1. As the majority of the group gave us a three for our
enthusiasm this shows that in our real film pitch we
will have to change certain things so that we can come
across as enthusiastic about our actual idea. This could
be done by more body language and more of our own
opinions and ideas.
This shows that they wasn’t all that excited about our
short film idea we can make them more excited by
doing things such as involving props and images and
addressing the audience a lot more so they can get
involved and there for become more excited about it.
There were more people that said they didn’t feel
directly addressed when we was delivering the pitch to
the class this was due to the fact we didn’t use eye
contact so that is what we will improve for next time.
It was the same number of people that said 4 and
5 this shows that although we didn’t do some
things we should we still made the class like the
idea showing we do have a strong idea for our
short film.
More people said that our strength was the originality
of our idea which shows we will not have to change
that at all, the one that people didn’t really say was
eye contact which is something that will defiantly
have to be improved for our final pitch.
The whole class said that we had to give more direct eye
contact next time in order to make the pitch better and
no one said we need to devise a more original idea.