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Abcz practice pitch feedback


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Abcz practice pitch feedback

  1. 1. Zoe ArmitageFor this question, it is clear by theresults that the film idea was clearlycommunicated to the group.For this question, I think that wecould have been more enthusiasticby using a different tone of voiceinstead of rushing the words.For these results I think that wecould have told a bit more about thefilm to make the audienceinterested.For these results I think that weneeded to use more eye contact tomake sure that we were addressingthe group properly. For this question I think that we got positive feedback but to improve the results I think that we could have used a log line that got them more interested in the film and comment more on where we got our influences from. For questions 6 and 7 I think that we got positive feedback for the originality of the idea and the clear delivery, although the negatives would be that we need to use eye contact and to answer any questions with confidence.
  2. 2. Zoe ArmitageOverall I think our group produced what we were going to say well, although we all need to have moreconfidence when delivering the pitch including eye contact, speak clearly and have a more relaxed bodylanguage.