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Introduction to imagery at GCSE
LO: To understand how to find good examples of imagery
To understand how to talk about the effects of imagery
Date:
The room buzzed with energy and everything
appeared to be moving slightly as if to echo the
frenetic hum of cheerful voices. Balloons gently
swayed in the breeze, bunting swished above the
heads as couples danced or chatted with animation.
Even the edges of the brightly patterned table cloths
lifted as dresses swept by.
STARTER:
Pick one quote that shows a celebratory atmosphere
Pick one quote that shows a relaxed atmosphere
Pick one quote that shows an excited atmosphere
Extension 1: underline the words/phrases that show
this atmosphere
Extension 2: what do the words you have underlined
make you think of?
Thinking question: What skills are you using? How will this help you in the exam?
What is imagery?
How will you make sure you pick the
interesting examples?
In your exam you must choose the BEST examples from the text. We will practice how to do this.
Imagery is:
Anything unusual or that stands out within the context
Extra description
Writing that appeals to your senses
Sometimes techniques are used, such as similes, but not always so you don’t need to ‘technique spot’.
Can you identify the imagery in this extract? Is there
any imagery in your starter answer?
The room buzzed with energy and everything
appeared to be moving slightly as if to echo the
furious hum of cheerful voices. Balloons gently
swayed in the breeze, bunting swished above the
heads as couples danced or chatted with
animation. Even the edges of the brightly
patterned table cloths lifted as dresses swept by.
Explaining the effect of imagery
Now you know
you can find
imagery!
Next, you need
to be able to talk
about it.
Why has it been
used?
What is the
effect?
Explaining the effect of imagery
The room buzzed with energy and everything appeared to be
moving slightly as if to echo the frenetic hum of cheerful voices.
Balloons gently swayed in the breeze, bunting swished above the
heads as couples danced or chatted with animation. Even the
edges of the brightly patterned table cloths lifted as dresses
swept by.
The word ‘buzzed’ means/is…
It makes it seem as if the room…
It makes me think of…
It reinforces the…atmosphere because
TASK: In pairs, finish the
sentences. Be as detailed
as you can.
INDIVIDUAL TASK: Choose two more
examples and explain them. Think of
everything we have discussed so far.
Plenary task
• Describe one of the scenarios below:
• A boat ride along a river
• A wedding
• A football game
You must:
� Write a minimum of one paragraph
� Use punctuation accurately
� Write for 2 of the senses
� Use 3 examples of imagery
You should:
� Write for 3 of the senses
� Use 4 examples of imagery
� Group similar ideas together and develop into
2 paragraphs
You could:
� Use interesting and unusual vocabulary
� Challenge yourself to think of interesting ways
to describe a person, an object, an action or
the scenery
� Use punctuation to reinforce the mood or
atmosphere
What do you
want your
reader to
visualize?
What kind
atmosphere
are you trying
to create?
How do you
want the
reader to
feel?
Imagery Question: Exam
LO: To understand how to writers achieve effects
Date:
STARTER:
Make a personal checklist to remind yourself of how to
identify imagery and how to write about it.
Extension: share your list with a partner.
Question 2d (imagery): what
questions do you have?
What will the
question look
like?
How many
marks are
awarded?
Which skills
are tested?
What kind of
extract will
we be given? How do I approach the
question?
What will my
answer look like?
Question 2d example
Re-read paragraphs 5 and 6.
Paragraph 5 begins ‘And then the world began shutting down...’ and is about the effects of the blizzard.
Paragraph 6 begins ‘Then it was Sunday, so Dad said get ready for mass ...’ and is about their own experience in
the snow.
Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs.
Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should
include the use of imagery.
Write about 200 to 300 words.
Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer.
As we progress through the lesson, think of how
your questions are being answered. How
confident do you feel at each different stage?
Task: write down any queries or concerns you
have as we go, we will answer these together at
the end of the lesson.
Question 2 steps
1.Read Q2d (language question)
2.Underline the paragraphs that you will
focus on, then circle them on the text.
Re-read paragraphs 5 and 6.
Paragraph 5 begins ‘And then the world began shutting down...’ and is about the effects of the blizzard.
Paragraph 6 begins ‘Then it was Sunday, so Dad said get ready for mass ...’ and is about their own experience in the snow.
Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs.
Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery.
Write about 200 to 300 words.
Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer.
Top tip – you will be
given clues about what
the focus is in the
question. This will help
you to make your choices
as well as explain them.
Do step 1&2 NOW
What is the focus? What will you be looking for?
Remember!
At this stage in the exam you will
already have read the text and
answered comprehension questions on
it. Therefore you will have a good
understanding of what it is about.
Important things to focus on:
• What it is about
• What happens
• Who is involved
• Tone/atmosphere
Question 2 steps
1. Read Q2d (language question)
2. Underline the paragraphs that you will focus on,
then circle them on the text.
3. Go through each paragraph and underline
interesting words and phrases
4. Go back and tick the best 3 in each paragraph
5. Write your answer
• Choose quotes that:
• You understand
• Are interesting
• Include imagery
• You can say a lot
about
Remind yourself what this is?
Do this for (a) – paragraph 5
Re-read paragraphs 5 and 6.
Paragraph 5 begins ‘And then the world began shutting down...’ and is about the effects
of the blizzard.
And then the world began shutting down. The airports, which was
bad because Mom was in Toronto, visiting her sister. The schools,
which was great for the first day, and good for the second, and
then less good and less good yet. Because the roads were
impossible; the fridge, emptying. Does this smell OK to
you? Couldn’t watch Little House because Channel 5 covered the
blizzard all day. A motorist, dead of exposure in a stranded car. A
man, dead of a heart attack while shoveling snow; ambulance
couldn’t reach him. Coat drive, shelters for the homeless. Check in
on your elderly neighbors, folks. If you can get out, that is. Amtrak
trains abandoned. Hundreds of cars lining the highway, buried by
snow, white lumps pierced by antennas. Family of five, killed when
their roof collapsed. We were a family of four, but with Mom far
away, we were only three. I got out of the bathtub to answer her
crackling long-distance call.
Move around the room and talk to as many people as you can! Share your choices and try and narrow
them down to the best 3. You have 6 minutes!
Questions to ask each other:
• Is it relevant to the question?
• Is it imagery?
• Why is it imagery?
• What does it show?
• Is it the best example?
• Why did you choose it?
Plenary
• Next lesson we will start to discuss the effect of the imagery and also look
at the mark scheme.
• How do you feel at the end of this lesson?
• Which questions have been answered?
• Which questions still need answering? Let’s see if we can find answers
together !
Thank you for visiting Ms Duckworth’s Classroom! I hope you enjoy the
free resource. Please feel free to let me know how you used them and if
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Writer's effect question.pptx

  • 1. Introduction to imagery at GCSE LO: To understand how to find good examples of imagery To understand how to talk about the effects of imagery Date: The room buzzed with energy and everything appeared to be moving slightly as if to echo the frenetic hum of cheerful voices. Balloons gently swayed in the breeze, bunting swished above the heads as couples danced or chatted with animation. Even the edges of the brightly patterned table cloths lifted as dresses swept by. STARTER: Pick one quote that shows a celebratory atmosphere Pick one quote that shows a relaxed atmosphere Pick one quote that shows an excited atmosphere Extension 1: underline the words/phrases that show this atmosphere Extension 2: what do the words you have underlined make you think of? Thinking question: What skills are you using? How will this help you in the exam?
  • 2. What is imagery? How will you make sure you pick the interesting examples? In your exam you must choose the BEST examples from the text. We will practice how to do this. Imagery is: Anything unusual or that stands out within the context Extra description Writing that appeals to your senses Sometimes techniques are used, such as similes, but not always so you don’t need to ‘technique spot’.
  • 3. Can you identify the imagery in this extract? Is there any imagery in your starter answer? The room buzzed with energy and everything appeared to be moving slightly as if to echo the furious hum of cheerful voices. Balloons gently swayed in the breeze, bunting swished above the heads as couples danced or chatted with animation. Even the edges of the brightly patterned table cloths lifted as dresses swept by.
  • 4. Explaining the effect of imagery Now you know you can find imagery! Next, you need to be able to talk about it. Why has it been used? What is the effect?
  • 5. Explaining the effect of imagery The room buzzed with energy and everything appeared to be moving slightly as if to echo the frenetic hum of cheerful voices. Balloons gently swayed in the breeze, bunting swished above the heads as couples danced or chatted with animation. Even the edges of the brightly patterned table cloths lifted as dresses swept by. The word ‘buzzed’ means/is… It makes it seem as if the room… It makes me think of… It reinforces the…atmosphere because TASK: In pairs, finish the sentences. Be as detailed as you can. INDIVIDUAL TASK: Choose two more examples and explain them. Think of everything we have discussed so far.
  • 6. Plenary task • Describe one of the scenarios below: • A boat ride along a river • A wedding • A football game You must: � Write a minimum of one paragraph � Use punctuation accurately � Write for 2 of the senses � Use 3 examples of imagery You should: � Write for 3 of the senses � Use 4 examples of imagery � Group similar ideas together and develop into 2 paragraphs You could: � Use interesting and unusual vocabulary � Challenge yourself to think of interesting ways to describe a person, an object, an action or the scenery � Use punctuation to reinforce the mood or atmosphere What do you want your reader to visualize? What kind atmosphere are you trying to create? How do you want the reader to feel?
  • 7. Imagery Question: Exam LO: To understand how to writers achieve effects Date: STARTER: Make a personal checklist to remind yourself of how to identify imagery and how to write about it. Extension: share your list with a partner.
  • 8. Question 2d (imagery): what questions do you have? What will the question look like? How many marks are awarded? Which skills are tested? What kind of extract will we be given? How do I approach the question? What will my answer look like?
  • 9. Question 2d example Re-read paragraphs 5 and 6. Paragraph 5 begins ‘And then the world began shutting down...’ and is about the effects of the blizzard. Paragraph 6 begins ‘Then it was Sunday, so Dad said get ready for mass ...’ and is about their own experience in the snow. Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer. As we progress through the lesson, think of how your questions are being answered. How confident do you feel at each different stage? Task: write down any queries or concerns you have as we go, we will answer these together at the end of the lesson.
  • 10. Question 2 steps 1.Read Q2d (language question) 2.Underline the paragraphs that you will focus on, then circle them on the text. Re-read paragraphs 5 and 6. Paragraph 5 begins ‘And then the world began shutting down...’ and is about the effects of the blizzard. Paragraph 6 begins ‘Then it was Sunday, so Dad said get ready for mass ...’ and is about their own experience in the snow. Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer. Top tip – you will be given clues about what the focus is in the question. This will help you to make your choices as well as explain them. Do step 1&2 NOW What is the focus? What will you be looking for? Remember! At this stage in the exam you will already have read the text and answered comprehension questions on it. Therefore you will have a good understanding of what it is about. Important things to focus on: • What it is about • What happens • Who is involved • Tone/atmosphere
  • 11. Question 2 steps 1. Read Q2d (language question) 2. Underline the paragraphs that you will focus on, then circle them on the text. 3. Go through each paragraph and underline interesting words and phrases 4. Go back and tick the best 3 in each paragraph 5. Write your answer • Choose quotes that: • You understand • Are interesting • Include imagery • You can say a lot about Remind yourself what this is? Do this for (a) – paragraph 5 Re-read paragraphs 5 and 6. Paragraph 5 begins ‘And then the world began shutting down...’ and is about the effects of the blizzard.
  • 12. And then the world began shutting down. The airports, which was bad because Mom was in Toronto, visiting her sister. The schools, which was great for the first day, and good for the second, and then less good and less good yet. Because the roads were impossible; the fridge, emptying. Does this smell OK to you? Couldn’t watch Little House because Channel 5 covered the blizzard all day. A motorist, dead of exposure in a stranded car. A man, dead of a heart attack while shoveling snow; ambulance couldn’t reach him. Coat drive, shelters for the homeless. Check in on your elderly neighbors, folks. If you can get out, that is. Amtrak trains abandoned. Hundreds of cars lining the highway, buried by snow, white lumps pierced by antennas. Family of five, killed when their roof collapsed. We were a family of four, but with Mom far away, we were only three. I got out of the bathtub to answer her crackling long-distance call. Move around the room and talk to as many people as you can! Share your choices and try and narrow them down to the best 3. You have 6 minutes! Questions to ask each other: • Is it relevant to the question? • Is it imagery? • Why is it imagery? • What does it show? • Is it the best example? • Why did you choose it?
  • 13. Plenary • Next lesson we will start to discuss the effect of the imagery and also look at the mark scheme. • How do you feel at the end of this lesson? • Which questions have been answered? • Which questions still need answering? Let’s see if we can find answers together !
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Editor's Notes

  1. Extract taken from: I Survived the Blizzard of ’79  Essay - Beth Ann Fennelly