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1. Evaluation
Within my first meeting with my client we discussed that she liked
the layout and storyline, but we looked at changing a few of the
words and phrasing to make it flow better.
In the next and last meeting the client explained where and how to
format the numbers down the left hand side of the script to
correlate to my shooting script.
Overall I think I have met the needs and expectations of the client,
brief and my target audience.
My script and shooting script, after adjusting a few formatting
errors are up to industry standard and meet the legal and ethical
requirements.
I am over all very pleased with my script and shooting script and
the storyline is what I was going for and achieves what I wanted it
to achieve. If I had to opportunity to start over I would try and
make the story a bit less predictable and stereotypical because some
parts seem fairly similar to other films. Throughout this Christ
writing process I have learned how to fully format a script and what
is shooting script is and how they work.
If I were to write my script again I might have changed the way I do
the snapchat conversation because I think it is going to be quite
difficult to make work but I am going to make it work. I might have
also made the meaning behind Lauren a bit easier to follow but I
think it will work anyway.