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With the ongoing feedback I have found out that I have gone with the correct storyline, as it is most 
popular with people living the overall idea as the audience thinks it is more conventional as well being a 
more feasible idea.
I have found out that the pitch I have produced up to standard pitch, needing 
nothing more added.
I have found out that I have covered a good amount of risks and have though of 
good ways to combat the risks. I have however also found out that my schedule 
plan is not up to par as the dates set have already been missed and no filming has 
actually been done, this is bad time management on my part.
The feedback has told me that the script that has been put together is good but may 
need some tweaking to make some of the scenes shorter so it is more like a trailer.
With the feedback on the music, casting and test shots I have found that the music is a 
great choice and fits in well with the genre. The casting does however need a picture of 
Lucy but the test shots are good.
The feedback on the ancillary plans just show that they are good plans and have good 
layouts.

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  • 1. With the ongoing feedback I have found out that I have gone with the correct storyline, as it is most popular with people living the overall idea as the audience thinks it is more conventional as well being a more feasible idea.
  • 2. I have found out that the pitch I have produced up to standard pitch, needing nothing more added.
  • 3. I have found out that I have covered a good amount of risks and have though of good ways to combat the risks. I have however also found out that my schedule plan is not up to par as the dates set have already been missed and no filming has actually been done, this is bad time management on my part.
  • 4. The feedback has told me that the script that has been put together is good but may need some tweaking to make some of the scenes shorter so it is more like a trailer.
  • 5. With the feedback on the music, casting and test shots I have found that the music is a great choice and fits in well with the genre. The casting does however need a picture of Lucy but the test shots are good.
  • 6. The feedback on the ancillary plans just show that they are good plans and have good layouts.