1. Blog feedback……<br />Aishah – of serious concern, what have you spent your weekend doing?? You haven’t added anything for a month and therefore will lose marks for your time management. Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />AJ – spelling of ‘strengths’, otherwise – going well but still lots of things to add off the last blog list I gave out.<br />Bobby - of serious concern, what have you spent your weekend doing?? You haven’t added anything for a month and therefore will lose marks for your time management. Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />Chloe – Good, no problems continue as you were – make sure everything from the latest blog sheet is on your blog. Well done for lots of video diaries……however, the latest one is out of synch??<br />Dami – With the camera angles post you have – now add matching camera angles from your own thriller opening. Your production schedule isn’t actually a post – this should say when you are going to film and what you need and who is involved. Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />Emily – spelling of treatment. Representation of women/ men needs more thought. Do some research of women in thriller films and femme fatales. See here for some help: http://www.filmsite.org/filmnoir.html, http://www.crimeculture.com/Contents/Articles-Summer03/SineadGoodis.html, <br />Jordan – nothing added in last week!? Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />Kerry – excellent – well done! Your latest video diary is slightly out of synch??? Continue to add everything off latest blog list.<br />Lauren - excellent – well done! Your latest video diary is slightly out of synch??? Preliminary task image is missing. Spelling grammar under question 4/2 needs amending – maybe hand me a copy to mark? Use links from your blog to find any of the other the audience questionnaire/ interviews. Your video for this overlaps your writing so I couldn’t read it all. Evaluation 2 needs more thought and detail. Prom night isn’t a thriller so can you also add a thriller to compare with?<br />Luke – you need to say why your influences are your influences. Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />Milly – very good storyboard. Add what effect you wanted to create with the ‘sparks’. Your audience profile needs images. You need to use slideshare or scribd. Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />Mohammed – With editing – you need to say what you learnt etc… with the process. Your blog is lacking in detail - Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />Nana – Good, going well. I think white writing might stand out more? Lots more to add off latest blog list.<br />Rianna - of serious concern, what have you spent your weekend doing?? You haven’t added anything for a month and therefore will lose marks for your time management. Lots more to add off latest blog list and only a week to do that and your evaluation.<br />Seb – See our blog for a proper example of a production schedule/ shoot list which you need. Your blog is of serious concern, what have you spent your weekend doing?? You haven’t added anything for a month and therefore will lose marks for your time management. Lots more to add off latest blog list and only a week to do that and your evaluation.<br />Tammana – Add audience feedback and your own comments on your rough cut.<br />Spelling of strengths. I am unable to watch your video diaries, I think you have password protected them which you’ll need to unlock for examiner. Add your own analysis to production logos. Otherwise going well, but still lots to add from latest blog list. <br />Tamara – Add images to audience profile. Otherwise going well, but still lots to add from latest blog list. <br />Yinka – lots of spelling mistakes in your posts – please check through. Why do you have an empty garageband post? Still lots to add from latest blog list. <br />Zac – Analyse production logo with what you learnt from them, what inspired you and what you hope to create. Why they are effective and what interests you about them? Where is your analysis from questionnaire?Still lots to add from latest blog list. Use capital I’s in your work.<br />Zubair – much improved – well done. Overall your blog needs more images and you need to use slideshare to upload things. Upload the student’s thriller opening that you discuss.<br />Spelling – affected, questionnaire, a lot, beginning – please change these.<br />You haven’t analysed any Michael Mann openings like you say in your case study.<br />You need to analyse the vertigo clip.<br />Upload the garageband music on ‘sound cloud’ and ask students to comment on it. Your preiliminary task needs a title and a written overview.<br />Halfway house needs analysis.<br />Use screen shots for ‘editing title openings’<br />Analyse the production logos in detail.<br />Your camera angle shots are not showing?<br />Where is your storyboard?<br />Character profile needs an image<br />Analyse Collateral movie trailer – there is no point posting things if there is no analysis.<br />Your evaluation ques 4, needs to be in the form mentioned on your evaluation sheet (not just a blog post) it also needs images and to check the spelling.<br />