this is the first draft for the script picked out

1. “PICKED OUT”
By
David Edmunds
Your name
School email
School telephone

2. 2
CAMREA FADE IN
SCENE 1: ROAD ON PATH – DUSK
We see a group of uni students walking into a road that has
a sign that says road restricted privet propriety.
JACK/ MONOLOGUE (VOICE OVER)
I never really had friends at school but
that all changed when I went to university
because I met the best group of mates I
have ever had. You had James my flat mate,
ben and Jacob who I met in my media
course, will who was mates with James
WILL
Um ben it says it restricted we can’t walk
down here
BEN
Its fine I saw this place on the internet
is says that no one live anywhere near
here
WILL
Oh ok then
The group continues down the private road
JACK/ MONOLOGUE VOICE OVER
We all liked finding abandon places and
cool spots to drink at and ben said that
he found this one on a website that we
constantly used to find spots
JAMES
So what is this spot supposed to be like
then?

3. 3
BEN
Well is says that it’s a haunted woods
filled with spirts and huge wooden animals
JAMES
That sounds
JACOB
How long is it going to take to get there?
BEN
Don’t know but it won’t be longer than an
hour or so
JACOB
This spot better be great then because it
a long walk mate
BEN
Well I don’t know if it will be sick or
not but it just when up on the website so
only two people have been and it said that
is was spooky and shit
JACOB
That sound pretty cool I guess
The group enter into a thick pine forest and James pulls a
pouch of tobacco and begins to roll a cigarette
JACK
James could I pinch a rollie
JAMES
Yh but keep it hush because the others
will want one and I only got a bit of
baccie left

4. 4
JACK
Alright lets run on ahead and we can roll
there
JAMES
Wait pretend you walked off a bit and you
found me all hurt as well
JACK
Go on then let’s run ahead now then
James and jack run on ahead leaving ben Jacob will alone
shouting after them
BEN
Where the fuck are you guys going
JAMES
For a piss
SCENE 2: IN THE WOODS – NIGHT TIME
Jack and James stop behind a tree and start to roll a
rollie
JACK
How big do you think these wooden animals
will be then?
James lights his cigarette
JAMES
I don’t know but I acutely need a piss now
hers the lighter mate
James gives jack the lighter and walks off of to go or a
wee
SCENE 3 GETTING PICKED THE WOODS NIGHT
Jack lights his rollie and starts to watch James`s
cigarette light get smaller and smaller until it is gone
jack then see a bright light jack then walks slowly closer
to it

5. 5
JACK
Is that you James?
The light fades as a small wooden tepee comes into view
jack goes over to it and see A wooden neckless with a wired
wooden pendent around it and picks it up and suddenly its
day time and he is surrounded by loads of people and a
woman walks over and touches jack shoulder and smiles into
the camera and then she takes her had of jacks shoulder and
its day time and the wooden tepee is gone and jack is left
standing there on his own till he is scared by James
touching his shoulder
JAMES
Why did you walk off?
Jack jumps and is scared by James
JACK
What just happened did you see that where
did they go who where they?
JAMES
What are you on about mate! Stop taking
the piss your not going to scare me you
knob
JACK
What no I touched the neckless then it was
day and some woman touched me
WILL
What woman
Ben will and Jacob walk into the shot and see jack smoking
JACOB
Arrr lets have a rollie then
BEN
yh lets get one as well too

6. 6
JAMES
Fuck sake jack that was the hole point of
walking off
WILL
Wait no what woman are you on abut jack
JACK
I fucking touched some weird necklace I
saw in the tepee that was around this tree
and some random woman touched me and it
was suddenly day
WILL
What tepee it’s just a tree
JACOB
And mate is 1:30 there so way it could be
day
BEN
Did you two go off and take something as
well
JAMES
No I could only afford beers
JACK
I am not fucking lying I it generally
happened
JACOB
Well we don’t have time for or bullshit
trying to scare us this walk has already
been an hour and half and I just want to
sit and drink
BEN
Yh alright its not far anyway let’s go
The other start to walk off as James is handing out the
filters papers and tobacco out jack stares at the tree and

7. 7
catches up to the others we then see the grope siting down
and drinking and jack is just staring at the speaker and
taking small sips of his beer it then flashes to a the
image of the woman getting closer then back to jack the
back to the woman then back to jack till the woman touches
him it then cuts to jack getting woken up by his alarm and
James shouting
SCENE 4 THE UNI HOUSE MORNING
JAMES
Oi mate I made you a sandwich if you want
it
JACK
Yh be right down
JAMES
Mate I am fucking hanging ho ware you
feeling?
JACK
Not good mate I think I might be ill
JAMES
Na you probably just hung over
JACK
I barely drank anything last night