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Writing in Math and
Science
Laurie Stowell
Cal State San Marcos
San Marcos Writing Project
lstowell@csusm.edu
Why write?
 Dr. Stephen Tsui: physics professor, Cal State
San Marcos
 See also: “Why I write” from the National
Writing Project in which writers from all walks
of life write about why they write.
http://www.nwp.org/cs/public/print/resourc
e/3663
 “Why I write” Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vANYvj
LzQy4&list=PLF779B2AC42B123FA
Disciplinary Literacy
“Thus, the purpose of disciplinary literacy is less about trying to
give students the tools (e.g., study skills) to be better students
generally, and more about inducting them into the disciplines.
That’s the idea of reading like a scientist or writing like a
historian or literary critic. Instead of having students study these
subjects as outsiders, disciplinary literacy tries to engage them in
exploring content in the way that insiders would. That means
treating the content as more than information to be memorized
for a test. In other words, the point of teaching disciplinary
literacy is to engage students is the same kinds of analysis,
argument, and literacy use that would be common in the fields.”
-Timothy Shanahan
Research demonstrates that every field of study
creates, evaluates, and communicates
knowledge in specialized ways. To “know” in a
discipline means you understand the purposes
of that discipline how knowledge is created and
represented; how research is framed and
pursued; what counts as evidence and how data
generates claims; and how disciplinary experts
read and write, solve problems, and make
meaning.
Pedagogical Content Knowledge
 Since reading and composing are central to every discipline
and their meaning-making processes and advancement, it
follows that every teacher is a teacher of reading and literacy as
practiced in their discipline. Students need to understand how
disciplinary experts use literacy and particular forms of
textuality to do their work, and they need lots of scaffolded
practice doing such work (notice, for example, how all Core
standard focus on process—on the “how”). The activity of
exercising Pedagogical Content Knowledge does not take time
away from disciplinary teaching—it is, in fact, teaching
students how to do the discipline in ways that will require
them to deeply learn the whys and the whats.
This emphasis is in fact a focus on all next
generation standards, including the CCSS:
apprenticing students into how to do
various disciplines and how to be
literate in various disciplines.
90/90/90 Schools Research
In the 90/90/90 schools in Reeves’ research the students wrote
everyday. Students processed information in a much clearer
way when they are required to write and writing gives teachers
a clearer idea of what help students need. But more
importantly, there was an association between writing and
performance in other subject areas. Many successful schools
reported that they had to sacrifice time in curriculum areas
other than writing, reading and math in order to “cover” the
entire curriculum. However more than 80% of the elementary
schools improved science scores. In addition when writing
scores went up, math scores went up. “It is difficult to escape
the conclusion that an emphasis on writing improvement has a
significant impact on student test scores in other disciplines,
including math and science.” (Reeves, 1999, p. 270)
Tierney’s H.S. Biology class
The experimental group kept reading logs, “neuron notes” (learning
logs), wrote practice essays, wrote to other audiences, end of class
summaries, did group writing and essay tests. The comparison
group did none of the writing except limited group writing and took
multiple-choice tests. Each group took a multiple-choice test at the
end of a unit, as well as recall tests. The results of the multiple-choice
tests were about the same for each group. But the results of the recall
test were substantially different. After sixteen weeks, the
experimental group scored 11% higher on the genetics recall test.
Tierney and Stookey concluded that the students who had the
opportunity to use expressive writing retained more of what they
learned. They believe the students “learn the subject matter more
thoroughly and their papers, reflecting what the student
understands, will be more interesting to read”. (Nagin & NWP, 2003,
p.54)
Writing:
A ticket to work or a ticket out
 College Board report: Writing: A ticket to work or a ticket
out.
 Surveyed 120 corporations
 “People who can not write clearly will not be hired”.
 “Writing is a “threshold skill” for both employment and
promotion, particularly for salaried employees. Half the
responding companies report that they take writing into
consideration when hiring professional employees. “In
most cases, writing ability could be your ticket in . . . or it
could be your ticket out,” said one respondent. “
Why write?
 To explain • To synthesize
 To inform • To summarize
 To describe • To define
 To argue • To prove
 To compare/contrast • To cite evidence
 To Problem Solve • To interpret
 To analyze • To report
Depth of Knowledge
Quickwrite:
• Things I already know or do about writing
to learn
 Why it is worth spending time on writing
in my class
Beginning and ending:
 Math, science, Physical Education, etc.
autobiography. Ask students to write their
own history with a particular subject: their
successes, setbacks, attitudes, highlights,
lowlights, etc. What is their math
autobiography?
 At the end of a unit or the year, ask students
to write how they are scientists,
mathematicians, etc. How do they or how can
they use what they learned in their life.
Quick, informal writing:
 Admit Slips: when entering the class, students
write on an assigned topic such as “What did you
notice was important in yesterday’s discussion”.
 Crystal Ball: Students describe what they think class
will be about, what will happen next in a science lab.
 Found poems: Students reread an assigned text and
find key phrase that “speak” to them, then rearrange
these into a poem structure without adding any of
their own words.
 Wonderopolis: wonderopolis.org: Write about the
“wonder of the day”. Write about your own
wondering.
 Yesterday’s news: Students summarize the
information presented the day before either from a
film, lecture, discussion or reading.
 Class or Individual Blog: Students can summarize
class content for each day on a blog or discuss
engaging topics online with each other or a wider
audience.
 “What if” scenarios: Students respond to prompts in
which information is changed from what they know
and they predict outcomes. Example: What would
happen if penicillin had not be discovered?
 Take a stand: Students discuss their opinions about a
controversial topic such as “Just because we can,
should we clone people?”
 Letters: Students write letters to others including
elected officials, family, friends, people who make a
difference. etc. Write to real or imaginary people. See
“Open Letter to the Universe” video.
 Exit slips: Used as a closure activity at the end of the
period, students write on a prompt such as, “The
three best things I learned today are…”
 Writing Frames: Frames are a good support for
English learners and struggling writers. They
provide a scaffold for writing that can be gradually
released.
 20 Things (or 10 things) You didn’t know about:
Discover Magazine features this on their back page.
Writers list 20 interesting facts displayed in
interesting ways.
Mentor Texts:
•What does it feel like from Esquire magazine: Choose
an experience and explain what it feels like The
experience could include scientific or mathematic
principles. In P.E.: what does it feel like to score a
goal, steal the ball, hit a double, etc.
• The Ocean is… by Kathleen Kranking: Choose a topic
and write what it is like using metaphors and similes.
• Diary of a worm by Doreen Cronin: Write about life
from any object or living thing’s point of view.
• Hello ocean by Pam Munoz Ryan: Write about a living
thing using all 5 senses, include relevant details.
Mentor Texts:
 The important book by Margaret Wise Brown: Students
write a paragraph about any topic citing the most
important thing and other aspects of the topic.
 Linnea’s Almanac by Cristina Bjork: Students keep an
observational journal over a period of time like a
moon journal, observing a patch of land over time,
changes in food that is not refrigerated, etc.
 Pigs will be pigs by Amy Axelrod & Sharon McGinley-
Nally: Create extended story problems and illustrate.
Create picture books of these story problems.
Designing Assignments
 Create topics that invite inventive thinking and
avoid topics that invite cliches or straight listing of
facts.
 Keep the assignment focused. A vague assignment
with confusing directions invites dull, vacuous
responses.
 Choose topics with purpose. The more purposeful
the assignment in students’ eyes, the more likely
your are to accomplish our teaching aims. Would
you want to do the assignment?
 Make the topic meaningful within students’ experiences.
Design topics that allow students to use their own experience
or the semester’s work for examples and support.
 Use specific terms such as define, illustrate, argue, compare,
contrast, evaluate as precise signposts of your expectations.
(Pull verbs from Webb’s Depth of Knowledge – at all levels)
 Use creative formats for some assignments. (See RAFTS)
 Whenever possible, allow for choice in writing assignments.
 Define the grading criteria you’ll use.
Assigning vs. Teaching Writing
When writing is assigned:
Students write only on teacher’s topics
When writing is taught:
Students have opportunities to create
topics that matter to them
Teacher selects topics for papers without
consideration of audience & purpose.
Audience & purpose for papers are
specifically identified in assignments.
Students are asked to analyze, compare,
describe, narrate, review and summarize
without the strategies to successfully
complete these tasks.
Students are given writing models,
assignments & strategies to guide each of
their different tasks.
Students are required to rewrite – in
some cases. But rewriting is usually
limited to correcting grammar, usage, etc
Students are encouraged to revise, edit
and improve-and to correct drafts and
then resubmit.
Students and teachers are bored by what
students write.
Students and teachers are excited about
what students write and make efforts to
display and publish.
Starting Out Gently with Affective,
Open-Ended Prompts
 Writing about thinking is challenging. For this reason, it's
best not to start out having students write about unfamiliar
mathematical or scientific ideas. First get them used to
writing in a math and science class:
 Begin with affective, open-ended questions about students'
feelings.
 I learned that I…
 I discovered that I …
 I was surprised that…
 I noticed that I…
 Once students have become accustomed to writing about
their attitudes and feelings toward mathematics in their
journals, they are ready to write about simple, familiar
math concepts. It is important not to make the writing too
difficult by asking them to write about unfamiliar math
ideas. Using writing to review familiar math ideas will
increase confidence and skill in writing as well as revisit
important math concepts.
 Explain what is important to know about fractions
Moving On: Writing About More
Advanced Math Concepts
 When you feel your students are ready, ask them to write about
more complex mathematical ideas, including concepts being taught
at their current grade level. To help move students into this more
advanced level of writing about their thinking. Here are some other
suggestions to help :
 1. Encourage students to use drawings and graphs to explain their
thinking.
 Research shows that using simple visual aids (diagrams, graphs,
etc.) improves mathematical problem-solving ability, especially in
female students.
 2. As student writing progresses, ask students to write about their
small group work.
 Ask the group to write a summary of how they reached a solution,
including any "false starts" or "dead ends."
Interactive Notebooks/Blogs
Real scientists keep notebooks:
Think as a scientist…
Record as a scientist…
Reflect as a scientist…
Write as a scientist.
Math Journals/Blogs
Why Journal?
1. Solve tricky problems: write about it from
our point of view until solve them.
2. Make thinking visible
3. Gain clarity
4. Get feedback
5. Verify progress
What goes on the right side?
 Start the page with the date and subject title at the top of the page.
 ONLY odd numbered pages.
 The right side is for writing down information you are given in
class.
 Notes from lectures, books or videos.
 Vocabulary Words and their Definitions.
 Notes for labs and lab instructions, procedures and materials.
 Teacher Questions and Sample Problems
 Any other type of INPUT you get in class.
On the left side:
 Brainstorming •Diagrams
 Mind mapping •Drawings
 Concept Maps •Writing Prompts
 Venn Diagrams •Commentary
 Pictures •Flow chart
 Drawings •Reflections
 Significant Statements
What goes on the left side?
Interactive:
 Writer, teacher and/or peer returns to the notebook to
reflect and interact with it!
 Students can discuss their notebook entries with each
other.
 Examples of interesting thinking or good writing can
be shared with the class with doc cam.
Show what you know!
Student Blogs
 Middle School Students’ math blogs
 Ten commandments for science blogs:
http://scienceblogs.com/digitalbio/2013/0
3/03/the-ten-commandments-of-student-
science-blogging/
Good sites for student blogging
Kidblog.org is a free safe blogging site for schools.
Teachers control and monitor student blogs. All
student blogs are private by default, but teachers can
choose to make certain posts public or share them
with parents.
Edublogs.org is a secure blogging site that provides
different levels of paid accounts depending on the
number of teachers using the subscription.
Writing about
Vocabulary
Many high concept terms can be learned more
deeply and remembered longer by thinking
about and writing about them in interesting
ways.
Student sample
Perpendicular
Right angles; divergent paths
Sharp and upright
From that corner, that
Point; that bend that began us
Our shapes move in opposing
ways
Spreading and shifting
Out from each other
Passing the same blocks and
squares
In this grid of a city.
At night, I pass the tiny
Dots that make up our world
Bits of light scattered evenly over
Our web of steel and stone
I look up to the stars
Their light reflects the lattice
Of bulbs beaming up from the
buildings
I wonder
If there
Our lines might run parallel
Or if we are still
Perpendicular
-Jessica Swan
Rotate (by Tracy Tiers)
Active ingredient: movement…………………..100%
Uses:
Temporarily relieves vertical alignment of pdf file due to improper
scanning technique
Temporarily relieves substitution player from sideline duties when her
volleyball team regains the serve
Temporarily relieves Earth from permanently facing the sun
Temporarily relieves soil from nurturing the same crops each season
Temporarily relieves the evening security guard from an all night shift
 Warnings: Do not take rotate if you are prone to motion sickness or
have an allergic reaction to change.
Dear Obtuse Angle:
I have come to the conclusion that we are no longer able to be
together. As an obtuse angle, you are very large. You can be up
to 180 degrees! As an acute angle, I am small and can only be
up to 90 degrees. I want someone who can always live with me
the same line. If you are 130 degrees then I can only be 50
degrees! What will happen if I grow to be 89 degrees? I just
don't think it will work. For our future's sake, we must break
up. I will pack up your stuff and place it at the end of the line
by the end of the day.
Sincerely,
Acute Angle -Sarah Stone
Perpetual
Perpetual, the going and
going
The pedaling of a bike
Round and round without
stopping
Perpetual, the going and
going
Like the drizzly leak of a
faucet at night
The continued,
unrelenting, drip, drip,
drip
Perpetual, the going and
going
Relentless, persistence
without desisting
The continued returning
like that of the seasons
Perpetual, the going
and going
A time of timelessness
Like the ever turning
gears of a clock
Perpetual, the going
and going
Like a ceaseless
metronome
Without tire or break,
waving back n' forth
Perpetual, the going
and going
No sequel just auto-
replay
Like a bad movie
continuously viewed
Perpetual, the going
and going
The non stop rhythmic
pattern
Like the beating heart
of an immortal
Perpetual, the going
and going
No change, no
beginning, no end
The wheel of motion
bound by nothing
Perpetual, the going
and going…
Argument:
The Universal Writing Genre
 The reason the CCSS focus so heavily on
argumentation as a genre is because of its frequency
of use in the real world.
 Argument is more evidence based and persuasion is
more emotion based.
 Argument serves every content area.
 An argument is a claim supported by evidence.
“Slip or Trip”
Writing Arguments
 Claim
 Evidence
 Warrants: what makes sense in the
natural world? A warrant ties the
evidence to the claim.
Writing Argument with
Evidence
• Mythbusters: Moon Hoax (see resource list
for video links)
 Mythbusters Moon Hoax google form Evidence
Chart:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1UOif_F
5XEldQrMxT3-
tpkKSKyOs494MpvvZglPIMSnU/edit#gid=0
RAFTS
Math RAFT sample
Math RAFT sample
Science RAFT sample
 8th grade teacher shares how she used RAFT to write
in her science class.
Greatest Scientist of All Time
Role: you
Audience: scientist from a past era
Format: written interview
Topic: the greatest contribution to science
Strong Verb: write and document
What would RAFT look like in
your class?
 Choose a unit you teach
 Draft some possible RAFTs students could
choose.
 Leave some blank spots in your chart that
students could fill in.
 RAFT Student template:
http://www.readwritethink.org/files/resou
rces/printouts/RAFTWriting.pdf
RAFT rubric
Inquiry Study
Engaging Students in
Deeper Learning
What is inquiry?
“The process of addressing
problems expressed by
guiding questions.”
(Wilhelm)
Inquiry Based Learning
 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLqi0raxldc&feat
ure=related
 Inquiry based learning in an 8th grade science class:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z8Lh5MfyE-
E&feature=related
Why inquiry?
 What are the most effective modes of instruction in
the teaching of composition?
 He analyzed all the studies on teaching
composition and categorized the modes into:
 Grammar instruction
 Free write
 Sentence combining
 Models
 Scales
 Inquiry
Hillock’s Research
“Inquiry focuses the attention of students on strategies
for dealing with sets of data, strategies that will be
used in writing. For example, treatments categorized
as inquiry might involve students in finding and
stating specific details that convey personal experience
vividly, in examining sets of data to develop and
support explanatory generalizations or that present
ethical problems and in developing arguments about
those situations.”
“…the teacher plans and uses activities that result in
high levels of student interaction concerning particular
problems parallel to those they encounter in certain
kinds of writing, such as generating criteria and
examples to develop extended definitions of concepts or
generating arguable assertions from appropriate data
and predicting and countering opposing
arguments…This mode places a priority on high levels
of students involvement… This mode places priority on
structured problem solving activities with clear
objectives, planned to enable students to deal with
similar problems in composing.”
Setting up an Inquiry
1. Identify an essential question and associated
enduring understandings
2. Identify a final project: what can students do at the
end of the unit that will demonstrate their knowledge.
3. Create a backwards plan: a carefully ordered set of
activities that support students’ progress, text by text
and activity by activity.
Getting started with a question:
Reframe standards as essential questions
 Go through your standards and circle all the verbs. The
higher level thinking skills the standards call for, the easier
they can be met by inquiry:
* “identify”, “discuss”, “use” are low level thinking
* “identify and define” and “discuss craft” are mid level
* “evaluate”, “relate”, “connect”, “question”, “analyze”
are higher level thinking.
What are the questions worth
pursuing?
• What would you do for love? What makes good relationships?
 Civil rights movement: What are our civil rights and how can we
protect and promote them?
 Is war ever necessary?
 What is courage?
 What happened to the dinosaurs?
 Is Holden Caulfield a typical teenager or pathological adolescent?
 What’s wrong with our school and how can we improve it?
 In what ways do present cultures relate to their past and future?
 Can liberty and security be balanced?
 What makes an influential historical figure?
 What are the costs and benefits of cloning stem cell research?
 What is our proper relationship to nature?
 What are the effects of genetically altered organisms?
 Is progress always good?
 What is a good leader?
 What makes a good home –for us, for lobsters, bears?
An essential question:
 Honors students “reality principle”. It addresses
their point of view and need for inquiry to be
interesting and relevant in their terms.
 Addresses the “heart of the discipline” being
studied. Essential disciplinary knowledge is
required to answer it.
 Possesses “emotive force, intellectual bite or
edginess”. It invites students into ongoing
conversation and debates about real world
disciplinary issues.
 Is open-ended, possible to contend, arguable. It must
be complex enough to house multiple perspectives
and possible answers.
 Is concise and clearly stated
 Is linked to data. There are available resources to use
in the pursuit of answers.
 May lead to new questions asked by students
What could be questions worth
pursuing in your class?(related to
your curriculum)
After identifying goals, brainstorm
what kinds of writing that would
demonstrate student attainment,
understanding, mastery or use of
concepts and procedures.
Ozobots Inquiry
 Ozobots: http://www.ozobot.com
 Ozobots app
 sphero: http://www.gosphero.com
 Middle School Sphero projects:
http://blogs.southfieldchristian.org/middlep
ages/2015/03/sphero-challenges/
Inquiry
 Students determine questions
 Students develop proposals
 Students determine criteria for moving forward
on proposals
 Students conduct experiments
 Students “publish” results
Multi-genre writing
• Another way to pursue inquiry and
demonstrate understandings.
• Multigenre, inquiry, project based learning,
CCSS are all very compatible.
• Using multiple sources of information,
analyzing and synthesizing then producing
multiple genres to demonstrate learning.
Genres can be combined in one
format:
 Magazines
 Zines
 Newspapers
 Informational picture books
 Anthology
Multi-genre writing
Or students and teachers can enter into
a kind of contract identifying a
particular number of different genres
to answer their question.
Getting Started:
Identify question(s)
Identify sources
Identify forms
The project should be arranged in
some logical order. The writer
needs to create a cohesion or flow to
the project.
How do spiders spin webs?
 Two voice poem
 Diary of a spider
 6 word memoir
 Song (using old Spiderman tune)
 Comic strip
 Obituary
 Recipe for a web
Student samples:
Salem Witch Trials
Ben and Jerry’s
Digital Multi-genre projects
 Walt Disney:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMopnh0QRyo&feature=
related
 Alcohol Awareness:
http://writing.colostate.edu/gallery/multigenre/alcohol/inde
x.htm
 Samples of multi-genre papers:
http://writing.colostate.edu/gallery/multigenre/index.htm
 Tom Romano’s site with many resources including rubrics:
http://www.users.miamioh.edu/romanots/Tom_Romano.ht
ml
Designing Rubrics
 Match criteria to assignment goals, i.e. what
concepts did you want students to learn.
 Match writing criteria to content area: clearly
communicated science concepts, math concepts, etc.
 Used appropriate terminology correctly
 Emphasize communicating ideas and organization
 Keep grammar, usage, spelling in perspective (don’t
over-emphasize)
1 2 3 4 5
Scientific
Accuracy
Clearly
communic
ated
Quotes &
paraphrasing
Appropriate
evidence
Grammar
and
spelling
Resources
 Writing Fix has a RAFT prompt builder: RAFTS
home page:
http://writingfix.com/WAC/RAFT.htm
 Writing Fix: Writing across the Curriculum,
Number Fix:
http://writingfix.com/WAC/NumberFix.htm
 Writing Fix: Writing across the Curriculum, Science
Fix: http://writingfix.com/WAC/ScienceFix.htm
 See Resource list

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Writing.science.math.roosevelt.m.s.final.3.30.15

  • 1. Writing in Math and Science Laurie Stowell Cal State San Marcos San Marcos Writing Project lstowell@csusm.edu
  • 2. Why write?  Dr. Stephen Tsui: physics professor, Cal State San Marcos  See also: “Why I write” from the National Writing Project in which writers from all walks of life write about why they write. http://www.nwp.org/cs/public/print/resourc e/3663  “Why I write” Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vANYvj LzQy4&list=PLF779B2AC42B123FA
  • 3. Disciplinary Literacy “Thus, the purpose of disciplinary literacy is less about trying to give students the tools (e.g., study skills) to be better students generally, and more about inducting them into the disciplines. That’s the idea of reading like a scientist or writing like a historian or literary critic. Instead of having students study these subjects as outsiders, disciplinary literacy tries to engage them in exploring content in the way that insiders would. That means treating the content as more than information to be memorized for a test. In other words, the point of teaching disciplinary literacy is to engage students is the same kinds of analysis, argument, and literacy use that would be common in the fields.” -Timothy Shanahan
  • 4. Research demonstrates that every field of study creates, evaluates, and communicates knowledge in specialized ways. To “know” in a discipline means you understand the purposes of that discipline how knowledge is created and represented; how research is framed and pursued; what counts as evidence and how data generates claims; and how disciplinary experts read and write, solve problems, and make meaning.
  • 5. Pedagogical Content Knowledge  Since reading and composing are central to every discipline and their meaning-making processes and advancement, it follows that every teacher is a teacher of reading and literacy as practiced in their discipline. Students need to understand how disciplinary experts use literacy and particular forms of textuality to do their work, and they need lots of scaffolded practice doing such work (notice, for example, how all Core standard focus on process—on the “how”). The activity of exercising Pedagogical Content Knowledge does not take time away from disciplinary teaching—it is, in fact, teaching students how to do the discipline in ways that will require them to deeply learn the whys and the whats.
  • 6. This emphasis is in fact a focus on all next generation standards, including the CCSS: apprenticing students into how to do various disciplines and how to be literate in various disciplines.
  • 7. 90/90/90 Schools Research In the 90/90/90 schools in Reeves’ research the students wrote everyday. Students processed information in a much clearer way when they are required to write and writing gives teachers a clearer idea of what help students need. But more importantly, there was an association between writing and performance in other subject areas. Many successful schools reported that they had to sacrifice time in curriculum areas other than writing, reading and math in order to “cover” the entire curriculum. However more than 80% of the elementary schools improved science scores. In addition when writing scores went up, math scores went up. “It is difficult to escape the conclusion that an emphasis on writing improvement has a significant impact on student test scores in other disciplines, including math and science.” (Reeves, 1999, p. 270)
  • 8. Tierney’s H.S. Biology class The experimental group kept reading logs, “neuron notes” (learning logs), wrote practice essays, wrote to other audiences, end of class summaries, did group writing and essay tests. The comparison group did none of the writing except limited group writing and took multiple-choice tests. Each group took a multiple-choice test at the end of a unit, as well as recall tests. The results of the multiple-choice tests were about the same for each group. But the results of the recall test were substantially different. After sixteen weeks, the experimental group scored 11% higher on the genetics recall test. Tierney and Stookey concluded that the students who had the opportunity to use expressive writing retained more of what they learned. They believe the students “learn the subject matter more thoroughly and their papers, reflecting what the student understands, will be more interesting to read”. (Nagin & NWP, 2003, p.54)
  • 9. Writing: A ticket to work or a ticket out  College Board report: Writing: A ticket to work or a ticket out.  Surveyed 120 corporations  “People who can not write clearly will not be hired”.  “Writing is a “threshold skill” for both employment and promotion, particularly for salaried employees. Half the responding companies report that they take writing into consideration when hiring professional employees. “In most cases, writing ability could be your ticket in . . . or it could be your ticket out,” said one respondent. “
  • 10. Why write?  To explain • To synthesize  To inform • To summarize  To describe • To define  To argue • To prove  To compare/contrast • To cite evidence  To Problem Solve • To interpret  To analyze • To report
  • 12. Quickwrite: • Things I already know or do about writing to learn  Why it is worth spending time on writing in my class
  • 13. Beginning and ending:  Math, science, Physical Education, etc. autobiography. Ask students to write their own history with a particular subject: their successes, setbacks, attitudes, highlights, lowlights, etc. What is their math autobiography?  At the end of a unit or the year, ask students to write how they are scientists, mathematicians, etc. How do they or how can they use what they learned in their life.
  • 14. Quick, informal writing:  Admit Slips: when entering the class, students write on an assigned topic such as “What did you notice was important in yesterday’s discussion”.  Crystal Ball: Students describe what they think class will be about, what will happen next in a science lab.  Found poems: Students reread an assigned text and find key phrase that “speak” to them, then rearrange these into a poem structure without adding any of their own words.
  • 15.  Wonderopolis: wonderopolis.org: Write about the “wonder of the day”. Write about your own wondering.  Yesterday’s news: Students summarize the information presented the day before either from a film, lecture, discussion or reading.  Class or Individual Blog: Students can summarize class content for each day on a blog or discuss engaging topics online with each other or a wider audience.
  • 16.  “What if” scenarios: Students respond to prompts in which information is changed from what they know and they predict outcomes. Example: What would happen if penicillin had not be discovered?  Take a stand: Students discuss their opinions about a controversial topic such as “Just because we can, should we clone people?”  Letters: Students write letters to others including elected officials, family, friends, people who make a difference. etc. Write to real or imaginary people. See “Open Letter to the Universe” video.
  • 17.  Exit slips: Used as a closure activity at the end of the period, students write on a prompt such as, “The three best things I learned today are…”  Writing Frames: Frames are a good support for English learners and struggling writers. They provide a scaffold for writing that can be gradually released.  20 Things (or 10 things) You didn’t know about: Discover Magazine features this on their back page. Writers list 20 interesting facts displayed in interesting ways.
  • 18. Mentor Texts: •What does it feel like from Esquire magazine: Choose an experience and explain what it feels like The experience could include scientific or mathematic principles. In P.E.: what does it feel like to score a goal, steal the ball, hit a double, etc. • The Ocean is… by Kathleen Kranking: Choose a topic and write what it is like using metaphors and similes. • Diary of a worm by Doreen Cronin: Write about life from any object or living thing’s point of view. • Hello ocean by Pam Munoz Ryan: Write about a living thing using all 5 senses, include relevant details.
  • 19. Mentor Texts:  The important book by Margaret Wise Brown: Students write a paragraph about any topic citing the most important thing and other aspects of the topic.  Linnea’s Almanac by Cristina Bjork: Students keep an observational journal over a period of time like a moon journal, observing a patch of land over time, changes in food that is not refrigerated, etc.  Pigs will be pigs by Amy Axelrod & Sharon McGinley- Nally: Create extended story problems and illustrate. Create picture books of these story problems.
  • 20. Designing Assignments  Create topics that invite inventive thinking and avoid topics that invite cliches or straight listing of facts.  Keep the assignment focused. A vague assignment with confusing directions invites dull, vacuous responses.  Choose topics with purpose. The more purposeful the assignment in students’ eyes, the more likely your are to accomplish our teaching aims. Would you want to do the assignment?
  • 21.  Make the topic meaningful within students’ experiences. Design topics that allow students to use their own experience or the semester’s work for examples and support.  Use specific terms such as define, illustrate, argue, compare, contrast, evaluate as precise signposts of your expectations. (Pull verbs from Webb’s Depth of Knowledge – at all levels)  Use creative formats for some assignments. (See RAFTS)  Whenever possible, allow for choice in writing assignments.  Define the grading criteria you’ll use.
  • 22. Assigning vs. Teaching Writing When writing is assigned: Students write only on teacher’s topics When writing is taught: Students have opportunities to create topics that matter to them Teacher selects topics for papers without consideration of audience & purpose. Audience & purpose for papers are specifically identified in assignments. Students are asked to analyze, compare, describe, narrate, review and summarize without the strategies to successfully complete these tasks. Students are given writing models, assignments & strategies to guide each of their different tasks. Students are required to rewrite – in some cases. But rewriting is usually limited to correcting grammar, usage, etc Students are encouraged to revise, edit and improve-and to correct drafts and then resubmit. Students and teachers are bored by what students write. Students and teachers are excited about what students write and make efforts to display and publish.
  • 23. Starting Out Gently with Affective, Open-Ended Prompts  Writing about thinking is challenging. For this reason, it's best not to start out having students write about unfamiliar mathematical or scientific ideas. First get them used to writing in a math and science class:  Begin with affective, open-ended questions about students' feelings.  I learned that I…  I discovered that I …  I was surprised that…  I noticed that I…
  • 24.  Once students have become accustomed to writing about their attitudes and feelings toward mathematics in their journals, they are ready to write about simple, familiar math concepts. It is important not to make the writing too difficult by asking them to write about unfamiliar math ideas. Using writing to review familiar math ideas will increase confidence and skill in writing as well as revisit important math concepts.  Explain what is important to know about fractions
  • 25. Moving On: Writing About More Advanced Math Concepts  When you feel your students are ready, ask them to write about more complex mathematical ideas, including concepts being taught at their current grade level. To help move students into this more advanced level of writing about their thinking. Here are some other suggestions to help :  1. Encourage students to use drawings and graphs to explain their thinking.  Research shows that using simple visual aids (diagrams, graphs, etc.) improves mathematical problem-solving ability, especially in female students.  2. As student writing progresses, ask students to write about their small group work.  Ask the group to write a summary of how they reached a solution, including any "false starts" or "dead ends."
  • 26. Interactive Notebooks/Blogs Real scientists keep notebooks: Think as a scientist… Record as a scientist… Reflect as a scientist… Write as a scientist.
  • 27. Math Journals/Blogs Why Journal? 1. Solve tricky problems: write about it from our point of view until solve them. 2. Make thinking visible 3. Gain clarity 4. Get feedback 5. Verify progress
  • 28.
  • 29. What goes on the right side?  Start the page with the date and subject title at the top of the page.  ONLY odd numbered pages.  The right side is for writing down information you are given in class.  Notes from lectures, books or videos.  Vocabulary Words and their Definitions.  Notes for labs and lab instructions, procedures and materials.  Teacher Questions and Sample Problems  Any other type of INPUT you get in class.
  • 30. On the left side:  Brainstorming •Diagrams  Mind mapping •Drawings  Concept Maps •Writing Prompts  Venn Diagrams •Commentary  Pictures •Flow chart  Drawings •Reflections  Significant Statements
  • 31. What goes on the left side?
  • 32. Interactive:  Writer, teacher and/or peer returns to the notebook to reflect and interact with it!  Students can discuss their notebook entries with each other.  Examples of interesting thinking or good writing can be shared with the class with doc cam.
  • 33. Show what you know!
  • 34. Student Blogs  Middle School Students’ math blogs  Ten commandments for science blogs: http://scienceblogs.com/digitalbio/2013/0 3/03/the-ten-commandments-of-student- science-blogging/
  • 35. Good sites for student blogging Kidblog.org is a free safe blogging site for schools. Teachers control and monitor student blogs. All student blogs are private by default, but teachers can choose to make certain posts public or share them with parents. Edublogs.org is a secure blogging site that provides different levels of paid accounts depending on the number of teachers using the subscription.
  • 36. Writing about Vocabulary Many high concept terms can be learned more deeply and remembered longer by thinking about and writing about them in interesting ways.
  • 37. Student sample Perpendicular Right angles; divergent paths Sharp and upright From that corner, that Point; that bend that began us Our shapes move in opposing ways Spreading and shifting Out from each other Passing the same blocks and squares In this grid of a city. At night, I pass the tiny Dots that make up our world Bits of light scattered evenly over Our web of steel and stone I look up to the stars Their light reflects the lattice Of bulbs beaming up from the buildings I wonder If there Our lines might run parallel Or if we are still Perpendicular -Jessica Swan
  • 38. Rotate (by Tracy Tiers) Active ingredient: movement…………………..100% Uses: Temporarily relieves vertical alignment of pdf file due to improper scanning technique Temporarily relieves substitution player from sideline duties when her volleyball team regains the serve Temporarily relieves Earth from permanently facing the sun Temporarily relieves soil from nurturing the same crops each season Temporarily relieves the evening security guard from an all night shift  Warnings: Do not take rotate if you are prone to motion sickness or have an allergic reaction to change.
  • 39. Dear Obtuse Angle: I have come to the conclusion that we are no longer able to be together. As an obtuse angle, you are very large. You can be up to 180 degrees! As an acute angle, I am small and can only be up to 90 degrees. I want someone who can always live with me the same line. If you are 130 degrees then I can only be 50 degrees! What will happen if I grow to be 89 degrees? I just don't think it will work. For our future's sake, we must break up. I will pack up your stuff and place it at the end of the line by the end of the day. Sincerely, Acute Angle -Sarah Stone
  • 40. Perpetual Perpetual, the going and going The pedaling of a bike Round and round without stopping Perpetual, the going and going Like the drizzly leak of a faucet at night The continued, unrelenting, drip, drip, drip Perpetual, the going and going Relentless, persistence without desisting The continued returning like that of the seasons Perpetual, the going and going A time of timelessness Like the ever turning gears of a clock Perpetual, the going and going Like a ceaseless metronome Without tire or break, waving back n' forth Perpetual, the going and going No sequel just auto- replay Like a bad movie continuously viewed Perpetual, the going and going The non stop rhythmic pattern Like the beating heart of an immortal Perpetual, the going and going No change, no beginning, no end The wheel of motion bound by nothing Perpetual, the going and going…
  • 41. Argument: The Universal Writing Genre  The reason the CCSS focus so heavily on argumentation as a genre is because of its frequency of use in the real world.  Argument is more evidence based and persuasion is more emotion based.  Argument serves every content area.  An argument is a claim supported by evidence.
  • 42. “Slip or Trip” Writing Arguments  Claim  Evidence  Warrants: what makes sense in the natural world? A warrant ties the evidence to the claim.
  • 43. Writing Argument with Evidence • Mythbusters: Moon Hoax (see resource list for video links)  Mythbusters Moon Hoax google form Evidence Chart: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1UOif_F 5XEldQrMxT3- tpkKSKyOs494MpvvZglPIMSnU/edit#gid=0
  • 44. RAFTS
  • 45.
  • 48. Science RAFT sample  8th grade teacher shares how she used RAFT to write in her science class. Greatest Scientist of All Time Role: you Audience: scientist from a past era Format: written interview Topic: the greatest contribution to science Strong Verb: write and document
  • 49. What would RAFT look like in your class?  Choose a unit you teach  Draft some possible RAFTs students could choose.  Leave some blank spots in your chart that students could fill in.  RAFT Student template: http://www.readwritethink.org/files/resou rces/printouts/RAFTWriting.pdf
  • 51. Inquiry Study Engaging Students in Deeper Learning
  • 52. What is inquiry? “The process of addressing problems expressed by guiding questions.” (Wilhelm)
  • 53. Inquiry Based Learning  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLqi0raxldc&feat ure=related  Inquiry based learning in an 8th grade science class: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z8Lh5MfyE- E&feature=related
  • 54. Why inquiry?  What are the most effective modes of instruction in the teaching of composition?  He analyzed all the studies on teaching composition and categorized the modes into:  Grammar instruction  Free write  Sentence combining  Models  Scales  Inquiry
  • 56. “Inquiry focuses the attention of students on strategies for dealing with sets of data, strategies that will be used in writing. For example, treatments categorized as inquiry might involve students in finding and stating specific details that convey personal experience vividly, in examining sets of data to develop and support explanatory generalizations or that present ethical problems and in developing arguments about those situations.”
  • 57. “…the teacher plans and uses activities that result in high levels of student interaction concerning particular problems parallel to those they encounter in certain kinds of writing, such as generating criteria and examples to develop extended definitions of concepts or generating arguable assertions from appropriate data and predicting and countering opposing arguments…This mode places a priority on high levels of students involvement… This mode places priority on structured problem solving activities with clear objectives, planned to enable students to deal with similar problems in composing.”
  • 58. Setting up an Inquiry 1. Identify an essential question and associated enduring understandings 2. Identify a final project: what can students do at the end of the unit that will demonstrate their knowledge. 3. Create a backwards plan: a carefully ordered set of activities that support students’ progress, text by text and activity by activity.
  • 59. Getting started with a question: Reframe standards as essential questions  Go through your standards and circle all the verbs. The higher level thinking skills the standards call for, the easier they can be met by inquiry: * “identify”, “discuss”, “use” are low level thinking * “identify and define” and “discuss craft” are mid level * “evaluate”, “relate”, “connect”, “question”, “analyze” are higher level thinking.
  • 60. What are the questions worth pursuing? • What would you do for love? What makes good relationships?  Civil rights movement: What are our civil rights and how can we protect and promote them?  Is war ever necessary?  What is courage?  What happened to the dinosaurs?  Is Holden Caulfield a typical teenager or pathological adolescent?  What’s wrong with our school and how can we improve it?  In what ways do present cultures relate to their past and future?
  • 61.  Can liberty and security be balanced?  What makes an influential historical figure?  What are the costs and benefits of cloning stem cell research?  What is our proper relationship to nature?  What are the effects of genetically altered organisms?  Is progress always good?  What is a good leader?  What makes a good home –for us, for lobsters, bears?
  • 62. An essential question:  Honors students “reality principle”. It addresses their point of view and need for inquiry to be interesting and relevant in their terms.  Addresses the “heart of the discipline” being studied. Essential disciplinary knowledge is required to answer it.  Possesses “emotive force, intellectual bite or edginess”. It invites students into ongoing conversation and debates about real world disciplinary issues.
  • 63.  Is open-ended, possible to contend, arguable. It must be complex enough to house multiple perspectives and possible answers.  Is concise and clearly stated  Is linked to data. There are available resources to use in the pursuit of answers.  May lead to new questions asked by students
  • 64. What could be questions worth pursuing in your class?(related to your curriculum) After identifying goals, brainstorm what kinds of writing that would demonstrate student attainment, understanding, mastery or use of concepts and procedures.
  • 65. Ozobots Inquiry  Ozobots: http://www.ozobot.com  Ozobots app  sphero: http://www.gosphero.com  Middle School Sphero projects: http://blogs.southfieldchristian.org/middlep ages/2015/03/sphero-challenges/
  • 66. Inquiry  Students determine questions  Students develop proposals  Students determine criteria for moving forward on proposals  Students conduct experiments  Students “publish” results
  • 67.
  • 68. Multi-genre writing • Another way to pursue inquiry and demonstrate understandings. • Multigenre, inquiry, project based learning, CCSS are all very compatible. • Using multiple sources of information, analyzing and synthesizing then producing multiple genres to demonstrate learning.
  • 69. Genres can be combined in one format:  Magazines  Zines  Newspapers  Informational picture books  Anthology
  • 70. Multi-genre writing Or students and teachers can enter into a kind of contract identifying a particular number of different genres to answer their question.
  • 71. Getting Started: Identify question(s) Identify sources Identify forms The project should be arranged in some logical order. The writer needs to create a cohesion or flow to the project.
  • 72. How do spiders spin webs?  Two voice poem  Diary of a spider  6 word memoir  Song (using old Spiderman tune)  Comic strip  Obituary  Recipe for a web
  • 75. Digital Multi-genre projects  Walt Disney: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMopnh0QRyo&feature= related  Alcohol Awareness: http://writing.colostate.edu/gallery/multigenre/alcohol/inde x.htm  Samples of multi-genre papers: http://writing.colostate.edu/gallery/multigenre/index.htm  Tom Romano’s site with many resources including rubrics: http://www.users.miamioh.edu/romanots/Tom_Romano.ht ml
  • 76. Designing Rubrics  Match criteria to assignment goals, i.e. what concepts did you want students to learn.  Match writing criteria to content area: clearly communicated science concepts, math concepts, etc.  Used appropriate terminology correctly  Emphasize communicating ideas and organization  Keep grammar, usage, spelling in perspective (don’t over-emphasize)
  • 77. 1 2 3 4 5 Scientific Accuracy Clearly communic ated Quotes & paraphrasing Appropriate evidence Grammar and spelling
  • 78. Resources  Writing Fix has a RAFT prompt builder: RAFTS home page: http://writingfix.com/WAC/RAFT.htm  Writing Fix: Writing across the Curriculum, Number Fix: http://writingfix.com/WAC/NumberFix.htm  Writing Fix: Writing across the Curriculum, Science Fix: http://writingfix.com/WAC/ScienceFix.htm  See Resource list

Editor's Notes

  1. (90% of the students eligible for free and reduced lunch, 90% students from ethnic minority and 90% of the students met or achieved high academic standards)
  2. Many, many reasons to write – not necessarily associated with any discipline. Do these verbs remind you of anything? Depth of knowledge
  3. These verbs can be the reasons students write (and read – and listen and speak)
  4. I have my students write their literacy autobiography. Our math professor used to have student teachers write their math autobiography Share Alex’s “We are biologists” book
  5. Writing frames see example in the packet.
  6. Mentor texts are everywhere. This is just a sample. You can imitate the form, the language, the tone, the content. We did multigenre projects and I created an example on spiders – imitated Diary of a spider – but mine was the spider that had been sent into space to see the impact of 0 gravity on a spider’s ability to build a web. Hello Ocean and Guess who my favorite person is
  7. The important thing about mitosis is… The important thing about the pythagorean theorem is… Do an example of The important book. We used to do this – make a class book. English teachers use it to teach paragraphing
  8. Learning logs Neuron notes
  9. Math Journals are like real life journals Middle School math journal: Setting up interactive math journal Part 1:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kI5ty1Wd364 Setting up interactive math journal Part 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwnfdumoKVI
  10. This is how one teacher kept interactive notebooks
  11. Challenging to find student blogs on web. Many are on protected platforms within a district. Middle school math blogs: http://www.imiddlemath.org/imiddle-students-as-bloggers Kidblog wordpress
  12. I love having students write their own math problems, and they enjoy solving each other’s. One fun way to do this is to have students publish their word problems on Kidblog. Then they can read and solve each other’s problems not only in class (especially with time limits) but also at home.
  13. See “high definition vocabulary” examples. Instead of vocab lists that they all define. They each write about 1 or 2 examples and share them.
  14. Perpendicular poem
  15. Directions
  16. View one of the videos and fill in Moon Hoax chart
  17. Probably the most well known writing across the curriculum strategy. If you google RAFT – you will find plenty of resources. Many benefits to this strategy – has writer consider audience, purpose, etc. Provides for choice. Clear directions. Lots of flexibility with this assignment.
  18. From these generic categories you can create RAFTS relevant to your class.
  19. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-HESLtyGFo
  20. 2. You have to know where you want your students to go and how you’ll know they’ve arrived.
  21. In the packet are more examples of inquiry questions.
  22. Take some time to look at CA CC standards and look at the verbs and/or think about your curriculum. How could you reframe your curriculum as a big question? Discuss in grade alike groups. Look at handout in packet of all the kinds of writing – what would be appropriate?
  23. What questions could be pursued to learn about Ozobots and coding
  24. Examples of Mary’s 3rd graders with the ozobots
  25. At doc camera show examples of forms of writing in a zine – EJ article. Amy Hrin had her 8th graders create a magazine about a topic of interest: skateboarding, snowboarding, fashion, soccer, pro sports figures They could do a book – many did – Outsiders. The point was to explore a topic through many kinds of
  26. Baseball multi-genre
  27. Alex’s 6th grade report – he wrote a research paper – I decided to see if I could do a multigenre project with the information I learned from his research.
  28. Not everything has to be graded. If you can grade everything your students write, they aren’t writing enough.