The document provides guidance on writing scientific papers, including identifying topics from clinical activities, past presentations, or unfinished projects. It recommends selecting a topic of personal interest and finding a mentor. The document outlines the typical sections of a paper and advises beginning writing even before research is complete. It stresses getting feedback early in the writing process and carefully editing for accuracy and style.
Any student in a high level institution will be usually required to write a variety of dissertations, papers and essays throughout the whole period of their studies.
These writing tasks and assignments will cover a myriad of goals, objectives and purposes.
13
Research and Persuasive Essay
Unit Three
Front Range Community College
ENG 122 Spring 2014
Caroline Daniel, Instructor
Table of Contents
Essay assignment ………………………………………………………………………………. 3
Tips for The Beast ………………………………………………………………………………. 6
Topics ………………………………………………………………………………………………… 8
Calendars ……………………………………………………………………………………………. 11
Essay Assignment - Research and Persuasive Essay Paper “The Beast”
This assignment will consist of each step in the writing process.
Brainstorming Due: ________________________________________________________
Outlining Due: ______________________________________________________________
Working Thesis Statement Due: __________________________________________
Argument Proposal Due: __________________________________________________
Portfolio/Annotated Bibliography Due: _________________________________
Rough Draft #1 Due: _______________________________________________________
Rough Draft #2 Due: _______________________________________________________
Conference Date and Time: _______________________________________________
Final Draft Due: December 8, 2014
Assignment: write a 10-page persuasive research paper on the topic of your choice. Your task is to present your opinion on an issue or problem in such a way that your presentation reveals your understanding and attempt to convince others of its efficacy. Unlike argument, the persuasive essay requires an audience, which will consist of your classmates and instructor. The Research and Persuasive Essay (RPE) calls upon the skills of analysis and synthesis, i.e. “breaking” the larger issue into smaller components and incorporating opinions and evidence from sources into your own argument. You will also be using the skills of paraphrasing, summarizing and quoting sources to substantiate and support your position. The subject must be controversial: this assignment requires you to take a position and defend it, and you must be able to address the opposition, i.e., the refutation.
Organization: The essay must follow the classical arrangement of persuasive discourse. Use this guideline while preparing your outline:
1. Introduction
Remain neutral
Remain general, no specific points
Generate reader interest
Avoid overuse of sources in the introduction
2. Background
Give overview of differing opinions
Define terms (if relevant)
Provide history (if relevant)
Provide overview of interest groups
Establish credibility or authority
Introduce thesis
3. Confirmation
Your points (1 idea or point per paragraph)
Support opinion with evidence and facts from sources
Comment on how sources prove or illustrate your position
Avoid using source material, especially quotations, as topic or transitional sentences
Think about transitional words and devices that will move the argument forward seamlessly and fluidly
3. Refutation
Identify opposition by name or title (A.C.L.U., the Catholic Church)
Fairly and acc.
Resume personal statementWe must improve conditions for specia.docxaudeleypearl
Resume personal statement
We must improve conditions for special needs students in Saudi Arabia. I hope to be able to bridge the gap between the traditional Saudi method of education, and the progressive skills and strategies I have learned during my study.
work and experience
· Work at Aljouf University from 2010 until present as a faculty member
qualifications and certificates
· Health awareness program (program on first aid) 2009
· Certificate of attendance and well behaviour from King Faisal University
· Computer course in the office works for three months 2009
· Certificate of attendance and discussion in the seminar for the National Research center for giftedness and creativity
· Certificate of attendance the training course entitled enter Pattern to identify the gifted students in the early years
· Certificate of merit for critical thinking From ELS 2012
· Certificate of appreciation and valuable support to the international women's day of the Saudi student club March 2015
· Certificate of appreciation and valuable support to the Light the night of the of the Saudi student club February 2015
· Certificate of attendance the Understanding the Importance of Collaboration When Building Quality Alliances September of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Thompson Centre Autism Conference September 2016
· Certificate for attendance the Understanding Cognitive Flexibility October of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Who, What, When of Leadership November of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Andragogy in the Classroom December of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Understanding Today's Modern World: The Effects on Leadership February of 2017
· Certificate of attendance the Art of Leadership: Problem Solving & Decision-Making Skills April of 2017
· Certificate of attendance the When "Things" Go Wrong in Leadership August of 2017
· “Concept Mapping and the Research Process” Scholarship of Teaching and Learning Symposium (SOTL) Symposium, (Davis, D.J., Aljafari, R., Alqahtani, A., Alroeshedy, W., Alwazzan, A., Cao, Y., Marshall, L.H., Luebbert, C., Wang, Z., & Fricke, V.), Paul C. Reinert, S.J. Center for Transformative Teaching and Learning, St. Louis University, St. Louis, MO
· Certificate of attendance the Development & Engagement of Integrated Strategies December of 2017
· Certificate of attendance the Advanced Collective Leadership: How to Develop Innovative Plans of Action February of 2018
· Certificate of attendance he CEC 2018 Annual Convention & Expo
· Certificate of attendance the Developing quality Training Programs May of 2018
· “The Experiences of Saudi Students at SLU” (Almalki, S., Alnoim, M., Aljafari, R., & Alwazzan, A.) Atlas Week Annual 17th Conference, Saint Louis University St. Louis, MO, United States of America 04/2018
· Certificate of attendance the Wrights Special Education Law and Advocacy Seminareducation
· Bachelor's degree from King Faisal University 2009 in special education with GPA 4.5 out ...
TIPS FOR A GOOD PROJECT DEFENSE: CONVEYING A GOOD PRESENTATIONEtieneIma123
In the scholastic world, it is a routine that having studied for a while, students are asked to do project research, cause discoveries, and to pick a project topic and develop a quality substance for such a project topic. Most of the time, final year project topics are chosen from a pool of accessible ones by students and endorsed by their supervisors before they initiate to take a shot at it.
Any student in a high level institution will be usually required to write a variety of dissertations, papers and essays throughout the whole period of their studies.
These writing tasks and assignments will cover a myriad of goals, objectives and purposes.
13
Research and Persuasive Essay
Unit Three
Front Range Community College
ENG 122 Spring 2014
Caroline Daniel, Instructor
Table of Contents
Essay assignment ………………………………………………………………………………. 3
Tips for The Beast ………………………………………………………………………………. 6
Topics ………………………………………………………………………………………………… 8
Calendars ……………………………………………………………………………………………. 11
Essay Assignment - Research and Persuasive Essay Paper “The Beast”
This assignment will consist of each step in the writing process.
Brainstorming Due: ________________________________________________________
Outlining Due: ______________________________________________________________
Working Thesis Statement Due: __________________________________________
Argument Proposal Due: __________________________________________________
Portfolio/Annotated Bibliography Due: _________________________________
Rough Draft #1 Due: _______________________________________________________
Rough Draft #2 Due: _______________________________________________________
Conference Date and Time: _______________________________________________
Final Draft Due: December 8, 2014
Assignment: write a 10-page persuasive research paper on the topic of your choice. Your task is to present your opinion on an issue or problem in such a way that your presentation reveals your understanding and attempt to convince others of its efficacy. Unlike argument, the persuasive essay requires an audience, which will consist of your classmates and instructor. The Research and Persuasive Essay (RPE) calls upon the skills of analysis and synthesis, i.e. “breaking” the larger issue into smaller components and incorporating opinions and evidence from sources into your own argument. You will also be using the skills of paraphrasing, summarizing and quoting sources to substantiate and support your position. The subject must be controversial: this assignment requires you to take a position and defend it, and you must be able to address the opposition, i.e., the refutation.
Organization: The essay must follow the classical arrangement of persuasive discourse. Use this guideline while preparing your outline:
1. Introduction
Remain neutral
Remain general, no specific points
Generate reader interest
Avoid overuse of sources in the introduction
2. Background
Give overview of differing opinions
Define terms (if relevant)
Provide history (if relevant)
Provide overview of interest groups
Establish credibility or authority
Introduce thesis
3. Confirmation
Your points (1 idea or point per paragraph)
Support opinion with evidence and facts from sources
Comment on how sources prove or illustrate your position
Avoid using source material, especially quotations, as topic or transitional sentences
Think about transitional words and devices that will move the argument forward seamlessly and fluidly
3. Refutation
Identify opposition by name or title (A.C.L.U., the Catholic Church)
Fairly and acc.
Resume personal statementWe must improve conditions for specia.docxaudeleypearl
Resume personal statement
We must improve conditions for special needs students in Saudi Arabia. I hope to be able to bridge the gap between the traditional Saudi method of education, and the progressive skills and strategies I have learned during my study.
work and experience
· Work at Aljouf University from 2010 until present as a faculty member
qualifications and certificates
· Health awareness program (program on first aid) 2009
· Certificate of attendance and well behaviour from King Faisal University
· Computer course in the office works for three months 2009
· Certificate of attendance and discussion in the seminar for the National Research center for giftedness and creativity
· Certificate of attendance the training course entitled enter Pattern to identify the gifted students in the early years
· Certificate of merit for critical thinking From ELS 2012
· Certificate of appreciation and valuable support to the international women's day of the Saudi student club March 2015
· Certificate of appreciation and valuable support to the Light the night of the of the Saudi student club February 2015
· Certificate of attendance the Understanding the Importance of Collaboration When Building Quality Alliances September of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Thompson Centre Autism Conference September 2016
· Certificate for attendance the Understanding Cognitive Flexibility October of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Who, What, When of Leadership November of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Andragogy in the Classroom December of 2016
· Certificate of attendance the Understanding Today's Modern World: The Effects on Leadership February of 2017
· Certificate of attendance the Art of Leadership: Problem Solving & Decision-Making Skills April of 2017
· Certificate of attendance the When "Things" Go Wrong in Leadership August of 2017
· “Concept Mapping and the Research Process” Scholarship of Teaching and Learning Symposium (SOTL) Symposium, (Davis, D.J., Aljafari, R., Alqahtani, A., Alroeshedy, W., Alwazzan, A., Cao, Y., Marshall, L.H., Luebbert, C., Wang, Z., & Fricke, V.), Paul C. Reinert, S.J. Center for Transformative Teaching and Learning, St. Louis University, St. Louis, MO
· Certificate of attendance the Development & Engagement of Integrated Strategies December of 2017
· Certificate of attendance the Advanced Collective Leadership: How to Develop Innovative Plans of Action February of 2018
· Certificate of attendance he CEC 2018 Annual Convention & Expo
· Certificate of attendance the Developing quality Training Programs May of 2018
· “The Experiences of Saudi Students at SLU” (Almalki, S., Alnoim, M., Aljafari, R., & Alwazzan, A.) Atlas Week Annual 17th Conference, Saint Louis University St. Louis, MO, United States of America 04/2018
· Certificate of attendance the Wrights Special Education Law and Advocacy Seminareducation
· Bachelor's degree from King Faisal University 2009 in special education with GPA 4.5 out ...
TIPS FOR A GOOD PROJECT DEFENSE: CONVEYING A GOOD PRESENTATIONEtieneIma123
In the scholastic world, it is a routine that having studied for a while, students are asked to do project research, cause discoveries, and to pick a project topic and develop a quality substance for such a project topic. Most of the time, final year project topics are chosen from a pool of accessible ones by students and endorsed by their supervisors before they initiate to take a shot at it.
A "con" presentation of something I am really very much "pro". Still, this were the barriers I had to overcome why implementing S. aureus decolonization
Presentation "Give up on VRE" as part of a debate at HIS 2014 (Lyon, France). Clearly not everything in here is my true opinion, but was part of "playing my part".
How many patients does case series should have In comparison to case reports.pdfpubrica101
Pubrica’s team of researchers and writers create scientific and medical research articles, which may be important resources for authors and practitioners. Pubrica medical writers assist you in creating and revising the introduction by alerting the reader to gaps in the chosen study subject. Our professionals understand the order in which the hypothesis topic is followed by the broad subject, the issue, and the backdrop.
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Navigating Challenges: Mental Health, Legislation, and the Prison System in B...Guillermo Rivera
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R3 Stem Cells and Kidney Repair A New Horizon in Nephrology.pptxR3 Stem Cell
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The "ICH Guidelines for Pharmacovigilance" PDF provides a comprehensive overview of the International Council for Harmonisation of Technical Requirements for Pharmaceuticals for Human Use (ICH) guidelines related to pharmacovigilance. These guidelines aim to ensure that drugs are safe and effective for patients by monitoring and assessing adverse effects, ensuring proper reporting systems, and improving risk management practices. The document is essential for professionals in the pharmaceutical industry, regulatory authorities, and healthcare providers, offering detailed procedures and standards for pharmacovigilance activities to enhance drug safety and protect public health.
Antibiotic Stewardship by Anushri Srivastava.pptxAnushriSrivastav
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Antimicrobial Stewardship(AMS) refers to the optimal selection, dosing, and duration of antimicrobial treatment resulting in the best clinical outcome with minimal side effects to the patients and minimal impact on subsequent resistance.
According to the 2019 report, in the US, more than 2.8 million antibiotic-resistant infections occur each year, and more than 35000 people die. In addition to this, it also mentioned that 223,900 cases of Clostridoides difficile occurred in 2017, of which 12800 people died. The report did not include viruses or parasites
VISION
Being proactive
Supporting optimal animal and human health
Exploring ways to reduce overall use of antimicrobials
Using the drugs that prevent and treat disease by killing microscopic organisms in a responsible way
GOAL
to prevent the generation and spread of antimicrobial resistance (AMR). Doing so will preserve the effectiveness of these drugs in animals and humans for years to come.
being to preserve human and animal health and the effectiveness of antimicrobial medications.
to implement a multidisciplinary approach in assembling a stewardship team to include an infectious disease physician, a clinical pharmacist with infectious diseases training, infection preventionist, and a close collaboration with the staff in the clinical microbiology laboratory
to prevent antimicrobial overuse, misuse and abuse.
to minimize the developme
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Monitoring vital signs and physical condition.
Administering medications and treatments.
Performing procedures as directed by doctors.
Assisting with daily living activities (bathing, feeding).
Providing emotional support and pain management.
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Objective: Promote healthy behaviors and educate children, families, and communities about preventive healthcare.
This includes tasks like:
Administering vaccinations.
Providing education on nutrition, hygiene, and development.
Offering breastfeeding and childbirth support.
Counseling families on safety and injury prevention.
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Objective: Collaborate effectively with doctors, social workers, therapists, and other healthcare professionals to ensure coordinated care for children.
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Communicating effectively with healthcare teams.
Identifying and addressing potential risks to child welfare.
Educating families about their child's condition and treatment options.
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Objective: Stay up-to-date on the latest advancements in pediatric healthcare through continuing education and research.
Objective: Contribute to improving the quality of care for children by participating in research initiatives.
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Attending workshops and conferences on pediatric nursing.
Participating in clinical trials related to child health.
Implementing evidence-based practices into their daily routines.
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Artificial Intelligence to Optimize Cardiovascular Therapy
Writing scientific paper
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scie$fic
papers
04-‐11-‐14
prof.
dr.
Andreas
Voss
RUNMC
&
CWZ
Nijmegen
The
Netherlands
www.aricjournal.com
www.biomedcentral.com
¤ A
major
task
you
fear?
Begin
with
small
steps
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2. Wri$ng
scie$fic
papers
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1. Look
around
and
reflect
on
the
ques$ons
that
arise
day
to
day
in
your
clinical
and
educa$onal
ac$vi$es.
Take
notes
and
jot
down
ideas
of
interest.
2. Consider
past
presenta$ons
from
different
venues,
such
as
case
conferences
or
grand
rounds.
Many
of
these
exis$ng
talks
can
be
transformed
into
a
targeted
review
ar$cle
that
might
help
launch
a
more
substan$al
original
research
project.
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N.
Malani
Journal
of
Graduate
Medical
Educa$on,
December
2012
3. Reconsider
those
unfinished,
‘‘back
burner’’
projects,
such
as
preliminary
data
presented
as
a
poster
at
a
mee$ng
but
never
wrien
in
manuscript
form.
4. If
at
all
possible,
select
a
subject
of
personal
interest.
Are
you
willing
to
put
in
the
necessary
$me
reading,
exploring,
and
ul$mately
wri$ng
about
a
par$cular
subject.
Having
a
personal
interest
in
a
topic
can
improve
the
likelihood
of
success
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N.
Malani
Journal
of
Graduate
Medical
Educa$on,
December
2012
5. Iden$fy
a
trusted
colleague
to
help
guide
the
process.
Success
with
wri$ng,
comes
easier
with
good
mentorship.
Having
mul$ple
mentors/
collaborators
with
different
skills
and
perspec$ves
is
useful.
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N.
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Journal
of
Graduate
Medical
Educa$on,
December
2012
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Journal
of
Graduate
Medical
Educa$on,
December
2012
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Journal
of
Graduate
Medical
Educa$on,
December
2012
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papers
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of
Graduate
Medical
Educa$on,
December
2012
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of
Graduate
Medical
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December
2012
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December
2012
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of
Graduate
Medical
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2012
When
star1ng
any
research
project
you
should
(and
can)
already
write
most
of
the
paper:
¤ Research
what
is
done
already
(introduc$on
&
discusssion)
¤ Have
a
look
at
the
methods
used
by
others
(methods)
¤ What
do
I
want
to
“see”
(results)
²
tables
and
graphs
you
would
like
to
see
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4. Wri$ng
scie$fic
papers
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What
journal?
²
Na$onal
versus
interna$onal
²
Specialized
versus
broader
²
Costs
/open
access
²
Impact
factor
versus
“influence”
o
NEJM,
BMJ,
…
have
both
o
Academically
achievable
o
Local
influence
¤ Title
¤ Authors
and
Affilia$on
¤ Abstract
¤ Introduc$on
¤ Methods
¤ Results
¤ Discussion
¤ Acknowledgments
¤ Literature
¤
Write
what
comes
into
your
mind
–
you
may
jump
back
and
forth
between
the
different
sec$ons
¤
Write/take
note
while
you
read
¤
Start
with
a
couple
of
sentences
² Aim
(This
paper
explores
…)
² Method
(This
study
was
conducted
…)
² What’s
new
(This
paper
contributes
to
…)
¤
Examines
/
analyses
¤
Reports
on
/
Outlines
¤
Argues
/
jus$fies
/
recommands
¤
Compares
/
contrasts
¤
Discusses
/
demonstrates
¤
Shows
/
refutes
¤
Highlights
/
illustrates
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scie$fic
papers
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¤
Start
with
…
²
Aim:
This
paper
explores
…
²
Main
argument:
In
this
paper
we
argue
…
²
Method:
The
study
was
conducted
…
²
What’s
new:
This
paper
contributes
to
…
¤
Put
a
lot
of
energy
into
the
“Abstract”!
²
This
is
your
first
impression
²
Make
it
interes$ng
²
Ensure
correct
use
of
language
¤
You
don’t
have
to
wait
un$l
you
think
your
first
dram
is
perfect
à
get
advice/comments
early
on
¤
Style
is
(in
part)
a
maer
of
taste
à
you
don’t
have
to
follow
all
suggested
changes
with
regard
to
“style”
¤
Do
I
have
enough
(new)
literature?
¤
Is
my
data
sufficient
to
the
claims
I
am
making
¤
Am
I
being
sufficiently
specula$ve
¤
Did
I
follow
the
authors’
instruc$ons
¤
Did
all
co-‐authors
contribute
to
the
manuscript
¤
If
not
100%
sure,
never
start
with:
“This
is
the
first
case
…”
¤
First
thing
reviewers
might
do
is
to
prove
you
wrong
Never
copy
&
paste.
Editors
and
reviewers
will
recognize
the
change
in
style
and
start
to
distrust
even
your
own
text
Lile/sloppy
mistakes
make
a
big/bad
impression
!
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6. Wri$ng
scie$fic
papers
04-‐11-‐14
Dear
Dr.
Voss,
Dear author,
Thank you for submitting your
manuscript. We are “sorry” to
say that we could not accepted
your attempt of an article.
Please find attached a rejection
letter for the present and your
future submission.
¤
Outrage
&
unprofessional
comments
¤
Incomprehension
&
complaints
to
colleagues
¤
More
outrage
¤
One
or
two
of
the
comments
might
make
sense
¤
There’s
a
bit
of
truth
in
that
one
¤
I’ll
just
have
a
go
at
doing
what
they
said
to
do
¤
Actually,
the
paper
is
a
whole
lot
beer
for
all
those
revisions
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