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Directed Writing
English 1123
 To demonstrate awareness of how cohesion
contributes to coherence in text
 To use cohesive devices meaningfully and
successfully to achieve coherence
 W2 organise and structure ideas and opinions
for deliberate effect
 W5 make accurate use of spelling,
punctuation and grammar.
 WAGOLL
(What a good one looks like?)
 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Ne7uJy
_CAY
To achieve cohesion, the link of one sentence to the next,
consider the following techniques:
 Repetition of key words. In sentence B (the second of any
two sentences), repeat a word from sentence A.
 Synonymy. If direct repetition is too obvious, use a
synonym of the word you wish to repeat. This strategy is
call 'elegant variation.'
 Antonymy. Using the 'opposite' word, an antonym, can
also create sentence cohesion, since in language antonyms
actually share more elements of meaning than you might
imagine.
 Pro-forms. Use a pronoun, or another pro-form to make
explicit reference back to a form mentioned earlier.
 Collocation. Use a commonly paired or expected or highly
probable word to connect one sentence to another.
 Jane and Tom went for a walk. Jane was hot,
but Tom felt cold.(repetition)
 Jane and Tom went for a walk. Jane was hot, but
Tom felt cold. (antonyms)
 Jane and Tom went for a walk. It was a
pleasant stroll. (synonyms)
 Jane and Tom went for a walk along the muddy
bank of the river which had overflowed during
the recent floods. (collocation)
 Spot is a dalmatian which is a breed of
dogs (class/subclass) that has black and white
markings. (animal/attributes). On the walk,
the dog's paws got very sore. (part/whole)
 Enumeration. Use overt markers of sequence to
highlight the connection between ideas. This
system has many advantages: (a) it can link ideas
that are otherwise completely unconnected, (b) it
looks formal and distinctive, and (c) it promotes
a second method of sentence cohesion.
 Parallelism. Repeat a sentence structure. This
technique is the oldest, most overlooked, but
probably the most elegant method of creating
cohesion.
 Transitions. Use a conjunction or conjunctive
adverb to link sentences with particular logical
relationships.
Enumeration:
 first(ly) secondly etc. finally · in the (first)
place · last · to (begin) with · more
important · on top of (that) · next · then.
Parallelism:
 The man aims to find a job and to buy a
house.
 The secretary tried her best to solve the
problem and to give a solution
 ADDITION - moreover | furthermore | and | also | too | as well | equally
 ANTHISESIS - however | nevertheless | on the other hand | but | whereas
 COMPARISON - compared with | in comparison with | similarly | in the
same way
 REASON / CAUSE - as | since | because | due to | owing to | because of |
out of
 RESULT / SUMMARY - as a result | consequently | so | therefore | then |
in conclusion | in all | in brief | in short | in summary
 PURPOSE - so that | in order that | in order to | to | for | for the sake of
 EXAMPLE - for example | for instance | namely | that is to say | what I
mean is
 ORDER OF EVENTS - first(ly) | second(ly) | finally | first | next | then |
after that | lastly
TIME SEQUENCE - at first | after a while | in the end | finally
 RE-EXPRESSION - in other words | that is to say | alternatively | rather
 DEDUCTION - this means that | in that case it follows that | then |
otherwise
 SIDETRACKING - incidentally | by the way | to turn to | come to mention
 The methods of reading usually differ in
accordance with the contents of books,
____________ all books should be read with equal
seriousness. Amusement is not the main
objective of reading _____________ a good book,
____________ it is a novel or a biography or a
drama, always deals with some aspect of
knowledge _____________ helps us to know life
better. It is ____________said _____________books
are the best teachers.
 Each of the U.S. manned space exploration project
has specific major goals. (1)___________, the Mercury
project was designed to test whether or not human
beings could survive and function in outer space.
 (2) _____________, the Mercury project tested rockets
with the new Mercury space capsule, which could
hold one person. (3) _____________, the Gemini
project was carried out to find out whether two
people could work in the weightless environment of
space. (4)____________, Gemini astronauts were sent
out to take “spacewalks.” (5)_____________, they
floated outside their spacecraft in a spacesuit,
connected by a tether.
 But
 Because
 Whether
 And
 Therefore
 that
 First of all/ To begin with
 Moreover/ In addition/ Also
 After that
 Therefore
 In other words/ In fact
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cohesion and coherence..pptx

  • 2.  To demonstrate awareness of how cohesion contributes to coherence in text  To use cohesive devices meaningfully and successfully to achieve coherence
  • 3.  W2 organise and structure ideas and opinions for deliberate effect  W5 make accurate use of spelling, punctuation and grammar.
  • 4.  WAGOLL (What a good one looks like?)
  • 6.
  • 7. To achieve cohesion, the link of one sentence to the next, consider the following techniques:  Repetition of key words. In sentence B (the second of any two sentences), repeat a word from sentence A.  Synonymy. If direct repetition is too obvious, use a synonym of the word you wish to repeat. This strategy is call 'elegant variation.'  Antonymy. Using the 'opposite' word, an antonym, can also create sentence cohesion, since in language antonyms actually share more elements of meaning than you might imagine.  Pro-forms. Use a pronoun, or another pro-form to make explicit reference back to a form mentioned earlier.  Collocation. Use a commonly paired or expected or highly probable word to connect one sentence to another.
  • 8.  Jane and Tom went for a walk. Jane was hot, but Tom felt cold.(repetition)  Jane and Tom went for a walk. Jane was hot, but Tom felt cold. (antonyms)  Jane and Tom went for a walk. It was a pleasant stroll. (synonyms)  Jane and Tom went for a walk along the muddy bank of the river which had overflowed during the recent floods. (collocation)  Spot is a dalmatian which is a breed of dogs (class/subclass) that has black and white markings. (animal/attributes). On the walk, the dog's paws got very sore. (part/whole)
  • 9.  Enumeration. Use overt markers of sequence to highlight the connection between ideas. This system has many advantages: (a) it can link ideas that are otherwise completely unconnected, (b) it looks formal and distinctive, and (c) it promotes a second method of sentence cohesion.  Parallelism. Repeat a sentence structure. This technique is the oldest, most overlooked, but probably the most elegant method of creating cohesion.  Transitions. Use a conjunction or conjunctive adverb to link sentences with particular logical relationships.
  • 10. Enumeration:  first(ly) secondly etc. finally · in the (first) place · last · to (begin) with · more important · on top of (that) · next · then. Parallelism:  The man aims to find a job and to buy a house.  The secretary tried her best to solve the problem and to give a solution
  • 11.
  • 12.
  • 13.
  • 14.  ADDITION - moreover | furthermore | and | also | too | as well | equally  ANTHISESIS - however | nevertheless | on the other hand | but | whereas  COMPARISON - compared with | in comparison with | similarly | in the same way  REASON / CAUSE - as | since | because | due to | owing to | because of | out of  RESULT / SUMMARY - as a result | consequently | so | therefore | then | in conclusion | in all | in brief | in short | in summary  PURPOSE - so that | in order that | in order to | to | for | for the sake of  EXAMPLE - for example | for instance | namely | that is to say | what I mean is  ORDER OF EVENTS - first(ly) | second(ly) | finally | first | next | then | after that | lastly TIME SEQUENCE - at first | after a while | in the end | finally  RE-EXPRESSION - in other words | that is to say | alternatively | rather  DEDUCTION - this means that | in that case it follows that | then | otherwise  SIDETRACKING - incidentally | by the way | to turn to | come to mention
  • 15.  The methods of reading usually differ in accordance with the contents of books, ____________ all books should be read with equal seriousness. Amusement is not the main objective of reading _____________ a good book, ____________ it is a novel or a biography or a drama, always deals with some aspect of knowledge _____________ helps us to know life better. It is ____________said _____________books are the best teachers.
  • 16.  Each of the U.S. manned space exploration project has specific major goals. (1)___________, the Mercury project was designed to test whether or not human beings could survive and function in outer space.  (2) _____________, the Mercury project tested rockets with the new Mercury space capsule, which could hold one person. (3) _____________, the Gemini project was carried out to find out whether two people could work in the weightless environment of space. (4)____________, Gemini astronauts were sent out to take “spacewalks.” (5)_____________, they floated outside their spacecraft in a spacesuit, connected by a tether.
  • 17.  But  Because  Whether  And  Therefore  that
  • 18.  First of all/ To begin with  Moreover/ In addition/ Also  After that  Therefore  In other words/ In fact