1. Evaluation
Throughoutthe meetingsmyscriptwasbothrefinedandaddedto.Inthe firstmeetingmostof the
feedbackwaspunctuationandformbasedwithcritiquessuchasthe capitalisationof character
names,speechmarks,line structure andcorrectscene changes. Afterthe correctionof these errors
and returningthe scriptto the clientthe secondroundof feedbackwasmostlyfocussedon
parenthesisplacingaswell asthe additionof the definitionof luciddreamingatthe beginningto
clarify the plot.
The clientparticularlylikedthe comedicsectionof dialoguebetweenthe robbersaswell asthe
descriptive voiceoverthatopensthe script.Theywere unsure astowhetherthe plotwouldmake
sense tofirsttime viewersandthisleadtothe definitionbeingadded asapreliminaryshot.
I believeIhave metthe expectationsof the clientasIhave produceda fullyformattedindustry
standardscript andshootingscriptthat meetsthe needsof the brief asa shortfilm.MoreoverIthink
that my chosentargetaudience of teentoyoungadultmiddle classindividualswillbe successfully
fulfilledinexpectationof myshortfilmasthe plotand focusisrelatable totheirownlives.
In additionmyfilmhasmetall the legal andethical requirementsinitspre-production due tothe
precautionsIhave takeninmakingsure all the materialsIwant to use are copyrightfree andlegal,
givingoutpermissionslipstothe castwho are under18 and moderatingthe contentof myscript to
keepitOFCOMfriendly.
Overall Iam pleasedwithwhatIhave producedasI am excitedtogo ontothe productionprocess
and start filmingwhatIhave createdonpaperso far. If I couldgo back to the beginningIwould
potentiallyaddinsome more excitingsettingstothe filmasthe locationis currentlymostlysetina
bedroomdespite Eryn’sabilitytodreamwhatevershe wantsto,howeverIamaware thatthis adds
to the relatabilityof the filmwiththe targetaudience andiseasytosource and filmintherefore this
ispotentiallyathoughtfora more expensive andtime abidingproject.LastlyIhave learntagreat
deal aboutmy abilitytowrite inthe formof a scriptand the opportunitiesthisbringsincreatinga
story to be filmed.
