This document contains feedback from tutors on multiple students' blogs for a film project. The tutors provide guidance on improvements needed, such as fixing spelling errors, reordering blog posts in chronological order, adding requested additional content like a production log or soundtrack, and ensuring all required elements like a rough cut are included and functioning properly. Students are advised to strengthen their evaluations and demonstrate time management. Tutors also note blogs that look good overall and need minor changes.

1. Anisha<br />Check through spelling – there are some mistakes

2. Add final storyboard/ rough cut

3. Final film should be at the beginning of theblog

4. The main problem is that your blog is in the wrong order – your meeting 1+2 shows the date 27/3 but your meeting 7+8 shows the date of 10/3 etc... – these should be the other way around, otherwise the examiner will think you made it up!! Please re-order so the beginning of the blog is the end of your project and the end of your blog is the beginning of the project.

5. Otherwise an excellent blog – please make your evaluation as good!!!Channon<br />Your synopsis is not showing – perhaps re-upload

6. Take the information on your pages and post them on your blog – don’t have any pages