2. THE HERO WAS MALE, OFTHE SAME AGE OF
WRITER, RESEMBLEDTHE WRITER IN MOST OF
CASES. FEMALE HERO WAS AVOIDED EXCEPT
STORY NO 3.
ON AN AVERAGE MORETHAN 10 LINES WERE
WRITTEN.
MAJORITY HAD NOT MENTIONED ANY UNSOCIAL
ELEMENTS I.E. MURDER ,TERRORISTS ETC. AND
POLITICS AND RELIGIONS.
NON PESSIMISTIC ENDING ANDTENDENCY
TOWARDS OPTIMISTIC ENDING.
ENOUGH CAPABILITY OF STUDENTS
3. UTILIZED AVAILABLE CHARACTERS AS A
RESOURCE AND PROPER USE OF IMPULSE.
CONSCIOUS WILLTO IMPROVEAND LEARN
BUT UNCONSCIOUSVIOLATION OFWILL
THERE IS CONTRADICTION AND CONFLICT
WITHIN.
HAPPY ENDING.
MOST OFTHE CANDIDATES HAVE NOT
SHOWN NEGATIVE QUALITIES OF HERO AND
HENCE OFTHEMSELVES.
4. INJURYTOTHE HERO
DISPLAY OF PHOBIA ie. HEIGHT.
SUICIDAL MOOD MENTIONED BY FEW
AGE OFTHE HERO MANY ATIMES IS MUCH
LOWERTHANTHE CHRONOLOGICAL AGE OF
THE CANDIDATE (REGRESSION)
HELPLESSNESS OFTHE HERO ie. POOR ,
ORPHAN, ETC.
DESCRIPTION OF STORY RATHERTHAN
WRITING A STORY BY FEW.
ANXIETY
5. MORE DETAILS OFTHE ACTION IS
NEEDED
NEED FOR ANGER MANAGEMENT.
LOW AIM OFTHE HERO
WISHFUL ,
GLORY ATTHE COST OF OTHERS
STRONG NEED FOR MONEY
HERO NOT INVOLVED IN ACTION.
GREAT NEED FOR OUT OF BOUND
THINKING
6. REWARD SEEKING ATTITUDE OFTHE
PROTAGONIST
EASILY INFLUENCEDTOWARDS NEGATIVE
THINKING.
LACK OF IMAGINATION AND NON OPENING
OF MIND.
COMMITMENTTO LEARN AND
PARTICIPATION INTHE CLASS WAS BELOW
EXPECTATION.
MATURITY, DEPTH, AND DETAILS INTHE
STORY MISSING.
7. LACK OF COMPREHENSION AND CONTROL OVER
ENGLISH LANGUAGE.
LACK OF DIVERSITY.
LACK OF PRACTICAL INTELLIGENCE & SENSE
REPEAT OFTHEME HENCE LACK OF FRESHNESS
AND CONSTRUCTION OF IDEAS,
AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL STORY – PAST/PRESENT
PROPER PROBLEM DEFINITION
PORTRAYING THE OLQ’STHROUGHTHE STORY
REPITITION OFTHEMES : MORE FRESHNESS IN
THE STORY