughing at?
VOICE 1
You look like such a twat *laughs*
JACK
Who do you think you are?
VOICE 2
You’re such a dickhead to your friends
Jack then starts moving towards them.
JACK
What’s your problem?
SCENE 8: EXT – PLAYGROUND - NIGHT

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The two voices then continue laughing, so JACK walks into
the dark corner of the playground. All noise then stops as
he starts walking towards them.
JACK
Yeah, you’re not fucking laughing, are
you?
The two figures on the bench look slumped against each
other. JACK then slowly approaches the bench and realises
the two figures are the two dead friends. Jack in shock
starts looking around in a panic. We then see the dark
figure swings his axe and JACK hits the floor.
SCENE 9: EXT – PARK - NIGHT
We then cut back to DAVID and CAMERON sat on the original
bench where we can see the other friends remaining drinks
and mess, they are discussing what they should do.
CAMERON
Do you think we should get back in a
minute?
DAVID
Yeah, I don’t feel great. I just can’t
believe what’s happened tonight, it
doesn’t feel real.
CAMERON
I know I’m worried about Jack and James;
we haven’t heard from them.
DAVID
Yeah can you walk back to mine with me?
SCENE 10: EXT – SREET - NIGHT
The two remaining characters then get up and walk off, we
see a montage of shots of them walking home and there is a
very dark mood with low lighting along the quiet street.
SCENE 11: EXT – OUTSIDE HOUSE – NIGHT
They then reach the small attached house and DAVID enters,
he then stands in the doorway and speaks to CAMERON.

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DAVID
Thanks, I’m just so worried, it just
hasn’t really set in yet.
CAMERON
Yeah, let’s just talk about it tomorrow I
just need to process what’s happened.
The two then hug.
DAVID
I’ll see you tomorrow, say when you get
back in.
CAMERON
Yeah, I will, see you tomorrow.
SCENE 12: INT – HOUSE - NIGHT
DAVID then shuts the door and enters the messy house which
is a warm lighting compared to other scenes. He then sits
down on the sofa and puts his head in his hands.
DAVID
Ah fuck, what now?
He then gets up and goes to the bathroom to wash his face.
He stares in the mirror for a minute. Then opens the door
and notices all the lights are off.
DAVID
Oh no, no, no.
He turns his phone flashlight on and walks towards turning
the lights on, he turns them back on and walks away to go
upstairs. The lights then turn off again, so DAVID goes to
turn them back on and as he does the hand of the dark
figure grabs his wrist and then hits him over the head with
a bottle. We then see the figure drag his unconscious body
into the bathroom, the figure then gets a knife from the
kitchen and cuts DAVID’s wrists and leaves him to bleed.
SCENE 13: EXT – STREET – NIGHT
CAMERON is now alone walking down the dimly lit street in
Poulner, it is very late, so it is quiet and there is

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nobody around. We see CAMERON walking and then we see
CAMERON from the front and we see a dark read car emerge
from the end of the road, it follows CAMERON along the road
and around a corner. CAMERON notices that the car will not
leave him, CAMERON then starts to increase his pace and the
car matches it, they do this until CAMERON is sprinting. He
keeps turning to look at the car and running down the road.
The car then catches up and gets very close to the camera.
The car lights get too close and blind the screen.
SCENE 14: INT – GARAGE - NIGHT
It transitions to a light in the garage where CAMERON is
looking up at the light, disorientated, he notices he is
strapped to an old chair in a messy garage where things are
covered so blood will not spill on anything, as well as
this all his friends are all dead apart from DAVID who is
still shaking and quivering. CAMERON begins to loosen the
rope.
CAMERON
Fucking hell *groans*, what’s happening?
David? DAVID!?
There is then footsteps and the garage door opens and the
dark figure is in shock that CMAERON is awake.
CAMERON
Who are you?
WILL
How are you awake?
CAMERON
It’s you, why did you do this?
WILL
Because I’m in power now! None of you
could do anything.
CAMERON
You know these people have families
wondering where they are.

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WILL
I couldn’t give less of a shit about any
of them. *bangs the garage door* they
never cared about me!
We see the neighbour comes to their second story window
where they have a view of the garage, they have a phone and
we hear an emergency services call.
NEIGHBOUR
Police please…
It then cuts to the garage again, as police are now on
their way.
CAMERON
I don’t understand how you knew about my
car crash, why was the car coming for me?
WILL
Oh, I didn’t, all of you always push me
about and take things, I knew you’d take
the drink.
CAMERON
What’s that got to do with it?
WILL
It’s a hallucinogenic drug, it went into
the back of all your minds, and I got to
watch all of it.
He takes his mask off and takes his hood down. He then
starts cleaning the blood of the kitchen knife. CAMERON
notices a wrench on the floor and begins to loosen the
rope.
WILL
It’s pointless. You have nothing left, and
your friend is about to go too.
The two stay silent as DAVID stops shaking and slumps in
his chair. WILL laughs.

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CAMERON
You’re a fucking monster
WILL turns around again and begins to struggle until the
rope falls to the floor, and CAMERON runs and pushes WILL
to the floor, he grabs the wrench and hits will on the
head. WILL falls to the floor and CAMERON looks around at
his dead friends and finds all the tools used to torture
his friends.
CAMERON
You useless
He hits WILL with the wrench.
CAMERON
Worthless
He hits him again twice.
CAMERON
Piece of shit!
All sound in the scene then cuts, and a backing track plays
while CAMERON beats WILL’s body with the wrench, filled
with emotion CAMERON continues after WILL is no longer
moving. We then see car lights shine over the garage with
blue strobe lights and we faintly hear sirens, CAMERON
stops and stands up, in shock, realises what he’s done.
There is then faint shouting over the backing track of the
police.
POLICE OFFICER
Stop! Put the weapon down!
CAMERON stands up with the wrench in his hand staring at
the police officers. They point the guns at him and
continue shouting.
POLICE OFFICER
Put it down!

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We then hear a gunshot as all sound stops and the shot cuts
to black. There is silence for 3 seconds and the credits
then roll followed by a musical score.